Devakshi FF - The Intended Disguise Chapter 15 & 16 Page114 update - Page 37

Chapter- 7

Hot...n bold one...

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Hot...n bold one...

I loved the way they share their thoughts n feelings...

They still carried a month tym was a proof of their understanding, care n importance n respect for eachother...

Dev to matlab seedha bol diya...

U r slaying girl...

Eagerly waiting for Ansh ...

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Res...

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Chapter - 6

I loved the Dev - Ansh bonding...

N the way he questioned Sona...

Bijoy as usual hyper..

N Dev Sona assuring gesture was clearly visualized...

N that passionate part was not in detail...

So m lucky enough to not wait by a passionate cliffhanger n continue with the next few parts at one go...

😃

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Chapter- 7

I too expected a passionate n hot update...

But this too was hot, as Dev was described as drained in rain n later shirtless...

Their convo was exactly like their character...

I can imagine Sona controlling herself...

But loved Dev teasing trick...

Alas he made Sona express her heart n feelings n love for him...

Loved their ignoring loving too...

Had started with a thought of making it passionate one
But realised that i had started off with an instance much before they started living inn
Which was not actually what i had thought off in the beginning
So decided to carry it onn to the next part
Glad u liked it 😃

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Hot...n bold one...

I loved the way they share their thoughts n feelings...

They still carried a month tym was a proof of their understanding, care n importance n respect for eachother...

Dev to matlab seedha bol diya...

U r slaying girl...

Eagerly waiting for Ansh ...

Thanku for ur comment dear
Devakshi wanted to consummate their relationship but were not very eager to do so
Its just that they didn't want this thing to be forced
It should be a casual progress right

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

For Chapter - 8

Got it dear 👍🏼

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Now for chapter - 9..

Loved their morning convo...

But most I loved Dev's words..

How are U feeling love...

N loved reply too...

So ruthna manana has started...

Kya fight thi...

But I loved that too...

Their fight r treat to watch...

Their last firing was awsum...

But both wer right...

So looking forward how they end...

Hope something passionate...

U din like my res post...

But I commented further...

Ok now i will start with my detailed comments
First of all thanks a lot from the bottom of my heart for ur detailed comments on each of my chapter
Matlab aap itne thoughtfull ho ki aapne actually time nikala to go through all the parts n write down the imp points from each of them...itna patience...hats off
Dev asking sona how she was feeling after their first time had to be there ...gentleman behavior trait u know
Them fighting like kids has always been their forte n we love it

Dev forgot Sona's birthday n she's angry wid him
Hona bhi chahiye...haq hai uska chahiye use
Ab agle part mein dev sona ko manayega aur bohot kuch hoga
Stay tuned
Btw even I'm waiting for Ansh ki entry
But I'm scared whether u ppl might like it or not as it may not be the conventional way as you guys must have imagined
It won't be the usual gayu types update

Ps: sorry for not liking your res post
Blame my phone whatever i like yeh apne aap se unlike kar deta hai
Jai ho phone baba ki

Pps: I really hope you guys like the next part lekin agar pasand na aaye to bhi iss gkb ko comment karke ameer jaroor bana dena

Originally posted by: Chandniyati

Now for chapter - 9..

Loved their morning convo...

But most I loved Dev's words..

How are U feeling love...

N loved reply too...

So ruthna manana has started...

Kya fight thi...

But I loved that too...

Their fight r treat to watch...

Their last firing was awsum...

But both wer right...

So looking forward how they end...

Hope something passionate...

U din like my res post...

But I commented further...

@bold
Agar pata hota ki like na karne se tujhe itna gussa chadhega ki itni detailed comment milenge mujhe to aage se tere posts pe no like
😉