OS - I NEED YOU FOR MYSELF!!! part 3 pg 22 Sept 03 - Page 2

That was just sooo bloody good man...i don't even think i have the right words to praise it...hats off to you man... every line had soo much in it...you drove passion worth millions with your words...the fall of the mighty dev dikshit and how...the picture was there in front of my eyes and changing as that amazing pace at which the story was moving ...

Its so intense... Specially the last para... I loved it..

It was incredible.I can picture dev through your words.loved it.

Damn it Sujatha. You made me cry yaar...Its brilliant and you just killed it.

Dil toot gaya mera Dev ko dekh kar...
If the writers take even a pale imitation of what you wrote, it still would be heart wrenching for the viewers to see Shaheer portraying that broken man.. Buckets and tubs of tears would be flown in those episodes... You have written THAT good...
But why did you stop it here?
Didi, you need to write further, I can't keep on hanging there until the writers have mercy on us...
Please for Heaven's sake, do write it further... Atleast another part... And I am not taking your "OS means one shot thing"... This is a very humble request from your younger sister, and you cannot dishearten me... I want the next part...

I have been starving for your writing for the past 8 months, and now I want it... You have to fulfill my request... Please! I beg before you... 😭

read it and omg...no words to express...and the fallen dev dixit...his reactions and pain still is in front of my eyes...and ur os...I have read many os...and ur os...is one of the best...and if it's shown in our show...then shaheer ...his expressions and actions...he can do it in a splendid way and he will be the...grt...and very eager to see...the shaheer performance when dev came to know abt her mother in future...and how she broke down in front of her eyes...and also supriya ji also will nail it to core...

that was great...ishwari is so so selfish...

Wowowowothats simply awsomeeerre yar..really wish yo see this in show...plz plz plz cvs do read this we want this scenes in show yar..

Awesome!

Can this be somehow passed on to Mamta madam. I want atleast some part like breaking the photo frame to be included in the actual show. It would be an episode to watch I tell ya.

Please do write more. Words can't express enough appreciation to your written os. Simply Brilliant.