The Nights : DevAkshi OS *NOTE 2 @pg. 20* - Page 20

Perfect characterization of both sona and dev. I could imagine them saying exact dialogues. Very well written. Thank you so much for your effort. I thought this was the uncensored version but I read in some replies that this is censored version 😛 you should write some scenes for our serials,it will be our pleasure to see those scenes. Can you please pm me uncensored version, will help me get through remaining sunday until next episode comes on air.

HOT HOTTER HOTTEST
for all 3 chaps
cont soon
next time se ac on karke padhungi

Bhaisaab...kya censored kya uncensored

Meri hawaiya uda li iss uncensored version ne 😆
The hopeless romantic bhukkad in me took 2 hours in complete andhera to visualise each and every word and o boy!! I was getting those jitters, giggles, goosebumps readinf it.
To start with it...pehle hi Bali jagah sunte hi meri expectations ne mere gutter mind ko bulawa de diyA 😆

And then wen i started..initially I was like uff kuchh karo bhi ab..bali mein sanskaar tyaag do thodi der 😆 😆 get into some action 😳

And den it came

Wow ...My heart was jumping from inside..

This is yet another a beautiful piece of writing.. 👏

Again I jst loved how u keppt it soo close to Dev and Sona's character..how they share those lite moments of fun in between their romance..how slowly they take the things forward..
I literally had the 2 of them in front of my eyes doing these for real 😳 😆

The tatoo part was soo adorable...how Dev teases her of getting the tatoo at a place where she needed to undress to show him ..reminded me of that scene ..tumhe mujhe dekh k kuchh hota hai 😳

N dat tatoo on dev wen she sees reminded me of dat scene..aap hot hai 😳

Jst not able to get over it...
This one literally made me crave for more and I thought to myself ..how amazing it wud b if tgey hv an uncensored version for our gutter minds after 11 pm ...gearing all time soaring trp's 😆 😆
Everyone drooling over it...
Sanskaar ?? Wo kya hote hai 😆 😆

Isko padne k baad ek kiss tumko dene ko b banta hai 😆 ..u naughty mind 😉

Originally posted by: dikshat

Bhaisaab...kya censored kya uncensored

Meri hawaiya uda li iss uncensored version ne 😆
The hopeless romantic bhukkad in me took 2 hours in complete andhera to visualise each and every word and o boy!! I was getting those jitters, giggles, goosebumps readinf it.
To start with it...pehle hi Bali jagah sunte hi meri expectations ne mere gutter mind ko bulawa de diyA 😆

And then wen i started..initially I was like uff kuchh karo bhi ab..bali mein sanskaar tyaag do thodi der 😆 😆 get into some action 😳

And den it came

Wow ...My heart was jumping from inside..

This is yet another a beautiful piece of writing.. 👏

Again I jst loved how u keppt it soo close to Dev and Sona's character..how they share those lite moments of fun in between their romance..how slowly they take the things forward..
I literally had the 2 of them in front of my eyes doing these for real 😳 😆

The tatoo part was soo adorable...how Dev teases her of getting the tatoo at a place where she needed to undress to show him ..reminded me of that scene ..tumhe mujhe dekh k kuchh hota hai 😳

N dat tatoo on dev wen she sees reminded me of dat scene..aap hot hai 😳

Jst not able to get over it...
This one literally made me crave for more and I thought to myself ..how amazing it wud b if tgey hv an uncensored version for our gutter minds after 11 pm ...gearing all time soaring trp's 😆 😆
Everyone drooling over it...
Sanskaar ?? Wo kya hote hai 😆 😆

Isko padne k baad ek kiss tumko dene ko b banta hai 😆 ..u naughty mind 😉

Originally posted by: _RS_

Aapke comment ne toh dil khush kar ditta😃

Dil garden garden ho gaya😃

And haa 11p.m uncensored version.. up for it..

😳😳

Abhi toh wese yeh log Disney ya Pogo tk b nai pohche h literally😆Disney pe b I remember bht kisses dikhate the, when I used to eatch it

Abhi toh yeh wahi ni pohche.. par koi ni hume surprise pasand h😃

Disney junior characters have no clue abt sanskaar 😆

Loved all the 3 parts😊
Do send me the uncensored part as well 😊

Hottt piece..

Originally posted by: _RS_

<font color="#9933ff">NOTE 2 : Hey peeps. I've pm'ed most of you all who asked for the whole update.</font>

<font color="#9933ff">I hope you've received it. If you have, then whenever you go through it. Let me know about your responses and reactions in the comment section of this post.</font>

<font color="#9933ff">I've messaged most of you, I'm sorry if I messaged you twice or if you didn't receive the update.</font>

<font color="#9933ff">Do let me know if you haven't received it. Or if someone else is interested in it.</font>

<font color="#9933ff">To those who don't know what I'm talking about then pls check the Note at pg. 13</font>

<font color="#9933ff">Thanks.😃</font>

Radhika om it to me too pls

loved all three stories... Amazingly written 👏 do PM me if you write more stories.. & I want the Uncensored version too 😃😆

Loved loved loved...