Devakshi FF: Changes in live (Updated next chapter i.e. chapter 16)

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: rimjhim_rims
Thanks friends.
Actually everywhere Ishwari is negative or Grey in my previous FF also. But i think for a change make her positive and focus on Devakshi relationship.

Cool...please update soon ...we are eagerly waiting

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Asif

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Nice start dear
Loved it
Do pm me plz when u update next
Thanks

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purnima17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Really very very nice pls pls update soon

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404_NotFound

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Wow I'm loving this story...I always admired Ishwari and Sona''s bond shown in the intial episodes. .glad to see whole family pplanning to bring them close .. you are a amazing writer ...and you update frequently too...I love reading your stories...please continue

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surbharati

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Beautiful...I am not able to stop smile on my face...I wish this was real at least with one member apart from Dev...please please...pretty please update the next part soon

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

When are you going to update the next part ?

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kajal bobade

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

this ff is awesome...loved the concept...ishwariji is so sweet in this ff...kash show me bhi aisa hi hota...love the bonding of sona and dixit sisters...pls continue soon can't wait for the nxt part...

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

what a plan...keep the drivers away...

This Ishwari avatar is superb...

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Hi , when are you going to update the next part ? pls do it soon...eagerly waiting..

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WeRockTheWorld

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Ahaaa...cool...while I was reading I had this smile on my face all thru out ..So nice ..very interesting and light reading . Would love to see their love blossom Please update the next chapter soon

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