Devakshi FF: Changes in live (Updated next chapter i.e. chapter 16)

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

Rims u are back with ur new story..!!eagerly luking forwad to it... :D

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Snehavinaya

@Snehavinaya

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

I wish it was like this in the show also.
Why people won't accept good or what ?
Very nice!! Please update soon!!

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WeRockTheWorld

@WeRockTheWorld

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Hey ...nice one ...and I am glad Ishu darling is nice in this one and is the cupid 😉..please write soon and a request , when you post the next chapter please send me a PM.

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rimjhim_rims

@rimjhim_rims

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Thank you guys.

Sure I will.

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Erian

@Erian

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

So so glad to see you back with a new FF. 🤗

Superb start. Waiting to see how this sweet Ishwari manages to ignite the flames of love between these two. Continue soon dear.

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Ishwari being like a normal mom. No jealousy. Love it! A breath of fresh air. Go for it

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Ketaki

@kcharekar

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi rimjim,
I loved it! You have written it at such a right time when we really need such beautiful love story. So happy that you came up with such a story. And offcourse it's written so well. I live your stories and have been silent reader. Thanks a ton dear for writing this one. When the episodes make us cry your story will make us smile.
Loads of love to you dear. Muah!!