DEVAKSHI SS - WILL NEVER LET YOU GO[PART 4 ON PG 17 26/08]

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adi35

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Very interesting SS
continue soon
u didn't bore us
actually i am excited for the next part

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Intresting..eagerly wtng 4 next part...update soon..

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Gayatri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Whoa!!!!!!great start ...pls do update soon 😊

Edited by sinalfan1 - 9 years ago

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: gmgi
Intriguing. Why is Dev doing this? Any clues?😆
Please continue soon😳

Thank you so much.
Glad you are finding the start to be intriguing.
No ...no clues 😆
Will continue soon

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: JazzyM
The shock reaction of Sona. The conversation between the two. You were superb. No idea what's going on but you have quipped the readers interest. Good job

Thank you so much .
Glad you liked the update.
Yes that's exactly I wanted...to keep reader's interest in this story.
I have written much sweet and cute works so far. So just wanted to try some other. genre

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independent

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

OMG Dev with nats.. Can't believe this..

Continue soon...

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Interesting ...now I am eager to know why he did that ..I am sure no women would like to see her husband in that state...pls continue...eagerly waiting ...

Thank you 😊 Glad you are finding the story interesting.

Will continue soon

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: gdfss
Nice update..
Seems to be interesting..
Looking forward for the next part

Thank you so much😊

Glad you liked it

Will update soon.

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: AfiChanAC_CA
Very very nice👍🏼

Thanks a lot😳

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: Erian
Ooo .. A cheater Dev? 😕 Uhuh my heart not believing the outer face of the story so eagerly waiting for your update where you're going to reveal the truth. 😃
Update soon dear.

Hello there,

Thank you for reading and letting me know your thoughts.

Will update soon and hope not to disappoint you.