DEVAKSHI SS - WILL NEVER LET YOU GO[PART 4 ON PG 17 26/08] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

Please do write. We need to have more stories from talented writers to help us in this heartbreaking phase of the show. Please update soon.😳


Thanks dear.
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WILL NEVER LET YOU GO



|- PART ONE - |


"Don't...don't you dare to touch me with your disgusting hands...stay the hell away from me"Sona screamed backing off from Dev. She was extremely infuriated. Her eyes were burning in rage, anger and fury setting the entire atmosphere around on fire of her burning gaze.





"Sona listen..." Dev tried calming her down stepping closer to her. But she was too antagonistic to listen to his anything at that point of time. She looked more broken than angry. Sona was a very calm and composed woman. She hardly even talks in loud voice with anyone. But he had embittered her to the extent that she was burning in pain and disgust.




"Sona please listen sweetheart...I can explain" Dev pleaded her to give him one chance to explain. It was breaking him seeing her in extremely painful state.





Turning around, her voice echoed in the hall, "There is nothing left to listen Mr. Dev Dixit...you did what you wanted to...now I will do what I want to." Her tone reflected the pain of betrayal.




Dev was staring at her back. "What do you mean?" he asked hoping that she would not do what he feared for.




"I want divorce" she made a statement without any emotions in her tone. The pain she was feeling wasn't letting her to breathe.




His legs trembled as he heard her demanding a divorce from him. His wife...his Sona...who used to say that she could not bear even a minute away from him...who used to say she loved him more than anything else...who was ready to fight the whole world to stay with him...was now asking a divorce from him? Was no longer wished to stay with him? It just broke everything within him.




She wiped the constant falling tears from her eyes. She could not afford to present herself weak in front of him. She turned back to him and gazed at him. His face had turned pale. He indeed looked terribly hurt and broken.




For a moment, she hated herself for his condition but she was brought back to reality soon as her mind played the flashes of what he had done with her. No...she could never forgive him...for hurting her...for breaking her...for breaking her trust...for betraying her...for disgusting their relation...for disrespecting her love.




"I am going Dev"she said before making her way towards their bedroom to collect her clothes and other things.




She couldn't move further being stopped by his hold on her wrist.



"Wait" he said calmly.



Sona started struggling to get free from his grip. He tightened it more saying, "I said wait" His eyes met her. If she would have been his previous Sona, she could have hugged him right that moment burying her peace into him and embracing his worries within her.



"You will not go anywhere" he said firmly still holding her in his grip.



"I can't stay with you"she said emotionlessly without looking at him.




He laughed bitterly. "Says the one who can't bear even a minute of separation from me...Anyways, you will not go anywhere...if you want I will shift to guest room but you will stay here...in this house only"



"You are no one to force me"



"I am your husband...we are yet to be get divorced" he reminded her that they were still married and rightfully and lawfully he was still her husband.



"We will soon get" she uttered avoiding his gaze while trying to free her hand.



"I will not let you go away from me" he told her with a confident smile on his face kissing back of her palm.



"You will forcefully keep me here?" she jerked his hand before asking.



"I can never force anything on you sweetheart...you yourself will come back running into my arms" he was way much sure that he would never let her to walk away from his life. He had faith on their love that no matter what but the vows they had took together around fire, they would never break them. They cannot...neither he can nor she.




"In your dreams" she said walking away from him.



"Time to convert dreams into reality sweetheart" he said making her to turn back at him. She started at him for a moment feeling his words.




Soon coming back to reality, she ran upstairs in her room. Closing the door, she walked near the bed. She took their photo frame caressing their photo with her fingers making it faint due to tears drops falling over it.

"Why did you do this? Why? Did I fail to love you? Did I fail to fulfil my duties as a wife? Whyyy?" she screamed in agony felling down on her knees. Today she had lost her everything. He was her life. He was her entire universe. It was he she was living for and today she had lost her reason to live.


Walking towards the wall, Dev roamed his fingers over their portrait in the hall. "I am sorry Sona...I know you are hurt a lot because of me...but trust your Dev, sweetheart...Your Dev only and only loves you Sona...I can never and will never betray you...I know what I did, had broke you but trust me I had no other options...I had to do it."


FLASHBACK:



Sona entered pushing the door of hotel room and her heart broke into millions of pieces by the sight she witnessed. Her eyes caught her husband there, lying on the hotel bed on top of Natasha.



Dev instantly got up seeing Sona there. Natasha gave an annoyed look to Sona saying, "What is she doing here baby? Didn't you tell her that today is our day? Ask her to leave right now...I dont want any disturbances"



Dev looked helplessly at Sona. "Sona leave" he said keeping hard stone on his heart.



Sona stood there staring in disbelief at her husband who was lying there in some other's woman's arms and now was asking her...his wife, to leave from there to let them alone to spend their time together. He cursed himself for saying that to her but he had to do that.



Sona ran from there holding tears in her eyes leaving behind a helpless Dev.


After an hour, when he came back home, he saw Sona standing there...lost into their photos hanging all over the wall.



FLASHBACK ENDS:



"I know Sona what have had I done, is not forgivable in your eyes and you are absolutely right in your place. But you have to trust your Dev, Sona...you have to trust your Dev...I will gain your trust back Sona...I will gain you back and that's your husband's promise to you wifey" A very determined Dev made a promise to himself.




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THIS IS IT FOR THE FIRST PART. HOPE I DIDN'T BORE YOU.

DO SHARE YOUR THOUGHTS. I WOULD LOVE TO HAVE THEM.







Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Intriguing. Why is Dev doing this? Any clues?😆
Please continue soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The shock reaction of Sona. The conversation between the two. You were superb. No idea what's going on but you have quipped the readers interest. Good job
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Interesting ...now I am eager to know why he did that ..I am sure no women would like to see her husband in that state...pls continue...eagerly waiting ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Nice update..
Seems to be interesting..
Looking forward for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Ooo .. A cheater Dev? 😕 Uhuh my heart not believing the outer face of the story so eagerly waiting for your update where you're going to reveal the truth. 😃
Update soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
OMG
Cheater Dev
New concept
Let's wait for second part
Waise welcome back to the forum
Tum toh gayab hogya the
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Did Dev actually cheated???
I mean whatever the situation was, he cannot do it with any other woman...he said he had no other option...😡..
Pls update soon...No woman can bear this...He actually asked Sona to leave them to continue with what they were doing...Really...don't bring this angle
If Dev actually...I dont want to even imagine that he made physical relations with Natasha...And if he did...how can he expect Sona to come back to him...

You making me cry😭
Pls dear, continue soon...
Edited by Sharica - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Very nice update...Interesting SS👏
hi harshada...you are one of d reason(other than devakshi)
why i joined dis forum...because ur posts are members restricted only
& i wanted 2 read it all...

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