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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Fine. Tomorrow then. Done!! 😃 👍🏼

😆😆

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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

How beautifully you have written.👏 I so wish they had shown atleast the sisters happiness yesterday. Usually Dev-Sona scenes gives you a feeling of completeness. Their interactions always leaves you with a happy smile. Yesterday was not different. But felt lacking something. But reading your OS gave me back the feeling of completeness. Thank you.

It didn't seem like it was your first work. The flow was really good. The editors should just check this OS to see where they went wrong yesterday.

This one for you Suvika for making her write🤗

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: gmgi
How beautifully you have written.👏 I so wish they had shown atleast the sisters happiness yesterday. Usually Dev-Sona scenes gives you a feeling of completeness. Their interactions always leaves you with a happy smile. Yesterday was not different. But felt lacking something. But reading your OS gave me back the feeling of completeness. Thank you.
It didn't seem like it was your first work. The flow was really good. The editors should just check this OS to see where they went wrong yesterday.

This one for you Suvika for making her write🤗

Till now it seemed like very character in the series was defined with a purpose. Such an important development. The sisters should be a part of it.

@bold. Those are really kind words. Thank you.

And yes a big 🤗to Suvika from me too for making me write this.

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gmgi

@gmgi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

I was not being kind just honest.😳 You have a wonderful way with words. Please do write more.

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Mohi99

@Mohi99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Lovely piece of writing... I could actually want CVs to read... This should have happened instead of wht was shown... I too felt the episode was rushed... Never mind.. Our forum compensates for all pending wishes... Thanks... Please do PM whenever u will write ur next...

Regards, M

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LiveLoveLife

@LiveLoveLife

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Bang on. Thats exactly what I hv been commenting and tweeting to Mamta Patnaik since the episode was aired. That episode was an excellent opportunity for the Makers and CVs to prove why KRPKAB is unique from other shows. But I have no clue what was their thinking process when they planned this episode.

This was indeed a big moment for DevAkshi. A sense of relief and happiness for them. But I feel they hardly lived it. Dev enquiring abt Sona's parents and breaking the news to the sisters was so naturally expected by all.

I was disappointed but at the same time scared for KRPKAB as a show. I mean I am so connected to the characters now like its my own family. The 5th Aug episode scared me bcoz i dont want my passion for KRPKAB to reduce. The whole week I was patient and never even once complained abt why Ishwari was given so much screen time and space bcoz I trusted that eventually CVs will give due space and time to DevAkshi. When Ishwari talks abt making kheer for Dev and Sona, I was actually looking forward to those scenes and how beautifully and emotionally it would be shown. But DevAkshi matter was kinda shown like Neha/Ranveer matter.

I wish we all could go back in time and CVs could have changed the episode and end it on a high note. GKB and Ishwari ka politica and drama toh chalta rahega. I have never wanted the makers to change the storyline but DevAkshi atleast deserved that episode or rather we all deserved a lighter and happy moments wala episode.

Kya aisa nahi ho sakta???????

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Deepa

@deepa.e

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Really a nice attempt...

Loved it..

Thanks for post.

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Mohi99
Lovely piece of writing... I could actually want CVs to read... This should have happened instead of wht was shown... I too felt the episode was rushed... Never mind.. Our forum compensates for all pending wishes... Thanks... Please do PM whenever u will write ur next...
Regards, M

Thank you. It would be nice if the Cvs actually read this.. But that is for another day. I am writing another OS will post in a bit.. and PM you.

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fanktlk

@fanktlk

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: LiveLoveLife
Bang on. Thats exactly what I hv been commenting and tweeting to Mamta Patnaik since the episode was aired. That episode was an excellent opportunity for the Makers and CVs to prove why KRPKAB is unique from other shows. But I have no clue what was their thinking process when they planned this episode.
This was indeed a big moment for DevAkshi. A sense of relief and happiness for them. But I feel they hardly lived it. Dev enquiring abt Sona's parents and breaking the news to the sisters was so naturally expected by all.
I was disappointed but at the same time scared for KRPKAB as a show. I mean I am so connected to the characters now like its my own family. The 5th Aug episode scared me bcoz i dont want my passion for KRPKAB to reduce. The whole week I was patient and never even once complained abt why Ishwari was given so much screen time and space bcoz I trusted that eventually CVs will give due space and time to DevAkshi. When Ishwari talks abt making kheer for Dev and Sona, I was actually looking forward to those scenes and how beautifully and emotionally it would be shown. But DevAkshi matter was kinda shown like Neha/Ranveer matter.
I wish we all could go back in time and CVs could have changed the episode and end it on a high note. GKB and Ishwari ka politica and drama toh chalta rahega. I have never wanted the makers to change the storyline but DevAkshi atleast deserved that episode or rather we all deserved a lighter and happy moments wala episode.
Kya aisa nahi ho sakta???????

Seriously... na we deserved one happy episode. But..

While you are tweeting it would be nice if you can tweet this post... I would love for them to at least read what the forum expects.. Also I didn't' intentionally make too many changes from their post. I added Sona's parents conversation and the sister's scene. That was the natural progression of the scene.