OS : An attempt - Page 2

Originally posted by: Suvika.

That is the problem. THEY DON'T THINK!! They are running away with the story. This has always been the problem with most of the Sony shows. Remember KTLK?? I was reminded of that very rudely when I was watching the episode last night when the scene suddenly started shifting from DevAkshi to Ishwari and back. I mean that was the heights!! 😡

Originally posted by: fanktlk

Shouldn't he logically have asked about her family. He just said I am sorry. I was selfish... So next obvious thing would be to ask... The plan of action... Spend more time with mom... Come on!!

114th episode and we have started on the head banging emoticons huh!!

Whatever we missed out last night, you showed me this morning. That's my review in one sentence.

Thank you. Coming from you it means a lot.

And you should write more. As I keep saying, you have a strong grip on logic. You never let it go - unlike me who gets carried away by romance and high voltage drama.

Well done buddy. Now... when is the next OS coming up??

You never know... I didn't even know I was going to write this one... 😉

But I knew you would write. You had been fuming last night. One push and it is all out on the paper. Or rather in the forum.

Think about continuing this one or take up a fresh one - like Sona's professional side. It'll be fun. We can set WhatsApp on fire and bring out the story the way WE want it. 😉 Isn't that tempting you??

Originally posted by: fanktlk

But they has paced the episode beautifully... The female lead felt the attraction around the 27th episode. She fell in love around the 47th. The actual confession came in the 76th episode...

They hid from their families for a goof 35+ episodes... and finally informing the families happened in the 114th episode...

10 minutes is all I ask... 10 minutes...

The Riya, Nikki banter, the next day morning is of so much significance... why spoil it!!

Originally posted by: Suvika.

Think about continuing this one or take up a fresh one - like Sona's professional side. It'll be fun. We can set WhatsApp on fire and bring out the story the way WE want it. 😉 Isn't that tempting you??

Originally posted by: Buzzinnn...

This is exactly what we should've gotten to see in yesterday's episode!! You've written it so well... & the continuity is perfect..Wonderful 👏 😳

They should've started with Devakshi and then played out Ishwari-Mamaji's scene. Somewhere the continuity was messed up & the scenes were choppy.. An overdose of Ishwari.. I really thought Riya & Nikki would get to know yesterday but it was more of Ishwari's banter & GKB's brainwashing...
But am hoping that the sisters get to know exactly the same way as written in your post... Nikki will scream with joy..

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

This was exactly what was needed yesterday ...but they didnt show any of it. Its imp to work on the frills and frolics of the core story too. That is missing these days. They have already jumped to show the insecurity of the mother with shopping episode. They forgot to show Dev's concern to inform Sona's parents, sibling happiness and also the fact that his mom showing a lil bit of happiness for his sake by accepting her. These are the normal things that happen in most houses at such situation. I felt the CV team just rushed with this . They dragged Ishwari drama before Dev telling the truth.

Thanks for writing a lovely OS for us . Even if we didnt get to see ..we got to read!! Thats the best part of this forum...we all know what we all need to make us happy !! Have a lovely weekend ppl!!

Originally posted by: fanktlk

I don't fret too much about her professional life, I have never seen her as one. I am still trying to get my head around what she does the entire day. Remember Ishwari cooking she asked Nashte mein kya khana chahiye and lunch.. done.. our girl is free for the day...I have not yet deciphered the "Doctor" secret either.

You don't worry about that. Courtesy of my surgery, I was in a corporate hospital for 3 days. I know what a nutritionist does. I will give you the career options. You can insert it as a small scene in a OS. Why ignore it completely??

This I think i had expectations. So far the pace was excellent.. but this.

Even during all the Ishwari OTT I thought the focus on Ranveer's family was nice. But yesterday I was let down. First episode I was let down... but...

I make very long posts. Let me spare the others with another one.

So.. it's been more than an hour. Have you decided on the topic for the next OS?? Weekend guzar jaayega achche se.