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Posted: 9 years ago
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when will u update next part??
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: gmgi

Lovely OS. Very sweet n Romantic too. 😳


Thanku so much😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima17

superrr update when is da next waitinggg


thanku so much😊
Ok will try to update soon. Sorry for delay
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: sa1234B

when will u update next part??

eagerly waiting


will try to update soon.
sorry for delay
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I was planning against it but now gonna update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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First of all I am really sorry guys for delay.yo can throw eggs,sandals or whatever you want on me, I will accept that.i was busy with studies and all and then got busy with some new stories I hope you have enjoyed them.i know many of you must have forgot this story and lost connect but still I am posting it because this is my first os ever so how can I leave it incomplete.well if you want to remember you can check previous parts.
hope you will enjoy this part also.so here it is.

All preparations were done for party which was next day.sona was leaving in evening when she saw dev coming from entrance.both smiled at each other.Mai ghar ja rahi hu sona informed dev. chaliye mai chhor deta hu.
nahi wo Elena a rahi hai to mai uske sath chali jaugi aur Han kal mai sidhe sham ko party ke liye augi.
are par kyun? Ek to aise hi tumhare pas mere liye time nahi hai bas tumhe dekh ke khush hota hu aur ab tum wo bhi chhin rahi ho mujhse dev complained.
i am sorry dev. I know Maine apko time nahi diya but kal ke bad to mai free hi hu Na to mera Sara time apka. Aur actually kal mujhe shopping Jana hai Nikki ki taiyariyo me Maine khud ke liye Kuch bhi nahi liya hai.
hmm OK but jyada khubsurat mat dikhna.he said putting a hair strand behind her ear.
kyun?sona asked in confusion.
I mean mujhe to tum hamesha hi khubsurat lagti ho par mai nahi chahta ki koi aur tumhe notice kare. Remember mai tumhe duniya se chhipa ke rakhna chahta hu he said smiling.sona shook her head dev aap bhi na.

OMG OMG ab mai kya karu? Sab khatam. party ka kya hoga.nikki came to sona running and screaming these lines bhabhi party to barbad ho gayi meri.
but hua kya both asked in confusion.
bhabhi meri dress. Apko yad hai final alteration ke liye diya tha and mai lana bhul gayi Nikki said biting her nails.
ha wo Maine... nahi bhabhi ab kuch nahi ho sakta because uski shop kal band rehti hai and abhi late ho gaya hai Nikki said not letting sona to complete.

are to tu Kuch aur pehan le, dress hi to hai dev said shrugging his shoulder.nikki saw dev as if he was an alien.dress hi to... Bhaiya aap aisa keh bhi kaise sakte ho apko pata bhi hai kitni mushkilo se mujhe 1 suitable dress mili thi, mai aur sona Bhabhi ne pure 3 din tak market ke chakkar lagaye the.dev was shocked to know that they took so much pain for a dress.are tum ladkiya bhi Na.nikki started crying.dev panicked but sona told him to relax.are meri bat to suno mere pas solution hai. kya?? Nikki asked wiping her tears.udhar dekho she said pointing towards door. Elena was there holding a packet and said le sona mai le ayi Nikki ki dress.nikki ran to her and saw the same dress and was jumping with happiness. she came back to sona running eee thanku thanku thanku bhabhi I love you and kissed her cheek.sona also kissed her. I love you too. happy now?more than happy. Mai try karke ati hu and left with Elena.
mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap aise i love you bolti hai.

kaise? she pecked dev's cheek and said aise?

ha but ye to Nikki ke liye tha mere liye to Kuch alag hona chahiye. Nahi? He said with mischievous smile.dev aapka na aajkal one track mind ho gaya hai.

ha to tum ye track pura kar do to mai next track ke liye sochuga he said folding his arms against his chest.

next track... she turned pink.ha apke ghar walo se hamari shadi ke liye bat karna yahi to hai hamara next track.oh ok she said mentally smacking her for thinking otherwise.one minute aap sharma kyu rahi thi aapne kya socha next track ke bare me?dev asked noticing her expressions.nahi Kuch nahi... Mai bhi yahi soch rahi thi she started fumbling.nahi tum to oh now I get it. you gutter mind. waise I will not mind that type of next track also he said with a wink and held her by waist.sona lowered her gaze smiling.
thanku thanku thanku bhabhi see this is so good. Dev left sona hearing his sister's overexcited voice.Nikki came running and hugged sona. Bhaiya aapne jindagi me 1 kam... umm nahi apne to bahut sare ache kam liye hai par apne sabse acha kam ye kiya hai ki aap hamare liye sona Bhabhi ko leke aye.she is the best.dev who was not pleased with interruption again said ha to acha kaam kar diya Na Maine chal ab ja.

thik hai jati hu chalo Bhabhi she said making faces.are tum sab ki problem kya hai? Jo jata hai sonakshi ko apne sath leke jata hai. mai usse Kuch bat kar raha hu tu ja.

bhaiya aap kya bat karoge.aap to bore hi kar rahe hoge Na unhe to isliye...mai boring hu?he asked cutting her words in between.aur nahi to kya kal aap wo galat song ga rahe the Na riya di ne bataya mujhe.

galat kya wo mera version tha he said in his defense. wo song hai koi software nahi jo uske versions hoge Nikki said laughing. waise bhi bhabhi pe pehla hak to hamara hai said riya who was coming from back.are aise kaise sona meri hai sabse pehle hak mera hai bhul mat wo meri wajah se tum logo ki bhabhi hai dev said with a stubborn look.ha to apne apna kam kar diya na ab wo pehle hamari hai they said holding sona.nikki riya tum dono ko Kuch nahi pata a voice came all looked in the that direction neha was smiling there.dev came forward thank God neha tu a gayi ab tu hi samjha indono duffers ko Kuch.kya Di aap bhai ke side ho gaye ho?both sisters complained.are mai to bas ye keh rahi hu ki sona par sabse pehla hak ab mera hai ham dono 1 team me jo hai ab kyun sona?sona smiled off course both hugged.dev pulled them apart 1 minute kaisi team?bhai anti pati club.hun ye kya hai? dev asked in confusion. ye club ham girls ka hai jisme ham apne patiyo ke bare me gossip karte hai unki buraiya karte hai. mere aur rohini bhabhi ke sath sath ab sona bhi uski member hai.what nonsense is this? aur 1 minute pehle pati ban to Jane de mujhe. its ok bhai nahi bane ho to ban jaoge have patience.neha said patting his shoulder.all girls laughed silently at his state. wo to mai banuga hi par shadi se pehle ya bad me sona pe pehla hak mera hi hoga samjhi he said with surity. are kya shor bacha rakha hai tum bachho ne asked ishwari coming from kitchen. neha a gayi tu beta kaisi hai? she asked hugging her.ranveer kaha hai? mai thik hu maa aur ranveer bahar hai wo phone pe bat kar rahe hai ate hi hoge.acha waise tum log kis bat pe chhikh rahe the aur dev tujhe kya hua beta aisi shakal kyu bana rakhi hai she asked watching dev's sad face. dekh na maa ye sare kya keh rahe hai ki mera hak sona pe sabse last me ata hai aur inka mujhse pehle.aisa kahin hota hai kya? he said complaining like a kid.are ladkiyo kyu aisi bate kar rahi ho tum log ye to galat hai. maa tu to hamesa bhai ki side leti hai kavi to hamari side se bol diya kar neha complained.maa wahi keh rahi hai Jo sach hai maa tu hi samjha inhe dev said side hugging ishwari all smiling.ha beta mai samjhati hu she said caressing his face suno ladkiyo sona pe pehla hak tum logo ka ho hi nahi sakta kyuki uspe to pehla hak mera hai.sabse pehle ek meri bahu... nahi meri beti hai.dev who was chiding his sisters got shocked he left ishwari maa tu bhi? girls were surprised first then started laughing.kya tu bhi beta? maine Kuch galat kaha kya? acha khair sona beta mai tumhe hi dhundne ayi thi wo Jo tumne mujhe exercise sikhayi thi na wo jara fir se sikha do.ji maa chaliye sona said suppressing her smile. ek minute koi kahin nahi ja raha dev said blocking their way pehle is bat ka faisla hoga fir hi koi kahin jayrga.bas bahut ho gaya.are beta kaisi bate kar raha tu mere ghutno me dard hai aur tu kin bato me fasa hua hai ishwari said faking her pain.for a moment dev was silent then he realized that his mother is faking it.maa jhuth mat bol ghutno me dard hai na tere to paon kyu pakad rakha hai just then ishwari realized that she was holding her thighs instead of knees.umm pure paon me dard hai beta ab tu apni maa pe shak karega she said in her defense biting her lips.mai in chakkaro me nahi parne wala maa ache se janta hu ye sab mai sona pehle meri hai bas he said pulling her by her one arm.nikki started pulling her another arm. soon they were playing tug of war with sona as a rope.sona was struggling between their fight when ranveer and elena came to her rescue.leave her Elena said trying to push them away but in vain.you guys are hurting her came a loud voice from Elena and both siblings left sona immediately.sona took a sigh of relief while dev and Nikki were exchanging angry looks.all family members gathered there listening their noise.sona are you okay? asked concerned dev and got an deadly glare in return from sona who was pressing her arms.tumhe lag gayi kya? sorry sona wo mai kya karta ye log tab se bole ja rahe hai ki tumpe pehla hak inka hai aur tum bhi inhe nahi rok rahi.tumhe to pata hai na mui tumhe sirf apne liye rakhna chahta hu sabse chhipa ke like chocolate he said like a baby without realising presence of everybody around.everyone started laughing silently even sona's anger disappeared and a shy smile crept on her face. Elena thought to tease dev more hello Jiju kya hai ye chocolate and all pehli bat ki aap sab sona pe hak jataye usse pehle mai ye remind kara du ki wo abhi bhi Bose hai dixit nahi bani hai to uspe pehla hak hamara hai.aur sabse important baat ki jab wo dixit bhi ban jayegi na to bhi pehla hak to hamara hi hoga kyu sona? sona was in a fix but she knew that everyone is in teasing mode so nodded at Elena.this was the last thing dev could take bas ab tumhari hi kami thi Elena aur koi hai padosi friends colleagues clients Patients to unhe bhi bula lo aur fir mujhe bata Dena ki mera no. kab ayega he said faking his smile being irritated.are bhai aap gussa kyu ho rahe ho aap ka no. to patients aur padosiyo ke upar hi ata hai don't worry.sona ke mayke wale aur maa aur ham behno ke bad apka hi no. ata hai neha added.thanku so much neha mai tera ye ehsan kaise chuka pauga said dev being frustrated while everyone was enjoying his state. are dev kya hua beta? it was mamaji's turn to jump in between their fight.are hoga kya mama in sab ladkiyo ne team bana li hai mere against aur to a ur maa bhi inke sath ho gayi hai.ishwari pressed her teeth.aur ye sonakshi kitne maje le rahi hai dekho to jara.tch dev beta tu tension mat le ye aurte to hoti hi aisi hai par ham kisi se kam hai kya ham bhi mardo ka alag group banayege.chhor tu inhe Jane de.ha aur nahi to kya ye wives na hamesa aisa hi karti hai added ranveer. tumhare sath bhi aisa hota hai asked dev.aur nahi to kya bhai ye to har pati ki story hai, par mujhe laga tha ki aap ye bechare patiyo ka group shadi ke bad join karege par aap to abhi se hi anyway welcome to the club ranveer told in a sympathetic tone.are bhai ye sab chhoro, Jane do in ladkiyo ko chalo mai apko asli enjoy karna Kise kehte hai batayega added Vicky.chup tu kya batayega nalayak khud to nalayak hai hi use bhi apne jaisa bana dega shouted mama Ji to Vicky.he held dev's shoulder and said beta tu iski bat mat sun ye sab to moh maya hai beta chal mai tujhe apni satsang mandali ki kahaniya sunauga asli gyan to waha milta hai beta jisse sachhe Anand ki prapti hogi tujhe dev nodded in confusion ha mama ab to aisa lagta hai ki sanyas hi lena parega he said looking at sona.sona looked him with an apologetic face but couldn't hide her smile.dev glared at her.ha jao bhai jao asli gyan ki prapti karo neha said teasing him more.chaliye mama waise mama agar apke satsang mandali me koi jagah Khali ho to mera bhi nam likha dena usme dev said turning away.ha beta kyu nahi likha duga mai tu chinta mat kar mama Ji said suppressing his smile and all men left leaving room holding each other.all girls started laughing holding their stomachs at dev's expanse.sona was feeling bad for dev but at the same time she was enjoying all the attention and love.after some time all ladies were in garden having snacks and riya nikki elena were still laughing remembering dev's face.waise Kuch jyada hi ho gaya nahi said ishwari
ha ma thoda to jyada ho gaya par koi nahi kabhi kabhi to chalta hai na replied neha.sona was lost in her thoughts when neha asked waise maa mujhe lagta hai ki sona Bhabhi ko acha nahi laga ye sab aur ye man hi man hame galiya de rahi hai.sona came out of her trance and said with a faint smile are nahi mai aisa kyu karugi.she took permission of ishwari to leave with elena and bid her goodbye to everyone.before leaving she went to meet dev secretly.dev came in his room saying he has some important work to do.he was fuming in anger first everyone made fun of him and second sona didn't support him at all. he was pacing to and fro in his room when sona entered aap yaha kya kar rahi hai? asked dev in a stern tone.wo mai bye bolne ayi thi sona whispered.to bol diya ab jao he said without looking at her.dev I am sorry mujhe pata hai aaj thoda jyada ho gaya but mai kya karti sab ke samne aur aap bhi na bilkul bachho ki tarah jid karne lagte hai.apko pata hai ki aap sabse important ho mere liye aap ho isliye to baki sab hai na fir is bat ko prove karne ki kya jarurat hai.he didn't replied.kuch bolo to sahi she said touching his shoulder.he shrugged her hand away kya bolu? mujhe Kuch nahi bolna apko ko karna tha apne kiya ab mujhe jo karna hai mai wo karuga he said looking at her angrily.seeing his angry face she chuckled dev ye angry face me kitne cute lag rahe ho aap she said pulling his cheeks.he pushed her hands away by his.waise kya karne wale ho aap kal? tumhe kya laga mai koi joru ka gulam hu.piche piche ghum raha hu to ghuma rahi ho? har koi joru ka gulam nahi hota samjhi?he said confidently.ab eventually to hona hi parna hai sabko she said making a straight face.ji nahi bahut ghuma liya tumne aur ab mai nahi tum ghumogi mere piche samjhi he said showing her his index finger.wo to kal dekhege.dekh lena kal.sona left for home leaving a revengeful dev thinking about his words.

That's all for now.
Tell me how was it?
next part will be last part and will be full of romance.so what do you think dev is gonna do for revenge. will he succeed?
This time I will update soon may be tomorrow or day after that.

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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
Ayee choo cutee..
I love it when Dev is possessive towards Sona
As he wants her only for himself😳
Edited by _RS_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much for such a nice series of OS. Its the first time i am commenting on this thread but have read ur previous works. Loved them all. It was always a dream to watch the teasing session of Dev and his sisters but we never got in the show. While reading ur OS i was visualising every scene. Superb. Please do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cscs

Thank u so much for such a nice series of OS. Its the first time i am commenting on this thread but have read ur previous works. Loved them all. It was always a dream to watch the teasing session of Dev and his sisters but we never got in the show. While reading ur OS i was visualising every scene. Superb. Please do continue.


thanku so much😊
Ya right we all always wanted to see teasing sessions in show but never got it so wrote this part for own satisfaction you know.

Well thanku for commenting.i will continue soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was wonderful👏
Eagerly waiting for the next part😳

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