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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

wow update mona di

Too cool

Loved it

Salman is my fav also

Continue soon and thanks for the pm

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Shaun

@Jade0001

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome Part

I like how the girls are going crazy for Salman and even Natasha will leave Neil if he calls Salman old man

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: Jade0001
Awesome Part


I like how the girls are going crazy for Salman and even Natasha will leave Neil if he calls Salman old man

.. He he.. Thank u Shaun Bhai..

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: vssdp
wow update mona di
Too cool
Loved it
Salman is my fav also
Continue soon and thanks for the pm

.. Thank u Vaishu..

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Ferdous_69

@Ferdous_69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

So nice Mona... I am also a biggg fan of Salman Khan... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thanks for promoting SULTAN... 😉 😉 ... Maine Abhi tak Nehi dekha.. 😭 😭

Anyway beautiful update Mona...
Beautifully written... Bechara Neil... 😆 😆 ... Bt acha huya Dev nd Sona ne usko pita , Nehi to main a jati 😆 😆 😆 ...

Eagerly waiting for next update...

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69
So nice Mona... I am also a biggg fan of Salman Khan... ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
Thanks for promoting SULTAN... 😉 😉 ... Maine Abhi tak Nehi dekha.. 😭 😭

Anyway beautiful update Mona...
Beautifully written... Bechara Neil... 😆 😆 ... Bt acha huya Dev nd Sona ne usko pita , Nehi to main a jati 😆 😆 😆 ...

Eagerly waiting for next update...

.. Aww.. Hahaha.. Thank u dear...

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Ashwini

@star.21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Sorry for commenting late dear!🥱

Bestt part was BABY KO BASS PASANDH HE!!😆😆😆

I was imagining Sona dance at that😆😳

N Dev ke mann me ladoo phooting seing Neil an Nutz lovee!😆😳

I am waiting for Dev to express his feeling to Sona!😳

Nice job Mona!👏

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: star.21
Sorry for commenting late dear!🥱
Bestt part was BABY KO BASS PASANDH HE!!😆😆😆
I was imagining Sona dance at that😆😳
N Dev ke mann me ladoo phooting seing Neil an Nutz lovee!😆😳
I am waiting for Dev to express his feeling to Sona!😳
Nice job Mona!👏

.. Thank u dii..

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Monalisa(Hundi..my mom gave this name :)..

@Monaleojan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

THANK U GUYS FOR ALL UR COMMENT... HERE IS THE PART3...

IN DEV HOUSE...

AT NIGHT...

DEV- kash main tumhe bata sakta .. how much I love u Shona...looking at her picture...

AND HE REMEMBERS HIS FIRST MEETING WITH SONA...

10YEARS AGO... SOMEWHERE IN THE PARK...

GIRL- hey why did u break my sand castle?????!!!!!

Boy- inocently... maine nei kiya... wo sourav ne ball mari ...main ball lene ayatha...

Girl.- a motu... tune pirse mri castle tod di...

sorav- koi bat nai... u will make it once again...Dev ball de...

girl starts crying and left from there..Dev watch this and felt bad for her.

AT THE BENCH...

Boy- HELLO,,,,,, am dev. whats ur name??

girl-cryingly. SHONAKHSI...

Dev-Sona ...why are u crying????

SOna- tumne nei dekha!!!us mote ne meri sandcastle tod diya.and again start crying... and cryingly said... DO U KNOW HOW HARD IT WAS FOR ME..I HAVE ALMOST DONE IT...

DEV- ooo...after some time... KOI BAT NEI... WE WILL MAKE A NEW ONE...

SONA- SACHI??

DEV- MUCHII??

AFTER 1 HOUR... DEV- AUR YE PYAR SA FLOWER ISKE TOP MAIN...

SONA- HOGAYA...!!! SHE EXCITEDLY HUGGED HIM... AND DEV HUGGED HER BACK...

ISWARI<DEV MOM>-- DEV?? DEV BETA CHALLO..WE ARE GETTING LATE BETA...

DEV-HOME?? ITNI JALDI???1!! AUR THODA KHELUN MAA...

ISWARI- NEI BETA... TERE PAPA ATE HIN HONGE...

DEV- ACCHA THIK HAI... MAA ...MEET HER...MY NEW FRIEND... SHONAKHSI...

SHONA- GOOD EVENING ANTY.😊

ISWARI...BAHUT HI PYARI BACHI HO... ACHHA TUMHARI MUMMY KHAN HAIN???

SONA STARTS LUKING FOR HER MOM/////SUDDENLY HER MAA VOICE CAME.