FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76

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Posted: 9 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: rukiaa
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Very cute update aditi
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Awesome part
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Great collection of songs
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Lovely update
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Thank everyone for liking my fanfiction!!!Here is next the part!!

Dedicated to rasika_DS, khushirani and rcha_bchrt

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CHAPTER 13

school

period 3 chal raha hai...sonakshi-dev have bio class and shravan suman have maths...ab humne kitni saari baar Dev-sonakshi ko unki bio class mein dekha...ab shravan suman ki baari...dekhte hain yeh dono maths k class mein kya kar rahe hai

Suman answers likh rahi hai and shravan is constantly staring at suman...

Suman(eyes slant karti hai)[to herself]:ohhh god...yeh aise kyun dekh raha hai...

Shravan:[to himself]haaiii haiii...iske liye toh mein zindagibhar maths class mein baithne ko tayyar hoon...

Suman:[stands up] goes to the teacher..may I go to the washroom

Teacher:yes but be quick, v r going to start the next topic in 5 mins

Shravan:oooyeee...yeh kahan chali gayi...main bhi jata hoon...

Shravan:may I go to drink water

Teacher:shravan,u already have ur bottle on ur desk...u can drink it

[after some time]

Shravan:may I go to my locker I forgot my textbook

Teacher:don't worry,U can use mine for time being,here it is,take it

Shravan: [yeh toh muje bahar jane hi nahi dega] may I go to washroom

teacher: one person is already out.whenevr she comes back ,u can go then

Shravan:[lehhh...toh kya faida...]But I really need to go...its very urgent...plzzz...aahhh...can't wait ...or else I ll do it here only...

teacher:ok ok gooo...gooo...

he comes out of the classroom ...suman is coming from another side running...and takraos with shravan and situation kuch iss tarah hoo gayi

situation:

Shravan ki bahoon mein suman , shravan was holding her from her waist and suman looking into his hot hot hot eyes...ab after a min they come to senses and suman suddently moves away from him but can't cuz shravan ka locket, suman ke shirt ke buttons pe phas gaya hai ...

now suman is trying to pull it out but who locket ki chain button pe twined ho gayi hai...now shravan moves his hand towards uska button and suman ko darr lag raha hai...

she is trying to remove more hardly and uska shirt bhi khich rahai hai,but nahi nikalta...

ab shravan ka haath aage badhta hi chala jaa raha ahi...

aur aage...

and now he is trying to take it out too...ab locket aur zyada phas gaya...and ab shravan suman ki taraf dekhta hai , suman uski taraf and shravan apna muh aage uske muh ki taraf le jaa raha hai...

aur pass...

and now shravan kaa haath tohda suman ke chin par touch hua and

Shravan:yeh lo...nikal gaya...

Suman:huhhh[a big relief]

Shravan:kyun...darr gayi kya

Suman:nn...nn...nnoo absolutely not...nn...nn...never...

Suman nazarein upar karti hai and looks into shravan's eyes...and shravan is totally lost in her eyes...both constantly staring at each other...

Achanak...at a bit of a distance

Sonakshi:hey wohh to sumo jaisi lag rahi hai...

Dev:who shravan hai kya...???

Both aage jate hai...and r surprised seeing both of them in this condition ...shravan still holding her waist and both looking into each others eyes and smiling...

Dev: [ thinking something] sonakshi...[winks at her]

Sonakshi:aankh mat maro...,tuj jaiso ko mein achhi tarah janti hoon...bohot ladke pehle muje aankh mara karte the...chalu...

Dev:are..yaar...tu samjhi nahi yaar[again aankh marta hai]

Sonakshi:kya hai tuje!!Stupid koi aur ladki pe try karna...muj pe yeh sab jadu nagi chalega...[enraged][after a while] oohhh ab samjhiii...hmmm[she too winks]

lets go...

Sonakshi goes behind suman and Dev goes behind shravan, looking at each other from behind their friends...

Sonakshi:[dheere se] haiii haiii...kitna HOT hai re tuuu[referring to shravan,speaking on behalf of suman,But looking at Dev]

Dev:[dheere se] oyeee hoyeee...kya beauty haiii[referring to suman ,on behalf of shravan,But looking at sonakshi]

Suman and shravan still staring

Devehhh, kya bolti tuuu

Sonakshi:ehhh,kya mein bolu

Suman and Shravan still staring

Dev:sun

Sonakshi:suna

Suman and shravan still staring

Dev:aati kyaa...ummm...starbucks??

Sonakshi:kyaa karoo aake mein starbucks??

Suman and shravan still staring

Sonakshi:[suman ko zor se hilati hai]...oyee...chal neend se jaag...

Dev:[shravan ko zor se hilata hai] jaaagooo shravan pyaaareee...!

Suman and shravn come to senses..., suman wants to leave but uski kamar pe shravan ka heavy haath hai,who shravan ke haath pe marti hai,he leaves her,both blushing and more blushing and more blushing..

Sonakshi:ayee hayee...tum dono kya kar rahe ho...

Dev:humse bhi tez aur ustaad nikle ...tum dono..

Shravan:v didn't do anyhitng!!

Suman:wht did v do? Nothing toh..

Sonakshi: math kii class skip karte ho...

Dev:bunk marna is a bad habit

Suman,shravan[thinking]:huhh...[a big relief].thank god they didn't see the scene before...[who locket wala]

Sonakshi:chal abhi...bohot hua,..[suman ko khich ke pulls her to the other side]

Dev:chal bhai...bohot hua..[pulls shravan on the opposite side]..

Now girls are moving to the right and guys r moving to the left ab suman and shravan r too shy to look back but

Dev and sonakshi look back and give a cute smile to each other...and a bit of blush on their faces ...

why blush/???who toh unhe bhi nahi pata...who knows??,,..toh ab yeh log kya kareinge..??Tomorrow they r having english class..uss class mein kuch khaas hone wala hai...kyaaa???? Woh toh ab nxt part mein hi pata chalega..

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