FF:- ~HIGH SCHOOL FUN WITH DEVAKSHI~ IMP Note on Pg 76 - Page 40

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ammu3

Awww Dev is smitten by her !! _ D'Awww !!
Beautiful Aditi!! Doesn't matter its short!!
Lovely - absloutely feel good.👏😳
Damn I wasnt feeling well - so late to get the message.
Special consideration pweeese? *adorable face* 😆😆

What to do, Sonakshi hai hi itni beautiful, ki Dev bhi control nahiin kar paya😆😆
Thank you so much Akshara dii!!😃😃
Its absolutely OK dii!!😊
I hope, you are now feeling better😊
Get well soon dii!!😊😊
Aapko toh special consideration milega hi!!😊😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update
Dev told her that he will let her know the rules of traffic. She didn't know how to ride the cycle & Dev was helping her to teach. She left the cycle on him. Poor Dev but he was OK as she was laughing. Update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Lovely update
Dev told her that he will let her know the rules of traffic. She didn't know how to ride the cycle & Dev was helping her to teach. She left the cycle on him. Poor Dev but he was OK as she was laughing. Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much!!😊😊
I will update soon!!
Ur welcome!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thank you everyone for liking and commenting my previous part!!
I am overwhelmed with the response 😊😊.
Please do check Index on pg 1, if you have missed any chapter!!

Dedications

Dedicated to independent, Sujayricky and Sneharay


Special Thanks to kashishbano, ammu3, vssdp, rukiaa, Monaleojan, Federous_69


I would also like to thank EJF_FAN, shruti., simplesweety, Jade0001, star.21, rasika_ds, rukiaa,telly_bluff,asifiqbalsh,rcha_bhrt,sounya23, GERUA, Pilu05, cherrynicolem and many more for liking and commenting my each and every part!!

It encourages me to write more!!


I would also like to thank my new readers khushirani and projapoti123 for having faith in my writing!!



Here is the next chapter:-

Credit for the Banner:- CarpedeimRose


CHAPTER 12
Sonakshi sits again,tries but falls,but dev saves her...ab she is in dev's arms...and suddenly uth jati hai

Sonakshi: koi baat nahi..aise try karti rahungi tabhi to aayega..

Dev:ya true,..

she tries but again falls...this happens 20 times...now dev is tired and sonakshi is tired too...

Dev: ok lets try it the other way, uthro,now,keep one leg on opposite paddle and then push the ground by another leg and then when u get the balance ,u can sit

she tries and now she is going...uska balance ho jata hai

Sonakshi: heyyy...yipppyyy...ho gayaaa...muje aa gayaaa

Dev:abe ruk...itni fast mat jaa...takra jayegi us ped se...[he goes behind her,but sonakshi is going very fast]

she tarkaos with the tree,and falls meanwhile dev is also running and comes...and laughs on her

Sonakshi:has kya raha hai ??...

Dev keeps on laughing...he doesn't know tht sonakshi's leg is in between his legs, sonakshi is angry and woh uske leg se dev ka leg ko marti hai and dev loses balance, gira deti hai and dev falls..

Dev: ahhh

Sonakshi:has raha tha naa mere pe...

Dev: ok baba I won't laugh...khee kheee[still laughing]


badal garajte hai...

Dev: u know wht...the weather over here is really really varied..

Sonakshi: achha...ab kyaa..main toh umbrella bhi nahi layi

its starts raining...they both stand up and go towards a tree..but they r already wet..

under the tree

Dev: are ...we r already wet...chalo barish mein

Sonakshi: wht !why!...ok chalo...who cares..haha they both r dancing in the rain
the next song on her MP3 player

na re naa re ..nana ree...barso re megha megha...(from Guru film)

Dev: yaar,this song is stupid and how will I dance on this one...

Sonakshi: nooo I luv it...I wanna dance on it...

Dev: jo bhi ho...u can't dance lik aishwarya...!!

Sonakshi: u r challenging me!?mujhe award mila hai dancing ka

Dev: kuch bhi ho...u just cant..,aur kis bevakoof ne award diya tuje

Sonakshi: dekh mein tuje batati hoon

She dances exactly lik this

Dev ki ankhe phati ki phati reh jati hai...he is amazed...

Dev: wakai tum achha nachti ho

Next song is,dhoom 2 title song

Dev:oye...this is my favorite

Dev dances on this song...

exactly lik this:
(Ignore navya part, only imagine shaheer)


sonakshi ki ankhe phati reh jati hjai...he is dancing exactly the same way hrithik does...

Sonakshi: waise tum bhi bure dancer nahi ho

Dev: aur kya tum kya samajti ho..nachna sirf tumhe aata hai


now it starts raining very heavily...

Dev:chalo udhar...its too rainy..

they go towards the tree,its very windy, sonakshi ke baal ud rahe hai,and dev uske peche chal raha hai and her hair come on Dev's face,now Dev cant see anything,uski ankho mein baal ja rahe hai,uska pair rock se takraata hai and he falls dowm aur sonakshi ko bhi saath main leke girta hai


now,woh gire bhi toh kaha,in kichad,now in kichad sona is totally inside,puri mud waali ho gayi hai sona,and dev has almost fallen on her, devke baal r very watery and muddy ,woh apna head shake karta hai and all the mud falls on sonakshi ka face, sona ki ankhon mein mud goes,she cant see anything,her eyes r itching and watering,

Dev:umm...sorry[for mud]

Sona:ouch...ahhh...its hurting

Dev: ok wait,mein hatatha hoon,[apna muh sonakshi ke muh ke aage se hatatha hai and lets some rain fall on her face to drive the mud out]

Sonakshi:ooouuucchhh..its still burning...

Dev:ruko...relax..ankho ko dhela chodo...[he slowly takes his mouth towards her eyes ,aur paass...aur passs...aur paass...ekdum paas...and uski ankh mein phukta hai]
Sonakshi: haan ab thik hai...[she opens her eys and sees ke dev is almost on her and very very very near to her]

Dev use dekhta hi rehta hai

Dev:umm...dev...

Dev:hmm?

Sonakshi:umm...hato...utho...umm...

Dev realizes and achanak uth jata hai

They both go turn their faces in opposite directions and blush...

song in the background...waise MP3player mein song baj raha hai and guys sirf imagine devakshi...


now they both come to reality and dono apne aap ko sar pe marte hai with a look tht "ahhh wht am I thinking"


mp3 mein gana bajta hai-

aaa...ohho oo hh uuoooaaa aaa

kyun aaj kal neend kum khwab zyada hai

lagta khuda ka koi nek irada hai...

haan mujhe pyaar hai yaaa

kaisa khumar haii...aaa...

ohho oo hh uuoooaaa aaa(from film lamhe)

Both start dancing again...


Now this song comes..(its the time to disco-from kal ho naa ho)

Dil hai mera diwana kya

Kehta ha ab ghabrna kya

Taal pe jab jhume badan

Hichkichana sharmanakya

Khul ke jhoomo

Khul ke gao

Ayo ao ye khul ke kaho

IT'S THE TIME TO DICSCO...tara taraaa

Dev: ho jaye...

Sonakshi: ho jaye..

they both jump into the kichad and keep on jumping inside and they r all wet and muddy ,both keep on dancing on the tune...both fall down a several times but they get up and start dancing again...


and then all the children from the residence area come out ,in the garden and they all dance with Dev - sonakshi in rain on the song Chak dhoom dhoom from dil toh paagal hai!! Last mein, dev usse ghar chodta hai aur sonakshi sharmake bye kehti hai...


Guys, please like and comment😊😊
AND YES, FIRST THREE COMMENT JO KAREGA, WOULD GET THE NEXT PART DEDICATED😃😃



Edited by .FlyingClouds. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
This was such a happy happy and enjoyable part..Loved it..

20 times she tried..Dev has a lot of patience but only for Sona 😆 and sparks have started to fly 😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the dedication Aditi :D
You reminded me of Navya 😳.
Love their kiddish behaviour and the attraction which is slowly growing between them.
Keep up the good work 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Entertaining update Adi
Dev is teaching her with so much Patience😊

Their rain dance was very cute😳

You actually reminded me of anant and his kiddish behaviour😳
As they are slowly coming close so I am exited for upcoming update😊
Update soon
Thanks for PM
And ya your welcome😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rasika_DS

This was such a happy happy and enjoyable part..Loved it..


20 times she tried..Dev has a lot of patience but only for Sona 😆 and sparks have started to fly 😉


Thank you thank you thank you!!😃😃😃
Yeah. He has that much patience only for Sona!!😆😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
Its really good and unique. Thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update dear..
Rain dance so cute..
Loved it..
Thanks for pm me..
Continue soon..

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