DevAkshi OS! Jeena mujhe phirse woh sikha raha - Page 5

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Lovely OS :)

Awww thank you dear !😳

Originally posted by: Littlestar108

Wow...Such a beautiful OS...

Love your writing so much...

You are really a creative writer...

Love you for this!! ❤️

awww thank you so much Monal !!! Really happy that you liked it !

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Beautiful OS

I like how you've shown

The cycle of a Butterfly

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

What I liked
The beautiful pace at which the story moves
The chemistry between the leads... So true and genuine
The choice of the OS setting
The way you use AC with hot breath

All in all ... Commendable

What I loved
The metaphor of a caterpillar as love and it was magical just like the transformation of an ordinary caterpillar to an unique butterfly! Beautiful!

Kudos to you *_*

Originally posted by: zaara610

Very well written..Awesome os

Loved it..😛

Originally posted by: LoveyDoveyNeha

Fantastic update

Originally posted by: Anu_LoveRain

Aww ammu chechi .. you are my sweetest, cutest, best sister ever kay! 🤗

The update was MINDBLOWING ❤️

I just loved everything about it !!

You are such a talented writer and am proud to have a sis like you

The way you described Dev's eyes was my favourite part in the whole update .. His eyes are

If this happens in the show, I will definitely become mad 🤪

He is scared of ghosts and she is scared of darkness.. and as you all know, ghosts + darkness = best couple

Don't mind, mein kuch bhi stupid bol deti hu hamesha 🤪

Do something chechi, Go join the writing team of KRPKAB, I bet they dont write better than my sis ⭐️

Atleast someone email this to CVs, So they get such brilliant creative ideas to entertain us 👍🏼

The whole shirt utharu scene was blush-worthy ☺️

I loved how you wrote about sona quickly taking off her hands off his button and he held her hands back. I can really imagine dev doing that with a smirk on his face .. he is already all naughty these days 😉

And coming to the last part, this was the best biological comparison you have done so far 👏

'Love is common like caterpillars, but butterflies are rare'

All these lines .. the whole last two paras ❤️

I really don't know how to appreciate your creativity .. I always run out of words, sowiee

Thanks alooot for the dedication sis! 🤗

As always, I love you soo much ❤️

I love you as a lil sis loves an elder sis, Hehe crazy me 🤪

D'Awww dear!! Anu I love you !!😳😆 - Absolutley - like no other words !!! Thank you soso much - i really appreciate when you actually like it and it shows !! Thank yo so much !! You will always have my dedication! True yaar - Shaheer ke tho ham sab, includng deewane hai!!😳😉😆😆🤗

Originally posted by: Prizi

aamazing

Thank you so much dear !😳

Originally posted by: Pilu05

Just amazing Akshara

Hayee ! ! ! yeh scene tho show main bannti hai

Too good

Thanks for the PM

Awww thank you so much dear !!😳😆

Originally posted by: Dishu_1410

very well written ammu ❤️

Awww thank you so much dear !!😳