DevAkshi OS! Jeena mujhe phirse woh sikha raha - Page 6

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Slow and steady but an experience to cherish for a life time...beautiful concept

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

I just don't know what to say !

Incredible ? Sunning? Splendid? What not ...

Beautifully penned ...

You made me speechless !

Originally posted by: rcha_bhrt

Is that really me to whom u have dedicated this os?😳 thats so sweet of u 🤗
thanku so much, it really means a lot 😊
u deserve all the praises sweety 👏

u have done a superb work again 👍🏼
what i like most is the balance in ur story, the perfect balance of humour, romance, emotions 👏

the line which cracked me up was " spirits doesn't watch cvs before posses anyone like u" 🤣

thanku once again for writing this and dedicating it to me 😊
keep writing

Originally posted by: Jade0001

I had to read this OS one more time

its Beautiful

Dev scared for horror movies and Sona having fun but the hightlight for me was when Sona switched the AC on and Dev explained how he and his family went through trusting Sona enough to reveal his past was fantastic and also when Sona gets scared of the dark the way his words lighten her I just loved it

Originally posted by: sajinifaby

Lovely one dear...!!! 👏👏👏

truly...

good dedications too.. envy envy!! am sure they deserving!!!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

''Good things come to those who wait''.Though the story offered multiple emotions ranging from one genre to other it was the analogy which made the whole narrative effective and reading pleasurable.The analogy is indeed inspiring.To be unique you need to struggle and remain consistent in efforts.''Ships are safe in harbour but that's not what ships were built for.''Similarly our lives or let us consider Homo Fictus' lives ,each one is struggling for their coveted dreams and position.The narration was indeed beautiful .But one thing I would like to suggest -- Keep the readers hunting for setting.Somewhere I felt that if the setting is not revealed from beginning it would be much fun and enthralling to core.Rest all aspects are well catered to.

Thanks for pm and the dedication is such a sweet gesture which perhaps my words can't encapsulate.😳

Keep Writing and Keep Smiling.😊

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

It was truly amazing!!

Lovely OS!!

Originally posted by: vssdp

Awesome and amazing os

Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: -Viji-

Amazing One, Once again Akshara👏🤗

You ALways Amaze me with your OSAnd am ready to get amazed next time too😉

Originally posted by: Erian

Lovely OS dear.