DevAkshi OS! Jeena mujhe phirse woh sikha raha - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Aww beautiful Os .
Once again you nailed it dear. 👍🏼 .
You have shown beautifully that how love can became the strength for one fear. 👏 .
Thank you for sharing ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Wow...Such a beautiful OS...

Love your writing so much...

You are really a creative writer...

Love you for this!! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Beautiful OS
I like how you've shown
The cycle of a Butterfly


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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
What I liked
The beautiful pace at which the story moves
The chemistry between the leads... So true and genuine
The choice of the OS setting
The way you use AC with hot breath

All in all ... Commendable

What I loved
The metaphor of a caterpillar as love and it was magical just like the transformation of an ordinary caterpillar to an unique butterfly! Beautiful!

Kudos to you *_*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Very well written..Awesome os
Loved it..😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Aww ammu chechi .. you are my sweetest, cutest, best sister ever kay! 🤗
The update was MINDBLOWING ❤️
I just loved everything about it !!
You are such a talented writer and am proud to have a sis like you
The way you described Dev's eyes was my favourite part in the whole update .. His eyes are
If this happens in the show, I will definitely become mad 🤪
He is scared of ghosts and she is scared of darkness.. and as you all know, ghosts + darkness = best couple
Don't mind, mein kuch bhi stupid bol deti hu hamesha 🤪

Do something chechi, Go join the writing team of KRPKAB, I bet they dont write better than my sis ⭐️
Atleast someone email this to CVs, So they get such brilliant creative ideas to entertain us 👍🏼

The whole shirt utharu scene was blush-worthy ☺️
I loved how you wrote about sona quickly taking off her hands off his button and he held her hands back. I can really imagine dev doing that with a smirk on his face .. he is already all naughty these days 😉

And coming to the last part, this was the best biological comparison you have done so far 👏
'Love is common like caterpillars, but butterflies are rare'
All these lines .. the whole last two paras ❤️
I really don't know how to appreciate your creativity .. I always run out of words, sowiee

Thanks alooot for the dedication sis! 🤗
As always, I love you soo much ❤️
I love you as a lil sis loves an elder sis, Hehe crazy me 🤪


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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Just amazing Akshara

Hayee ! ! ! yeh scene tho show main bannti hai

Too good

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
very well written ammu ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Slow and steady but an experience to cherish for a life time...beautiful concept
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
I just don't know what to say !
Incredible ? Sunning? Splendid? What not ...

Beautifully penned ...

You made me speechless !

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