Devakshi OS.: An Absolute Moment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey all, I am back with a small piece of writing. Hope you all enjoy reading it. Please do ignore any errors. 😊

DEVAKSHI OS.: AN ABSOLUTE MOMENT

It was a breezy night, yet she insisted on having ice-cream before he dropped her home. It had been almost 3 months for their relationship yet they had never crossed the line. It was as if they were becoming emotionally closer at first and then the physical attraction mattered. Not that they hadn't felt the tension in air when their hands touched or when they felt the intense gaze or the depth of their love for each other, which was unknown to them itself. It was just that they never thought about it. He always wanted to come closer to her. That's it. He never did anything beyond it. But now they could feel the tension rising than ever before, and it was becoming difficult to keep their hands off each other.
So as he couldn't deny her wish, here they were. After finishing the ice-cream, they waited in the car. In the middle of nowhere. Just them. As they wished to spend some time alone, away from the chaos. Of course he was more than happy to have their own sweet time, but he had not expected that she would also be as excited to spend time alone; at this hour. They had stopped near a lane. Their car parked at such an angle that they were not visible due to the big old trees. There was a comfortable silence in the car. Both lost in each other's eyes. He was searching for answers of the questions she had. He reached out and took her hand in his. There. They could feel that spark again. The intensity of their feelings surprised them too. He suddenly left her hand, and placed it on her cheek. She closed her eyes with a smile, savouring his touch. He smiled. He shifted in his seat, closer to her. And gently pulled her closer, with his hand on her shoulder. He squeezed them a little and she opened her eyes, blushing. They had been close before but the weather and the proximity along with the privacy took it to another level altogether. He could smell her perfume. Or rather it was her scent. He was so driven by her aura, that he did not realize that he had been literally nuzzling in her neck. He suddenly felt her tighten her hold on his hand. It brought him back to his senses. But on seeing her enjoying the pleasure, he couldn't anymore ignore their proximity. He got back to what he was doing earlier, and with his right hand traced her right arm. He felt her move a little due to the shyness. But he was enjoying it as it was their moment. He suddenly pulled her into himself which caused her to face him. All surprised by his sudden pull, she looked at him. He stared at her face intently, noticing every minute detail of her. The way her jhumkas dangled with the air. The way she put the lone strand of hair behind her ears. The way she looked down on blushing. The way her eyes shone when she talked about her favourites. The way she spoke, the way she laughed, the way she looked when she's angry. Her significance, persona. Just everything. He inhaled her scent. It was so captivating, that he lost his senses. He had just began when she shied off and went outside the car, leaving him in the car with his unfinished task. He quickly got down and grabbed her hand. She landed roughly on his chest by the pull. And she was affected. He knew it. He was too. But they both wanted to shed their inhibitions. Not to that extent, but a progress was inevitable part of relationship and after all they were adults. They ought to have their own desires and pleasures. And what's better than finding your soulmate at the right time and being able to spend your remaining life with them, together?!
He whispered softly in her ears, "You know that I love you right?!"
"Yes I do. And I love you too.", she replied contented.
Turning her around and pushing her against the car door, he came extremely close to her. Placing both his hands around her and caging her between himself and the car, he smirked at her mischievously. She was caught.
"There's no escape Miss Bose.", he said triumphantly.
"What if I don't wish for one?!", she said smirking.
He was all surprised by her bold reply. "Good for you then!", he whispered near her ear.
She blushed as she could feel herself losing in him. His masculine smell, his arms around her, and to top that, his husky voice was making it difficult for her to think anything. They both wished to go with the flow. And hence, he slowly captured her lips. Much to his surprise, she responded with such an ease that he could feel her love radiating. It was sheer passion. They stared into each other's eyes for a long time before they drew back home. They could not stop smiling.
They had discovered something new that day. Something more beautiful. A little more than the day before.
They had always been aware, but they felt the love at that moment. A moment so promising and absolute that it left them dazed.
Though it was a baby step, but yet it mattered. With this, it increased their longing for each other day by day. They wished to explore more such moments...together. And that was marked as the day, from when they could no more live without each other in true sense. Their love was a symbol of purity in actual sense. Intimacy was never their need unlike other relationships. They were so close to each other, in a way that it became impossible to stay away from each other. Thus it lead to their need of knowing each other in all means. And now there was no looking back. They would not fight for their love as it was no war. They would win his mother's heart by the power of their love. Which included his love for his mother, his love for his Shona, her love for him, a mother's love for her son, along with her love for his mother. Such a complex web of emotions it was. But relationships are never complicated. It is we who complicate them with our insecurities and lack of trust. Relations are never perfect. They are successful only when we learn to trust beyond misunderstandings, are honest and committed and when we accept the person with their flaws, just the way they are. Though it takes time, but in the end you know, they are worth it. And then they reach a stage where there is no need to make the person happy by trivial things as your mere presence brings a smile to their face in a way that nothing else can.

The End

Toodles😆

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Originally posted by: Smiley0299

Hey all, I am back with a small piece of writing. Hope you all enjoy reading it. Please do ignore any errors. 😊

DEVAKSHI OS.: AN ABSOLUTE MOMENT

It was a breezy night, yet she insisted on having ice-cream before he dropped her home. It had been almost 3 months for their relationship yet they had never crossed the line. It was as if they were becoming emotionally closer at first and then the physical attraction mattered. Not that they hadn't felt the tension in air when their hands touched or when they felt the intense gaze or the depth of their love for each other, which was unknown to them itself. It was just that they never thought about it. He always wanted to come closer to her. That's it. He never did anything beyond it. But now they could feel the tension rising than ever before, and it was becoming difficult to keep their hands off each other.
So as he couldn't deny her wish, here they were. After finishing the ice-cream, they waited in the car. In the middle of nowhere. Just them. As they wished to spend some time alone, away from the chaos. Of course he was more than happy to have their own sweet time, but he had not expected that she would also be as excited to spend time alone; at this hour. They had stopped near a lane. Their car parked at such an angle that they were not visible due to the big old trees. There was a comfortable silence in the car. Both lost in each other's eyes. He was searching for answers of the questions she had. He reached out and took her hand in his. There. They could feel that spark again. The intensity of their feelings surprised them too. He suddenly left her hand, and placed it on her cheek. She closed her eyes with a smile, savouring his touch. He smiled. He shifted in his seat, closer to her. And gently pulled her closer, with his hand on her shoulder. He squeezed them a little and she opened her eyes, blushing. They had been close before but the weather and the proximity along with the privacy took it to another level altogether. He could smell her perfume. Or rather it was her scent. He was so driven by her aura, that he did not realize that he had been literally nuzzling in her neck. He suddenly felt her tighten her hold on his hand. It brought him back to his senses. But on seeing her enjoying the pleasure, he couldn't anymore ignore their proximity. He got back to what he was doing earlier, and with his right hand traced her right arm. He felt her move a little due to the shyness. But he was enjoying it as it was their moment. He suddenly pulled her into himself which caused her to face him. All surprised by his sudden pull, she looked at him. He stared at her face intently, noticing every minute detail of her. The way her jhumkas dangled with the air. The way she put the lone strand of hair behind her ears. The way she looked down on blushing. The way her eyes shone when she talked about her favourites. The way she spoke, the way she laughed, the way she looked when she's angry. Her significance, persona. Just everything. He inhaled her scent. It was so captivating, that he lost his senses. He had just began when she shied off and went outside the car, leaving him in the car with his unfinished task. He quickly got down and grabbed her hand. She landed roughly on his chest by the pull. And she was affected. He knew it. He was too. But they both wanted to shed their inhibitions. Not to that extent, but a progress was inevitable part of relationship and after all they were adults. They ought to have their own desires and pleasures. And what's better than finding your soulmate at the right time and being able to spend your remaining life with them, together?!
He whispered softly in her ears, "You know that I love you right?!"
"Yes I do. And I love you too.", she replied contented.
Turning her around and pushing her against the car door, he came extremely close to her. Placing both his hands around her and caging her between himself and the car, he smirked at her mischievously. She was caught.
"There's no escape Miss Bose.", he said triumphantly.
"What if I don't wish for one?!", she said smirking.
He was all surprised by her bold reply. "Good for you then!", he whispered near her ear.
She blushed as she could feel herself losing in him. His masculine smell, his arms around her, and to top that, his husky voice was making it difficult for her to think anything. They both wished to go with the flow. And hence, he slowly captured her lips. Much to his surprise, she responded with such an ease that he could feel her love radiating. It was sheer passion. They stared into each other's eyes for a long time before they drew back home. They could not stop smiling.
They had discovered something new that day. Something more beautiful. A little more than the day before.
They had always been aware, but they felt the love at that moment. A moment so promising and absolute that it left them dazed.
Though it was a baby step, but yet it mattered. With this, it increased their longing for each other day by day. They wished to explore more such moments...together. And that was marked as the day, from when they could no more live without each other in true sense. Their love was a symbol of purity in actual sense. Intimacy was never their need unlike other relationships. They were so close to each other, in a way that it became impossible to stay away from each other. Thus it lead to their need of knowing each other in all means. And now there was no looking back. They would not fight for their love as it was no war. They would win his mother's heart by the power of their love. Which included his love for his mother, his love for his Shona, her love for him, a mother's love for her son, along with her love for his mother. Such a complex web of emotions it was. But relationships are never complicated. It is we who complicate them with our insecurities and lack of trust. Relations are never perfect. They are successful only when we learn to trust beyond misunderstandings, are honest and committed and when we accept the person with their flaws, just the way they are. Though it takes time, but in the end you know, they are worth it. And then they reach a stage where there is no need to make the person happy by trivial things as your mere presence brings a smile to their face in a way that nothing else can.

The End

Toodles😆


Beautifully Written !!

Relations are never perfect. They are successful only when we learn to trust beyond misunderstandings, are honest and committed and when we accept the person with their flaws, just the way they are. Though it takes time, but in the end you know, they are worth it. And then they reach a stage where there is no need to make the person happy by trivial things as your mere presence brings a smile to their face in a way that nothing else can.

Above wordings are so TRUE !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful dear !! Such a perfect understanding of emotions and relations !! That is so true !! Keep up the beautiful mind and creative thought !! 🤗👏.. Keep writing dear
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This is sooo beautiful❤️
You have managed to strike just the right chord of emotions and words.🤗
So in sync with the character development in the show . . .Loved the os to core. . Please do keep writing😳
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Wow... Beautiful OS..
Totally love it ...
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DevAkshi always leave us wanting more... Its not because we want all that gutter shit... Its because I see such whirlpool of emotions in their eyes that make me think about them and dream about them!
Relationships are not made in a day... It is the small factors like friendship, care , trust, respect, and love... A love that binds all the other factors... This makes a relationship that defines lives of people who are part of that relationship! *_*

How wonderful is the bond that has its roots like that DevAkshi have! Beautiful! Truly magical! *_*

PS: a kiss that too a DevAkshi kiss is on everybody's mind these days! Mine too!! *_*
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just beautiful!
Thanks a lot for the OS.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A breathtaking OS! So beautifully written! Wish to read more stories like this which explore devakshi's romantic side :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld


Beautifully Written !!

Relations are never perfect. They are successful only when we learn to trust beyond misunderstandings, are honest and committed and when we accept the person with their flaws, just the way they are. Though it takes time, but in the end you know, they are worth it. And then they reach a stage where there is no need to make the person happy by trivial things as your mere presence brings a smile to their face in a way that nothing else can.

Above wordings are so TRUE !!


Thank you soo much😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Wonderful...keep it up dear...

Thanks a lot
Glad you liked it😆

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