DevAkshi OS~ Dard ke andheron se, aa gaye ujaalon mein - Page 6

Originally posted by: zaara610

Awesome os..beautifully written..Loved it..😳

Awww thank you so much dear - Really glad that you liked it !!😳

Originally posted by: kashishbano

Wow.
I am just speechless.
No words to describe the Os.
It is simply beautiful.
Loved it, how nicelynyou have described the relationship and the rituals of the marriage, just mind blowing 👏 ❤️ .
A big hug to you dear 🤗

Awww thank you so much dear !! I am so happy you liked it !! Your comments always make me go giddy with happiness !!😆😆

Originally posted by: KaranSG_01

Beautifully written.
I have no words to praise it.
BTW i just saw a few lines from this os as a caption on KRPKAB official insta page.Do you manange it?

Awww thank you so much !! Thank you so much for informing !! 😳

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... This is Magical dear
So so sooo beautiful ... I have just no words to express how beautiful it is!!!!!!!
Hats of u girl 👏 👏 ...
Keep writing dear...always love to read u 😛

Awww thank you so much dear !!😃

Originally posted by: Pilu05

A perfect Finishing

Beauty as always

love it yaar

thanks 4 the PM

Thank you so much dear !!😃😳

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur

Beautifully written OS Akshara... Thank you so much for sharing and do keep writing.😊👏

Awww thank you so much Jyothi di !!😳

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Beautiful and Soulful at the same time

I liked how you described each marriage vow that was indeed beautiful

Thank you so much dear !! Glad you liked it !😳

Originally posted by: saumiee

I reserved my comment 4 pages back. . but since it is so late( I am so sorry BAE, got stuck with exams and I wanted to read this in peace❤️) , Now commenting here😳

I am so glad I waited for a while to read this. . One needs emotional calmness to read something so soulful as this😊

How on earth Did you manage to interweave the vows so beautifully with DevAkshi👏 This was so beautiful🤗

So touching. . They didn't speak a word. . Yet everything was spoken😳 I loved, loved the part where Neha seeks their blessings and how you wrote.. . What was there to give now apart from blessings.👏

Did you research about the saptpadi for this piece ? The vows are written by you in your own words, dear!? The lines where the partner addresses the other half as vishnu and lakshmi?

If it was done by you. . I have never read something so thoughtful before👏

And if not, even then it was so amazing to incorporate it into the os.😳

My favorite part was this. . I miss my mother so much. . This brought tears in my eyes..almost.

A mother is your first prayer, your first love, you first friend, your first enemy. Ishwari might have held Dev's hand only for some time, but she did not realize that she would hold his heart for a lifetime. The fact that Dev loved another as well - only showcased that after her - there was someone equally capable of taking care of her child. To shower him with same love, scold him the same. That somebody, other than her would always be there for her. Someone who would complete her love - in other ways.

Ishwari, nothing can separate Dev from you. Not time. Not space. Not even death.

Not even your selfishness. He would break. Tear apart. Witness a living hell. Die a thousand deaths. But would never stop worshipping you.

So then, why?

Why?

Why would you make a man choose between his life and soul?

Why?

Thank you so much for dedicating this🤗

Awww saumiee yaar !! Dil ko choo diya iss comment ne - such a wonderful audience you are !!
Your comments always make me go so happy and it just makes my day!! I love you so much and thank you yaar !! Honoured to have such a good friend like you.🤗❤️

Originally posted by: debby_11

i think you should join their script writer's department
it was absolutely amazing. loved it
Please join their team :D

Aww dear - thank you so much !!😳😃 Really happy that you liked it - I'm honored!!
You are very kind !!😆🤗

Originally posted by: andy1245

amazing hats off to u dear

Awww thank you so much dear !!😳