Devakshi SS (Part 2 Updated: Page 3)

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Dev meri baat toh suno nah please, pleaded Sona.

Dev entered their bedroom angrily, and threw his coat on the bed. Sona went and stood in front of him.

Dev...Hua kya hai. Jab se party se Nikle ho, tab se ekdum gussa ho. Meri kisi baat ka jawaab bhi nai de rahe ho. Bolo nah.

Yeh tum puch rahi ho? Jaise tume kuch Pata hi nai hai Dev spat out angrily.

Par Dev...

You know what..just leave it. Mujhe neend aa rahi hai. Main sone jaa raha hoon. Saying that he leaves for the washroom.

Dev..Dev...areh. but he shuts the door on her face.

After 15 minutes he comes out, and goes straight to bed, ignoring Sona. By the time Sona changes and comes to bed, Dev pretends to be asleep.

Pata nai kya Hua hai..kuch bata bhi toh nai raha. Mr. Aubodro...kahi ke. Par sona...naraaz toh woh tumse hi Hai. Chal kuch ideas sochle ki kal tu unhe thik kaise karegi.

Next morning

Sona wakes up early to make breakfast for Dev. She quickly freshens up, takes out clothes for Dev, arranges his files, wallet, and watch, and then leaves for the Kitchen.

It will be the first time for Sona to cook something, and that to for Dev. So she takes Ishwari Maa's help, to make Dev's favorite Bhindi ki bhurji and roti.

Aah...Shouts Sona.

Kya Hua beta. Tum thik toh ho.

Haan maa. Main thik hu. kuch nai huya.

Areh aise kaise. Dekhayo mujhe kya Hua hai. Sona...kaise kaam karti hai tu. Maine Kaha Tha na tujhse..tumhe kuch bhi banane ki zaroorat nai hai. Main ya kichu kar dete beta. Dekho Ketna haath jal gaya hai.

Kuch nai maa. Main thik hu...aur mujhe Dev ke liya kuch special karna Tha na..toh is liya. Unke liye kuch bhi.

Pagal. La deh mujhe...main dawa laga deti hoon.

Maa baad mein. Pahele main dev ko Nashta de Doon. Aakhir Unke liye surprise hai nah...Maine jo banaya Hai.

Acha thik hai. Lekin yaad se dawa laga lena. Aur thik se Nashta leja. Dekhna haath nah dukh jaye.

Haan Maa.

In the bedroom

Dev wakes up to see that Sona is not there, but all his things are neatly arranged. He then remebers last night and gets angry again. He freshens up, takes out a new suit and gets ready.

Sonakshi enters the room and gets shocked to see dev not wearing the suit she took out for him.

Dev..Yeh kya. Maine toh apke liye kapde nikale the nah.

But Dev ignores her. He quickly gathers his stuff and was just about to leave when...

Dev..Nashta toh kar lijiye...please.

Mujhe Der ho rahi hai Sonakshi. And then starts to walk out.

Dev yeh kya baat huyi...aap jante hai nah main apko nashta ke bina nahi jane dogi. Chup chaap baithiye aur nashta kijiye.

Sonakshi ...Maine Kaha nah nahi...Mujhe Der ho rahi..Mere paas in sab ke liye time nahi hai. Dev says angrily.

Lekin Dev. woh Nashta Maine...woh-
Sonakshi Main jaa raha hoon. Mujhe subha subha tumse ladne mein koi interest nahi hai..Bye. Dev says quite rudely.

Dev...whispers Sonakshi sadly. But Dev leaves.

Sonakshi looks on hurt.

Precap

Ishwari: Beta aaj nashta kaisa Tha?

Dev: Maa...woh maine..woh maine nashta nahi Kiya Tha ghar par.

Ishwari: Kya? Dev aaj Sona ne khud tere liye nashta banaya Tha. Aur tune khaya bhi nai.

Dev: Sona ne nashta banaya Tha? He looks on shocked.

Ishwari: Aur nahi toh kya. Bechari ka toh haath bhi jal gaya Tha, aur Pata hai usne kya Kaha? 'Dev ke liye kuch bhi.' Aur tumne...Mujhe tumse yeh ummed nahi thi Dev.

Okay guys. My first ever story..on Devakshi. Hope you guys like it..and please do tell me if I should continue.

Love
- M
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb start. .
continue soon. .
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I want to know why he is so angry about 😆 Pls do continue
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Angry Dev! Want to know the rgn..update soon..
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Nice start 😊
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awesome..plzzz update next part soon
intersting precap..
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I am loving their cute fight !! But, why he is so angry...want to know soon...So, plz update sooon :)
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Its really nice...
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nice ff dear ..do continue soon..
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Continue soon...y is dev angry with her??😲

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