DevAksi Ts- Untiteled.. Part 2 in page 2.. 5/7/2016

Posted: 9 years ago
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A random is on our beloved couple DevAkhsi...hope u wiil guyss enjoy...so here it goes...
Iswari- Kichu..? where are u...com soon ...here so many works are pending...hey vagwan..an neha ki sagai hai...sabkuch ache we hojaye...
just then Dev come to Iswari
Dev- Maa...why are u so tensed...all is going to be fine...
Iswari-Hmmm...
In Neha' s room ...
Niki - Wow dii...u are looking so pretty...ajj to ranveer jiju gaye kam se... ;)... Haina Ria di..??? ;) ...
Neha- Chup badmass... blushingly...
Ria- wese Neha dii Niki to sahi bolrahihai... ;) ... aj main apkeliye bohut khus hun...
Niki - main bhi...
with this they hug each other...
In Dev's room...
Dev- When are u coming... ????
Sona- just 10mins. ...
Dev- 10 mins??!!
Sona- what to do traffic jamm...
Dev- main apko lend ajaun??
Sons- Na na ... I will be there...don' t worry...
Dev- Sona tumi ekdom impossible...
Sona-???ha!!!!Dev apne Bengali bola??!!
Dev- ($milingly)Now what to do...Bengali she Jo pyar hogaya hai... :) ...
Sona-- blushing... acha wb main rakhtihun...trafic clear hagaya hai..byeee..see u...
Dev- bye...come soon...
So gyus here is the part one... Hope u like it... and if u like do comment. ... ;) .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 was great!!
Cont soon
Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Part 1 was great!!

Cont soon

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Thank U...
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Awesome 👏
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so cute


do pm me when u update
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And what next... You left me wanting more! Update soon!
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HEY GUYSS .. I WILL POST THE 2ND PART SOON..AND THANX 4 THE RESPONSE GUYSS
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Wow bahut badhia heichhi


Amazing start yaar

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Posted: 9 years ago
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So guys here is the part 2... enjoy and plzz do comment... Love Mona...
Dev- Where is Sona... an take nei ayi!!!
in mean time...Iswari came...
Iswari- are Dev beta tu abtak ready nei hue.?! Ranveer me family wale kabhi bhi asakte hain...go and get ready soon beta.
Dev- han maa am going...don' t take tension...
Iswari- Hann ...an tu jaa...
Dev- Kahan ho tum Sona?! Achaa sabse pehele ake mujhse milna typed Dev...
Sona- (saw the msg) and blushes...
Elena saw Dona smiling herself looking at her phone...
Elena- Ohho..msg romance is going...nei... ;)
Sona- Chup... badmass ...
After 10 mins they reached at Dixit mension...
Dev is busy at looking at the door suddenly his heart beating get Forster herring the tickilings of payal
Dev- Sona... and looked at the door... there she came looking absolutely gergeious...
BG( kuch rang pyar me aise bhi)...
Iswari saw Bose family and happily invited them...
Sona and Dev are just lost in each other ...
Elena- Sona...chalee ..ya phir yehin pe Sara don't Dev ko dekhti rahogi...
with that Devakhsi get little embrassed...
Dev excused himself...

Dev- Mujhe kuch kamm yad aagaya...
Sona- maroon color main bade hi smart dikhrehain app...typed Sona..
Dev- U are also looking beautiful...
Sona.- Beautiful?! surf beautiful?!?! Iswari- are nutrition beta ye Phil ki thali jara wahann rakhdoki...

Sona- Jee anty ji...
while walking her payal got stucked... Sona- oh no...!!isko abhi phasna that??!!

while struggling with her payal. Fev came to help her... but Sonakhsi still is angry with him.
..
Dev- ye lo hogaya...
Sona- Han thank u..with that she started walking once again..
Dev-(confuse) innhe kya hogaya... Sonakhsi?!?!
sona- kya hai?!
Dev- aree why are u talking like this?!!
Sona- apko an main surf beautiful lagrehihun...Maine kitne time liya an sunder dijhne ke liye air app sirf mujhe beautiful complement di!!?? complend Sonakhsi...
Dev- Get bhaban itni so batt...!! Sona tumhe kitne bar bollun tum mujhe Thumari Dil she khubsurat lagti ho..chehere se nei...
Sona-- bluses...
Devakhsi Eyelock...
bg- kuch rang pyar ke ...

Sona- breaking the eyelock... are main to bhul gayi isse wahan rakhna tha...
Dev- lao main rakhdeta hun... Sona
Sona- main rakhdungi...
Dev- Accha think hai him sath main rakhdete hain... Sona- Thik hai... chaliye...
After some time Ranveer family arrives... they all greeted them...
during the ceremony..Elena noticed payal missing from Sonakhsi..
Elena- sona... tera air ek payal kahan hain..
Sona- kya!! kahan gira...!!?? yehin kahin gira hoga main dhund lungi...
in the mean time Sona phone beeped...
Sona- Agar apka payal apjo chaye to..come to my room...
Sona -( bluses)


Tadda...!!!! its so long??!! jutta chappall are invited ...and sorry for the grammatical errors..
Edited by salmansultan - 9 years ago
Posted: 9 years ago
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Am so sorry guys there is so many gramatical error..what to do its a smart phone..hope u will understand.. Love Mona :)

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