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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict
Quick comment as I am driving and typing this (again)..

I actually love the last paragraph! I do! Maybe it's just the nerd in me that loves it whenever people incorporate science with life, bcos the similarities are endless when done impeccably! And boy was it done impeccably! The juxtaposition btwn the two was brilliant and beautifully penned!

I already see you improving from your first OS that you posted here, so I can only imagine how far you will progress!

Love always 🤗

D'Awww Pari !! Thank ooo so much !!🤗

I knew you would love it !!😎

You are way too sweet !!😳I feel really accomplished, this coming from you

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JyotiBThakur
This is beautiful... Loved your OS dear.👏
Thanks for sharing and do keep writing.😊

Awww thank you so much Jyothi Di !!😳

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Ferdous_69

@Ferdous_69

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Wow... That was superb
Super hilarious Bose family 🤣
Really too good nd funny yaar...
Glad to read u... Thanks for sharing
Do write more 😳 😳

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mamatharoyal

@mamatharoyal

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Loved your OS ... Thanks for posting.

Edited by mamatharoyal - 9 years ago

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ammu3

@ammu3

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: independent
Superb os👏

Aww thanks a ton dear !!😃

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saumiee

@saumiee

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Wow, Akshara👏 your OSes just keep getting better and better😳

You quite skillfully incorporated all three genres in your writing. Lol on the funny part😆 Mr. Dixit🤣 I literally was trying to suppress my laughter ,sitting infront of 10 people of my family. . when I read the part where Dev screams Bhagoo. . TO the vessel🤣

And the cooking together part☺️ oh! How I wish this is taken up someday in the show as well. . 😳

And the angsty part. . I never want to see Dev tadpofied so much

And the last part was as always well put.👏 Loved how you co related Biology and Science with the story. Smartly done😳

Will be waiting for more 😊

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Khusharni

@Khusharni

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

So cute!! I hope something like this happens on the show😆😆👏👏

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Mouli Mandal

@Mimiii22

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

oh so cute and beautiful OS...loved how you included 3 type of genres..last part was awesome...lovely...😳

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Anu

@Adi_Ki_Zoya

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Akshara chechi 🤗

Finally your PM

Thank you, thank you, thank you 😃

Coming to the OS, kya bolu?! It had everything in it 👏

Romance, Humour, Angst ... you definitely need a great talent to perfectly manage all three genre's, and you have it chechi 😳

Masha Allah, you are a blessed writer ❤️

You always bring a smile on my lips and thats why I love you ❤️

And the last part

Whatever you have written is Mindblowing 👍🏼

The contradiction between dev and sona's nature, that too in a really different way, only you can think this way! 😆 (medical student hai na? - Dikh rahi hai)😛

Once again, Love you ❤️

*Hugs and kisses* for the dedication 🤗

Waiting for your next one! 😉

Okay thanks bye 😃