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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys thanks for ur response here goes the awaited part

part 1




Bose Mansion

Dada: sona listen to me one last time plz u cant face them

Sona: dada plz I am sure about all this ... uss baby par jitna unka haq hai mera bhi utna hi haq hai..

She drove to dikshit mansion !!

Nothing had changed ... only the silences grew ...

Keechu bhaiya: doctor didi aap

Sona: ji aap ko meine pehchana nahi !!

Kb: didi mein keechu

By time not only the wallls of mansion but even the members had grown older she smiled with a sigh

Ved ka room kaha hai?

Wooh upar wala hai didi natasha madam ka kamra

She went there fighting all the tears she was filled with ... There was a baby sleeping in the middle of red bed .. yes red was natashas favourite colour !! and dev had made sure that all her wishes were granted during there trimsters !!!

She went just to find a photo galleria which had all their pics but only dev and ved throughtout the last 10 months ... Dev had celebrated every month birthday of ved !!

2 hours later


"Ek chotu Sa spoon baby food and my ved will be full" she kissed his forehead rubbing his nose with hers to which he giggled showing her newly born one tooth...

Ved got so much attached to sona . even though dev had pampered him badly no one can ever replace a mothers love for her child


"Aj hum pehle shinchan dekhenge then hum thoda thoda chalne ka try karenge okay baby?" she finished wiping his face softly...


"What my baby wants to do next ?" she said to him making him wear a small tee...
he giggled as she tickled his little tummy...


"I love you my baby" she nuzzled his nose lovingly...


"he is not your baby..." A yell came from the doorstep...


"Ummm..Dev..." she mumbled looking down...


"Its Mr Dikshit...sonakshi..." he said glaring her...


"I m sorry sir" shee told him looking away...


"And Ved is not your baby...he is my son...only mine, You are just his babysitter" he said taking the baby from her arms...


"Maa..." Their small angel mumbled his first word, he looked at her shockingly while her eyes filled with tears of happiness of motherhood ...


"Get lost" he yelled throwing a flower vase on the floor...


sona holds the baby close to her and gulped to utter something...


"Mr DIkshit...i ..." she tried to make a sentence when he angrily gripped another vase...


"Why u always try to snatch my every happiness? Why? What do you want?" His eyes oozed fire...


"I don't want anything... I'm know he is your baby, I don't have any right on him...but I really love him just like you love him..." she said looking up at him...his eyes filed with tears...


"Love? Really? Do you even understand the meaning of this word? No sonakshi ! Never...you can never understand love...never...and don't cross your limits ever...just because I gave u this job...that doesn't mean I will spare your nuisance..." he said warning her...


"Leave...right now..." he ordered turning around...


"Baby aap pappa k sath raho...okay? " she told ved in his ears and about to put him down on the bed...when he clutched her kurti and looked at her hopefully...


"Sir ...woh baby..." she said in a low voice...
"Take him with you...waise v tumne isse v apne taraf karhi liya hai" he said smiling sarcastically thus making her feel ever so helpless...
she closed the door and walked away leaving a crying Dev behind...
"Why did you leave me natasha?? Why?" he sobbed hugging a photo frame...

Akhir kon tha tumhare sivaay mera?????????

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome part Tejaswi...
Very strong story line with brilliant portrayal of characters...

Very much curious for mystery to unfold.
Want to know what exactly the roles are here?

Natasha ved dev sona...how these four people are related to each other?

Do continue soon and thanks for the pm
Edited by Alvapriya - 9 years ago
...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Alvapriya

Awesome part Tejaswi...
Very strong story line with brilliant portrayal of characters...

Very much curious for mystery to unfold.
Want to know what exactly the roles are here?

Natasha ved dev sona...how these four people are related to each other?

Do continue soon and thanks for the pm


thanks
glad you liked it harshada 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice Update..
Is Ved Sona and dev's child?
What about Natasha?
So much questions
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by sneharay - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Very well written part!!
But I can't bear Dev loving natasha!!!😡
Him crying for her???😡
Itna toh pata chal gaya ki, natasha is devs wife, hope the mystery would get unfolded soon
...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice Update..
Is Ved Sona and dev's child?
What about Natasha?
So much questions
Update soon
Thanks for pm



mention not about the pm sneha !!
thanks u liked it
...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

Very well written part!!

But I can't bear Dev loving natasha!!!😡
Him crying for her???😡
Itna toh pata chal gaya ki, natasha is devs wife, hope the mystery would get unfolded soon




aditi ?????????????

are you sure natasha is dev's wife 🤣
...tejaswi... thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Alvapriya




I don't think Natasha is dev's wife


harshada tu nha plz keep your prdictions to yourself !!!
😭
Edited by ...tejaswi... - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...




aditi ?????????????

are you sure natasha is dev's wife 🤣

I think so, bcoz natasha ke pasand ka bedsheet kyon lagega??
And Dev and natasha's pics too??😲😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: ...tejaswi...




harshada tu nha plz keep your prdictions to yourself !!!
😭



Sorry ...Will keep that in mind.
Edited my post as well.


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