SS- A Journey. Part 1, Page 3!

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Continue soon..nice prologue 👍🏼
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Hey hey hey !!! Wow .. Pari !!! ... Mindblowingly beautiful starting.
Hmm... where to start ?
Love is indeed a journey - a memorable experience.An experience never has a proper ending or beginning right ? It just ... happens. Hote hote pata bhi nahi chalta .. isiliye tho itna khoobsarat sa ehsaas hai. They sometimes say that shaayad saccha pyar wahi hai jahan manzil tak pohonch hi na sakein. You know it is love when you can be happy just watching them , not be disappointed at their flaws and interpret twice every action of theirs. When you finally fall in love, you realise why it never worked out with others.
Beautiful lines follow that first para Pari! Hats off.👏


I am guessing that this ss is maybe not going to have a happy ending -which is romantic according to me - more like star crossed <wistful> - it is truly going to be a journey rushing through anger, jealousy ,tears, laughter and of course love. Maybe it is almost like a diary of sorts u know - like a unknown pop- with all their precious moments and why they did not end up together ...They don't just get together - in heart and soul they are always going to be together because love can never be attributed to force - the fire is always victorious for it can neither be created nor be destroyed by force. Mashallah <3. i'm probably guessing pole oppositely. 😆

Lamhe ye suhane saath ho na ho, kal me aaj jaisi koi baat ho na ho.Aapka pyaar hamesa is dil mai rahega, chahe poori umar mulaqat ho na ho.
P.S : PM me please - I almost missed this post , but I'm a stalker as you know😆
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amazing...waiting for it...😃
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Looking forward for this one P !!! 🤗 ❤️
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Fantastic! As ever! Do PM me when you update...I missed this one. I was going through the OS/FF index when I found this. You see, I read EVERY OS of yours. They offer the kind of feel and story I always expect. Keep up the work, continje soon and PM me!
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Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Continue soon
Waiting...


Many thankies Ferdous! I am finally updating😆
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Originally posted by: krystle123

nice ... continue soon



Thankies babe! Updating as soon as I get through the replies😆
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Continue soon..nice prologue 👍🏼



Thankies Sneha! You are such a darling!
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Originally posted by: ammu3

Hey hey hey !!! Wow .. Pari !!! ... Mindblowingly beautiful starting.

Flattery will get you everywhere! Did you know that?😆

Hmm... where to start ?
Love is indeed a journey - a memorable experience.An experience never has a proper ending or beginning right ? It just ... happens. Hote hote pata bhi nahi chalta .. isiliye tho itna khoobsarat sa ehsaas hai. They sometimes say that shaayad saccha pyar wahi hai jahan manzil tak pohonch hi na sakein. You know it is love when you can be happy just watching them , not be disappointed at their flaws and interpret twice every action of theirs. When you finally fall in love, you realise why it never worked out with others.
Beautiful lines follow that first para Pari! Hats off.👏

HOW AM I EVER MEANT TO REPLY BACK THIS FLAWLESS PARAGRAPH? HOW BAE? HOOOW? TEMMEEE!😲👏. When you fall in love and realise why it never worked out with anyone else? OATH BAE! PREACH THIS!


I am guessing that this ss is maybe not going to have a happy ending -which is romantic according to me - more like star crossed <wistful> - it is truly going to be a journey rushing through anger, jealousy ,tears, laughter and of course love. Maybe it is almost like a diary of sorts u know - like a unknown pop- with all their precious moments and why they did not end up together ...They don't just get together - in heart and soul they are always going to be together because love can never be attributed to force - the fire is always victorious for it can neither be created nor be destroyed by force. Mashallah <3. i'm probably guessing pole oppositely. 😆

Romantic ending? It's romantic in my eyes?😆
@Bold: You are definitely on the right track here! YUUUS! Basically now that I am posting the first part I might as well tell you. Basically (long story short), there is a notion in Islamic literature that in a romantic relationship there are in fact seven stages a couple goes through. And the seven chapters will be on the seven stages! Hopefully that makes more sense as you read the chapters? (As you maybe read the chapters?😆)



Lamhe ye suhane saath ho na ho, kal me aaj jaisi koi baat ho na ho.Aapka pyaar hamesa is dil mai rahega, chahe poori umar mulaqat ho na ho.

^WHY DO YOU INSIST ON KILLING ME? WHYYY? BAE? DONT PLAY WITH MY HEART! I think I love you, marry me?


P.S : PM me please - I almost missed this post , but I'm a stalker as you know😆
I am so lazy when it comes to PMing people, I will try! I promise nothing 🤪



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