SS- A Journey. Part 1, Page 3! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Zaya.hp

RES

I'll come back for sure!

Thanks so much for the PM.

The name's Vignyathri. I knkw it is a difficult name to get your tounge around. Call me VI? Only if you can't remember my VERY long name... 😊

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UNRES

First of all, the concept of the 7 colours is really something else. I really hope you complete this SS.

I hope I complete this too! This SS has been my baby for four years now and I feel like it's high time it gotten introduced to the world! (😆)

Second, would all the next parts be like this? Description of the show's scenes in your way? Or will it be a mix of both your creation and the show's?

Good question! Possibly not? A combination of both I want to say, mainly bcos the concept of the SS has been in my mind for ages and certain things I want ti highlight throughout. So sometimes the scenes and sometimes my imagination? I actually really liked this question😆

Your description took the whole scene to another level. Really. I feel so much at ease with your writing. The quality of writing suits my choice SO much.

DONT DO THIS TO ME! I don't know how to accept compliments and hence I just sit here try to find words to reply your praises to and a simple thank you just never seems enough for me! How I wish I could just knock on your door and hug you 🤗

And seriously, the concept is really exemplary!

ViRI! Vi? Gyan? (Since we haven't decided on a nickname) but you are going to make me cry. Any time. Any time now. oh look❤️

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Wow... It's amazing dear
So so so beautifully written ... Dev's attraction towards sona 😳 ... Nd his small jealously to see his potential husband ... It was treat to read... 😃 ...

I am so glad you picked up on the little green monster! I wanted this to be an attraction one so didn't dwell too much on the jealousy part, but I thought I needed to add that part in. For some random reason?😆

Nd these lines ..
Koi Noor hai tu, kyun door hai tu
Koi khwaab hai ya parchayi hai
Satrangire...
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Amazing... Lines...simply beautiful

This is one of my fav songs of all time! It's beautiful and the lyrics are just something else! They don't make songs like that often 😳, mainly picked this verse bcos I thought it worked well with the attraction phase?

Egerly waiting for dev's fall in love ...

Not the next part, but the one after that 😉

Do pm me.. It would be my pleasure if I will be a part of ur Jouney...

I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE!😲🤣.. Well done Ferdous! That was a brilliant pun, I almost rolled off my bed
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I had totally missed this. HOW?

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl

I had totally missed this. HOW?

But luckily I found it... awesome story... loving it... please continue soon and... Pari meri Fairy... PM me pleeezzz

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

NAAW SRI🤗

"Pari meri fairy" I actualyl blushed ☺️ <-- Like that☺️

Thankiiies Sriri, riri, briri (I tried?😆), I am so pleased to get this sort of feedback from you🤗

How beautiful?/❤️ i literally have no words. That simple saree scene, you really write that scene so beautifully that i really was feeling lost in it and Dev's view regarding Sona beauty! Mind blowing and that coffee symbolism. Each and every thing is beautiful. Cant wait for next one.

And those Poetic Lines
P.S i think i have repeated word beautiful many time.🤔 My bad! Cant find another word for this amazing work.😆
Don't forget to PM.😉

Originally posted by: AnatomyAddict

I actually think you are one of the kindest souls on this forum! Even though I don't know your name or anything, I still love you rukia! You are such a gem!

Thank you for the compliment. I am blushing☺️
😆 Love you too.❤️