DEVAKSHI OS- DREAMS AND REALITY - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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passion written all over!!😳☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Truly... Amazing OS
So intense, So passionate...
Well written ...
I wish, it could be little longer...
Bt, OK ... Next one will be 😆 😆
Thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing, superb yar...☺️ so passionate...okay do right more😆😆...and pm me for next one😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: priyanvs

wow dear

it is really nice



thank u😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanx a lot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

passion written all over!!😳☺️



😳
glad u liked it😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Ferdous_69

Truly... Amazing OS
So intense, So passionate...
Well written ...
I wish, it could be little longer...
Bt, OK ... Next one will be 😆 😆
Thanks for pm...



oh thANX A LOT FARA
GLAD U LIKED IT
NEXT TIME PAKKA A BIGGER ONE😉😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rukiaa

amazing, superb yar...☺️ so passionate...okay do right more😆😆...and pm me for next one😉



thanx di
😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Viji.Chandran

nice os...

too good dream



thnk u😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: abshcool

IMP- HEY YA PPL
SHRUTI HERE
SO THIS IS MY FIRST OS ON DEVAKSHI
ACTUALLY I WROTE THIS OS ON TWINJ
RECENTLY I THOUGHT ABT OUT RECREATING IT AS A DEVAKSHI OS
HOPE U GUYS WILL LIKE IT😳



Passion can only follow desire. Therefore passion absolutely must be a result of desire! Yet desire leading to passion is very special... Passion is not shared between strangers! 😉😉

Her hair was silky smooth... We were alone there in the moon light... I held her close , and she was protected within the circle of my arms... I didn't just think about our first kiss, I had dreamed about it! Her lips looked so inviting, yet I didn't want to invade them.. ... First I kissed just her cheek, and moved slowly closer to the sweetness of her lips. I remember that her lips were at first moist, and cool... She slightly parted her lips , and I did the same... Such sweetness I have never imagined! Now as we begin to touch , and tantalize each other,..r bodies radiating heat...her hands dug deep out into my hairs and mine caressing her cheeks and holding her waist firmly...her scent fading my senses mr n mr...we were so deep in the moment...nature too provided the best atmosphere...slowly we started drawing away frm each other as r breath gave away...☺️☺️


*******************************SPLASH*************************************

that was it...SONA was nw hell irritated...fr the past 35 min she was trying to wake up her sleeping beauty hubby...but he was in no mood to wake up anytime soon...n more over he was hugging his pillow like anything n muttering something which irritated her all the more...she wanted to tell him something very urgently n here he was doing weird things with the pillow on the bed...loosing her cool...she emptied a full glass of water on him...Dev sprang out frm his slumber n glared at sona ...poor thing little did he knew that he was just dreaming abt kissing her...he felt disappointed n angry at the same time...disappointed because the dream felt so real to him n angry because kunj emptied a whole glass on him...🤣

D- pagal hein tu...kya badtameezi hein yeh...aese utha tha hein koi apne pati ko
S- tho phir aur kya karoon...pichle 40 min se tumhe uthane ki koshish mein hoon lekin tum ho ki pagal ko taraf...apne pillow ko hug karke badbada rahe the...😆😆
aese logon ko pagal kehte MR DIXIT...(told SONA with utmost pride in her voice coz she was successful in irritating him)
vese kya bad bada rahe the sleeping beauty😉😉

D- u really wanna know???
OK lemme show u😉😉
DEV approached SONA, SONA was confused abt what was going in his mind...but that confusion didn't last fr long as DEV pressed his LIPS onto her soft ones😳😳😳

SONA was confused at the start n tried to struggle but she gave in n started kissing him with equal intensity..DEV STARTED exploring her mouth's every nook n corner...both stood there n kissed fr 5 min...sona drew out frm him n looked up...he came closer n whispered:
d- yeh dekha tha meine😉(he said n walked away winking at an already crimson sona😳😳😳)


so here u go
do review
shruti







just read it Shruti.!!! its fab !!! love the passion and intensity :) i can just imagine sona blushing at the end 😳
its a shame we'll never see a passionate kiss like this on tv between dev and sona but keep making these stories so i can atleast imagine it 😃

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