DevAkshi TS~Tables have turned~ Final part on pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nicely written. Hope it does not happen though.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Nice one :)

Great start :)
Very well written :)
Continue soon :)
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Originally posted by: c85rie

Nicely written. Hope it does not happen though.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it!!! Please update soon and send me a pm too <3
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Originally posted by: Kryztal

Loved it!!! Please update soon and send me a pm too <3

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Originally posted by: independent

Nice os. . Continue soon

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Heya guys!!! I back posting the final part of this TS..Thank you all for your support.

Its been whole two years,Sona had been true to her words.Dev tried finding her, calling her but all in vain.He was grieving for his mistakes.Everything was much worse than ever, he wasn't a workaholic ,brooding, egoistic man anymore.But his feelings for Sona was much stronger and clear than before.He refused to get married to anybody else.

Dev was walking out of the Mall towards his car ,suddenly crashed into someone, making her all things fall.
"I an so sorry, Ms."
He froze.Sona collecting all her things back.His sona was standing in front if him.

"Woah.Mr. Dev dixit saying sorry.Must be my lucky day"
Her sarcasm was at its peak.She still has that old fire in her eyes.It was like their first meeting all over again.

"Sona, where the hell have you been??"
He couldn't digest the fact that she was behaving so casually with him yet he was dying to talk to her.
"Excuse me?? Mr.Dixit . i guess i made that very clear that i was taking a break from you"
She replied,her voice steely hard.It wasn't like she didn't missed him or something but she wasn't going to surrender this time.
"Break?? A two year break"
He yelled at her , unable to control his overwhelming emotion.His fury returning back.

"See this was the reason, i left.We always fight with eachother .Nothing has changed"
She replied with the same fury although her posture was calm and collected.This irked him alot.

"We fight because we love each other.Everything has changed ,Sona.Open your eyes"
His eyes softened.
"Love is not everything,Dev.We will still be hurting.I hurt you.then you'll hurt me,its an unstoppable cycle.We aren't meant to be."
She reasoned him.She cannot be with him once again.

"I won't hurt you .I promise You made my life easier,it was always me who messed it up.I am not saying we should get back together but just give me a second chance.Every one deserves a second chance"
He looked straight into her eyes, meaning his each and every word.This time he was ready to compromise a bit for her.He wanted to spend his entire life with her ,not on his conditions.He was tired if living life on his own conditions .for once he wanted to live life on her conditions with her.

"We are like those parallel line,who always run together but cannot meet each other"
She said, her calm posture crumbling slowly.Tears welled up in her eyes.
"There is nothing more left"
She turned to leave, but Dev pulled her.
"Sona"
His voice saddened.
"Whatever i have done to you, if i had said sorry earlier would you have forgave me"
His voice shivered.
"We would still be together"

"I don't know"
She was lost in her little world, thinking about it.She still loves him.Suddenly Dev pulled her into him and slammed his lips to her,Venting out all his frustration, anger and anxiousness but the most prominent thing was love and care.Sona felt his love through that kiss.She cannot let this happen, he cannot make her weak once again,so she pushed him away.
"We can never be together"
She was feeling angry not because Dev had kissed her but because she responded to him.
"But you only said We are like parallel lines, always together"
He smiled at her.Finally getting everthing off his chest.That kiss told him that somewhere sona still had feelings for him.

"Don't twist my words,Dev"
She spat but she knew .Dev wouldn't listen to her now.She turned to leave.this time successfully but this time Dev's next words made her froze.
"I was crazy enough to let you go ,once but i am not that mad to let you go again"
He smiled at her and continued
"I will prove to you that i deserve a second chance, Don't worry Sona you'll be mine ,soon"
He finished with a heart breaking,charming smile intact on his face.

"We will see"
She smiled to herself and went from there.Dev determined yet loving face imprinted in her mind.
Dev was determined to get her back.He knew only she can keep him in check and smack him upside down.He won't let her go,once again.He will fight for her.It was their new beginning.

The End

hope u all like it!!!
Maybe not upto your expectations
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love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well written. .
Excellent os. .

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow awesome update dear
and thank u for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update :)
Loved it :)
Thanks for the PM :)

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