DevAkshi TS~Tables have turned~ Final part on pg 3

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sneharay
Superb Ts.. 👍🏼

Thanks a ton

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: abshcool
awesome update😳😳😳
loved it do write more...😃😳

Thank u..

Your encouragement means a lot..

Will try

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CreativeAish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

I like ur imagination...But don't u think 2 yrs is too much span! I know, she is a strong girl, but how could she ignore all the efforts done by Dev in these two years? & if she could ignore it, they how she melts quickly now?
But, still definitely worth reading!! I like ur way of presenting story!! & part one is one of the best shots I have read!
Keep writing... :)

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: FanOfCreativity
I like ur imagination...But don't u think 2 yrs is too much span! I know, she is a strong girl, but how could she ignore all the efforts done by Dev in these two years? & if she could ignore it, they how she melts quickly now?
But, still definitely worth reading!! I like ur way of presenting story!! & part one is one of the best shots I have read!
Keep writing... :)

Ohksy..first of all thank u..
She just went away from.his life, it was a pure coincidence that they met after 2yrs...She didn't know a thing about dev's effort...
Did I mention that they are together, No.They still aren't...She didn't melt..She just challenged Dev..
Thank u for ur valuable feedback, I appreciate criticism
Well glad that u liked it..
Thank ta again..

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: luvflicksgirl
FANTASTIC😳

Thank ya

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Binzzz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

amazing story...
long separation track happened in this story...wow..
totally enjoyed...
loved sona's character very much...strong & independent...

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JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Read both parts...A breath of fresh air...

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WhiteNoise

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: binuuu
amazing story...
long separation track happened in this story...wow..
totally enjoyed...
loved sona's character very much...strong & independent...

Thank you very much...
And now they are showing a separation track...
M glad that u liked it...
Sons has always been a confident and independent girl..I can't change it even if I want to