devakshi SS: Blossom part 2 updated

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hai guys am here to start part 1 of the story hope you like it...
Everybody in the street stopped doing their work, stared at sonakshi's house. All the neighbours came out of the house to hear the conversation OOPS noise coming from the house. Siyaji was in her highest temper where she couldn't even recognize whom she is beating. Bitooji was busy getting all the kicks and beatings those belonged to Sonakshi. Sonakshi escaped from her mom's each and every hit by jumping over the table and chair. Finally siyaji caught her ponytail that was floating...no no flying in the air. Once she caught, that's it hair band was thrown to one end as well as Sonakshi to the other end.

"what am I going to do with her?" Siyaji knelt before pooja room crying to God.

Bitooji got confused whether he should pick up his wife or apply ointment to Sonakshi. It was past midnight. Siyaji came to a conclusion of sending Sonakshi out of the house. She packed...no no threw her belongings in the middle of the road. Sonakshi hurried to pick everything up.

"Ma,is it right to send your one and only daughter out in the midnight?"

Again siyaji reached her temper to beat Sonakshi. But this time Sonakshi started to understand the situation and ran from her mom's sight.

Sonakshi walked alone the street where there wasn't even a stray dog welcoming her. She stared at the sky for a few seconds, sighed and went through the street. It was 3 am in the morning.

Thanvi was texting her boyfriend when she continuously heard the knocking from the door. After 10 mins, she finally woke up from her bed to reach the door and was shocked seeing Sonakshi and a big suitcase along with her messed up ponytail.

"What the ****?Hey smiley why are you here at this hour?"
Without answering Sonakshi headed into the house without even taking her suitcase. Thanvi followed her with the suitcase. Sonakshi went straight into the bedroom and slept stretching her hands in 180 degree and legs in 120 degree. Thanvi shooted with many questions to which he didnt hear any replies. Suddenly Sonakshi sat on the bed and threw her hairband, loosened her hair...

"What did I do? Is there any wrong I did? But my mom is blaming me for everything...I even dont know what is the reason for this crap?"

Entire night was filled the crippled story of Sonakshi...Thanvi couldnt sleep ...no not even wink the entire night...

Same night at Star bar where Dev was drinking with Khushal. Khushal praised Dev for his heroic...couldnt say it...some act of stopping his Ex's wedding.

"Awesome yar...I didnt think you will go this far..."

"Sonakshi...you thought you will be happy after you leave me...lets see now what you will do...everytime you try to enter into a new life...I will stop it..."

"You cancelled her marriage even..."Khushal didnt finish his sentence and slept on Dev's lap drunkedly...


i would like to see ur views and comments...

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krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
nice...😛 but character names are confusing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
tanq krystle123 for ur view...dev and sonakshi are main leds siyaji and bitooji are sona's parents...thanvi is her friend and khushal is dev's friend
upto now these are the characters

i hope u wont get confused ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear
Continue soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
tanq for ur comments guys...here is the part 2...
The whole night was filled with cries, scoldings of sona that disturbed thanvi to even close her eyes for a second. When she was about to finish it was already 6 : 30 in the morning. Thanvi started getting ready to her office and said that she will introduce someone to sona this evening. When sona asked about the person, she left home saying bye to her in a hurry.

Sona went to her office and was shocked to hear that she needs to prepare a new taste receipe for chips that her company makes. Again she was pushed to the difficult time of her life.

Everytime sona discovers a new receipe/taste, she always used to get ideas from prayush(her boyfriend). Now she had no chance of even seeing him since she got dumped by him before the day of her wedding. She got dumped by him but she told everyone including her parents that she broke off her wedding before her marriag,e to maintain her pride.

Here Dev is busy recording sounds for the new project. He is the most cruel person in the world to torture his employees with new different ways everyday because he is a perfection freak. His employees suffer from very difficult time being, no working with him.

He was not like this when he dated sonakshi(his ex)[this is another sonakshi,Dev's first love]. Eversince he got stood by her at the wedding, he became so arrogant, lost his heart,soul and everything.

While adding an important note at an impotant moment in the movie, he got some feeling that he is again going to meet sonakshi in his life. He heard the word 'sonakshi' again and again. But its his own voice calling 'sonakshi' again and again that made him to make mistakes in editing the notes , which he had never even done once in his life.

Thanvi called sona that she need to introduce an important person to her and said her to come to the coffee shop at 5 pm. Dev had asked thanvi to introduce him to some person who knows a lot about food and cooking. So she planned this meeting with sona since she is so good about food,cooking. She had already said that her friend is not feeling well since her marriage got stopped recently.

Sona was waiting in the coffee shop for Thanvi and the person she was going to introduce to her. Thanvi entered the coffee shop with Dev.

"Sona, this is Dev " and "Dev, this is sona...sonakshi...my friend...i said right..." she saw him by reminding him of her current state, feeling

Dev was shocked hearing her name and called Thanvi to talk to her for a moment...

"Is the person she was going to marry was Prayush, the director of Goodwill Techno...?"

"Ya ,how do you know...?"

This question made his heart to come out of the body and he felt chills over the entire body...

"OH MY GOD!!!" He turned towards sona and...."Sonakshi...Soinakshi..." called out her name continously as he heard in the afternoon...in his dream...no no it wasn't a dream just a voice he heard ...

waiting for ur comments...
krystle123 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... its awesome dear. 👏 continue soon😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice plz cont soon n pm me

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