SS : Jab dil ke faisle dimaag se hote hai ! Part 12 pg 45..Upd.02.10 - Page 31

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Please update soon...waiting for next part
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SS: Jab dil ke faisle dimaag se hote hai : Part 12
THE PLAY DATE...!!!!!!!

Continued...


" What are you doing...?" He asked

" Breaking stereotypes..." she said...

"Tumhe bike chalani aati hai " he exclaimed

She just gave him the 'what do you think I am doing on this bike' look...
Dev had no choice but to put the helmet on and sit behind kar...

" Ja bike pe rahe hai, kal newspaper mein toh nahi aayenge na " dev teased her

They both recollected the rain talks they had and had a laugh...

" shut up, mere dialogue mere pe hi use mat karo...now hold me tight " she said

" you don't need to tell me that Miss. Bose" he gently whispered in her ears...

His effect his breathe had on her was overwhelming ...But today she had to control herself from giving in too soon..
Sona could see the playful smile he had on his face while teasing her...
Whenever he used to go in the Miss. Bose mode he loved teasing her and playing along ...
finally, Her plan was working...

She was driving carefully through the city and did not give Dev any chance to doubt her driving skills...

" Miss. Bose mujhe nahi pata tha aap itane acchese bike chala leti thi...kab seekha bike chalana..
And mujhe bataya nahi aapne..." he kept on asking her questions on their way out of the city...

" Arey, baba one question at a time...
Mujhe scooty chalani aati hai
So dada ne bike bhi sikha di...
Thoda sa extra effort laga but mai seekh gayi...
Aur rahi baat aapko batane ki, aapne bhi toh mujhe nahi bataya aapko bike chalani nahi aati..." she winked at him looking in the mirror..

As soon as they were on the free way Sona accelerated the bike's speed...

Dev was alarmed by the sudden increase in the speed..he started shouting in her ear, he thought may be because of the speed she might not be able to listen to what he was saying so he shouted " AREYYY sona kya kar rahi ho yaar... abhi abhi compliment di thui yaar ki accha chala leti ho bik ko, pasand nayi aaya compliment to bata deti na mujhe marvane ka plan banana ki kya jarurat thi yaar..."

She suddenly applied the brakes and shouted back at him " Ssshhh, kitana bolate ho yaar..mere kaan ke padade phadane hi hai toh le lo aur chillooo..."

She gave him a look and he understood it was time to shut up...she continued " Do u trust me or no... trust me this is going to be the most memorable night of your life ...just trust me...

And now when I accelerate just let loose and feel the breeze...Trust me !!!!"

Dev did not argue and she took his silence as his approval...She started the bike again and for a few meters drove peacefully but as soon as she began to accelerate dev's grip around her waist tightened and she could sense his fear but she was not going to give up today...

She said with a firm tone " Dev, let go please baby... you said you trust me...and even you know I will never ask you to do anything that will hurt you..please "

He had no choice and she was right she would never ask him to do anything that might hurt him...slowly his grip around her waist started to loosen up and Sona had a smile on her face..

He finally let go of her and spred his arms wised open in the air and as she said felt the breeze...

And to his surprise that moment was MAGIC !!!! He could feel the breeze kiss his cheeks and in his hair...his arms wide open felt like wings and as sona accelerated the speed he left like a BIRD...a FREE BRID...without any responsibilities, any tensions, any baggage of his past..

He was that fifteen year old normal boy who enjoyed the rush of the wind in his hair, loved to fly and compete with the wind, feel the breeze... that innocent little boy who was enjoying his age, his childhood and had to take care of no one or any one's expectations...

That moment he was the BOY he never had a chance to be, he enjoyed it like it was going to be his first and last time...The rush of the wind was surprisingly satisfyingly ..

Sona was stealing glances in the mirror to check if he was enjoying it or not...

Eyes closed, feeling the breeze, arms wide open and a BIGGG satisfying yet innocent smile on his face...

Looking at him smile, she thought to herself that she did a pretty good job today...

After a ride of around a hour, there were hardly any words spoken or glances stolen...Both of them lived the ride of their lives..One got his childhood back and the other was happy to him that...

After all that's what love is..Completing each other in every possible way...

She applied the brakes and the jolt brought dev back to his senses...

"kya hua Sonar ok kyu dii...kitana maza aa raha tha yaar..." He said it like the kid who wanted to ride the double seat once more...

"areyyy, ek ghante se ghyma rahi hoon tumko...bus ab mai bhi thak gayi" sona said teasing him.

"ek ghanta ?????? mujhe to pata bhi nahi chala... Accha theek hai tum thak gayi hogi na chalo ghar chalet hai..." He said with concern..

She always failed to understand how this MAN.. the man she loved did this so well... five minutes back he was the kid enjoying being free and now again the MAN...

" kuch thaki waki nahi hoon, abhi toh puri raat baaki hai..." Saying so she pulled out a bat and a ball and signalled at him to looked behind...

She had gathered all the kids whose parents were working nearby at a construction site as even they did not get to play that often...

He was surprised as hell... he had no idea him saying that he never had a normal childhood and never played cricket that much would result to this...

" Sona yeh sab kya hai ? " he asked amused..

" yeh bat, yeh ball, wo stumps and yeh team banana ke liye team mates mr.obhodro..

We are in opposite teams my love, beat me if you can. " saying so she winked at him and walked towards the kids...

Teams were made, and they played cricket for the next two hours...nobody playing that night felt tired even for a minute..dev was happy beyond words and it was evident on his face..

The kids got to be their age and sona because she saw HIM SMILE...

While he was playing and dancing around with the kids, she came away to take food for everyone and from a distance she saw the man she loved a lot, LOVNG HIS LIFE A LOT...

That moment, she promised herself that she will do whatever it takes to give him his lost childhood not because she felt bad for him for missing on it, but because she LOVED him, and she wanted to see him smile always and because he deserved it...

They played played and played that night...had snacks and dev and sona dropped the kids safely at their respective houses as it was very late...

The kids had the time of their lives...Sona and dev went and sat under a tree in the nearby garden...

She gave him a bunch of comic books and said " bachapana karne ki koi umar nahi hoti dev, promise me today come what may you will never let the child inside you die. Being free, being yourself, enjoying moments like this is no crime..aur yeh once in a while zaroori bhi hota hai..don't do it for me or the kids or for that matter anyone else, do it for yourself" saying so she kissed his forehead and rested her head on his shoulder...

She did not even realise when she feel asleep but dev was wide awake...

After so long he felt alive again, happy, chirpy, innocent and LOVED...

He wanted to treasure this moment forever...So he removed his phone and starting typing a note...

" Dear life,

I don't believe in GOD or destiny or anything which is not me...But today I really want to thank whoever that is, whom the world calls GOD, if there is one for sending this beautiful angel in my life.. I really have no idea what great deeds I have done to deserve her in my life. To be loved by this beautiful woman besides me..the woman who loves me unconditionally..

The woman who has accepted me with all my flaws and my baggage...She understands me more than I will ever understand myself... Like for today, I never knew how it felt to not have a childhood like normal boys, because how can you miss something you never had...

But she, she understood it before I did..that a part of me always wanted to be that NORMAL guy, who have loads of fun, did mistakes, played pranks, had a friend circle...But today that I experienced it , I feel COMPLETE...

She made me realise that I can be a boy again and enjoy my life again..She is WALKING WITH ME, PICKING UP ALL MY PIECES THAT I LOST BEHIND in my life..pieces I never even thought I will get to live again ever...but she did...she makes me believe in LIFE..in LOVE... She is the one supporting me, handling me and never leaving behind even a single thing that matters to me even once... Part by part she is FIXING ME...

Life is full of phases, if you miss one, you miss a part of your life..But today, she fixed that part for me forever.. girlfriends want romantic dates, but this one here planned a PLAY DATE so that I don't miss out on things...

I lived a lifetime today only because of her. She completes me and makes me celebrate my existence in this world...Because of her I know that I am much more than THE DEV DIXIT..She makes my heart beat like it never did before and it never will. And it beats ONLY for her..She is my guardian angel and I love and respect her with all my heart..SHE COMPLETES ME... She is special, she is extraordinary, she is compassionated, she is strong headed, she is LOVE...

My LOVE... MY PRIDE...MY GEM...MY LIFE...MY REASON TO BREATHE and MY REASON TO LIVE...SHE SAVED ME...

And I am VERYYY MUCH THANKFUL to the unknown, for making her happen to me...

I LOVE HER AND I ALWAYS WILL. PERIOD. "

- SONAKSHI ka DEV'

That night, LOVE made an atheist acknowledge the presence of GOD...

Truly, that's the power of LOVE... THAT WAS THE POWER OF THEIR LOVE...

To be continued...

PS: pllzz do comment and let me know if liked it...

I hope u guys do...

And sorry because of net issues I wont be able to PM today...sorry...

Hope you guys like it...

-Shaina

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Posted: 8 years ago
Its amazing dear.. Seriously such a wonderful update this is...
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It was amazing!!😊
Cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Super awesome update👏 loved it to the core...
Brilliant writing👏 play date was too good ...
plz continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
THE PLAY DATE FINALLYYY!!!!😳
Was eagerly waiting for this one!!😳

The bike ride and the cricket!! What a better way to celebrate ur day with ur lovved one!!❤️ You brought in the whole scenario soo well!! 👏 I envy your talent girl!!👏😛

"After all that's what love is..Completing each other in every possible way..." - This line was just perfect!!
Sona completed him in every possible way! Giving back his lost childhood and making him relive those good old days he had missed!! Thats soo dreamy!!😳❤️

Lovedd it!!
Eagerly waiting for next!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
this is the best chapter in your SS. beautifully written. no word to describe the wonderful feeling i have after reading it. You have satisfied the heart :-)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Just loved this part as your whole story...I know you have heard if from all & me too but wanted to say again that you have very great talent in writing...please please update next part soon...eagerly waiting for the next part update
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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing
Thanks for pm
Next update fast please

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