Devakshi OS - Love the present moment, future can wait

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Hi all,

My name is Abi. I haven't watched a hindi TV serial for nearly a decade now but started watching KRPKAB since day 1. I wish the serial does justice to the awesome introductory promos and absolutely love the female version of the title track.

I haven't seen any of Shaheer's previous serials but got to know about him in Indonesia. So many girls there asked me about Shaheer and I really had to google him to find out. Lol I thought they got confused with the name and were asking me about Shahrukh instead 😆. Those girls were so upset with me that being an Indian I should atleast know about Shaheer. They are just crazy about him.

Anyways here's my try to write an OS. This is my first attempt so hopefully your response would be gentle. 😃 Sorry its a little longer than I intended.

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This OS starts from the point where last episode ended. Sona wants to confess her feelings to Dev and Dev, who is getting late for a very important meeting, offers to drop her home.

In Dev's car:

Dev again gets a call from office and he says he will reach there soon. Dev tells Sona about the business meeting and that this is his dream project. If this new deal went smoothly, his company would be amongst the top communications company in the country.

While Dev shares his professional dreams and aspirations, Sona is busy looking outside the window, admiring the beauty of the rain pouring down gently. She is engulfed with emotions she has never experienced before. Her love reflected in her big dreamy eyes and she has that constant smile that refuses to leave her face nowadays. She was in love for the first time in her life and she wanted to announce it to the whole world. But sharing her feelings with Mr. Dixit would be the most difficult thing she has ever done. What if he says NO. She remembered the changes she has seen in him since the first day they met and how those frequents fights and arguments have been pushed aside to pave way for endearing moments of sharing intimate feelings and heartfelt concern for each other.

Rain was coming down heavily now. She opened the car window and extended her arm outside, closed her eyes and felt the droplets touching her hand and face. Her smile widened as happiness filled her heart.

Dev stared at her and admired that she enjoys such simple pleasures of life. He noticed how her face was brimming with unknown happiness.

"Ms. Bose, close the window. You listening, Ms. Bose. You'll get wet". She came out of trance. Lost in her thoughts, she hasn't heard a single word Dev was saying till now. She felt embarrassed and quickly closed the window.

"I was telling you about this business deal of mine and you were not even listening", Dev complained. Seeing that Sona was still quiet, Dev asked "You wanted to tell me something Ms. Bose".

"Me, nah nothing, Mr. Dixit", Sona replied, trying to move away from the uncomfortable topic. Dev looked at her with slight annoyance "Arey, you said you have to tell me something important".

Sona realized she can't move away from the subject anymore, instead of confessing her love she thanked him "Actually, I wanted to thank you Mr. Dixit, I didn't get a chance before to thank you properly for all your help and concern". Dev interrupted "Please Ms. Bose, there is no need for a thank you. I did what anyone would have done in such a situation".

It was Sona's chance to interrupt him now "Can I complete Mr. Dixit. What you did for me that day, kept me conscious, took me to the hospital, made arrangements for my blood group, stayed all night in the hospital and then later you visited me every day in the hospital. No one has done anything like this for me before". She completed her thought with tears in her eyes and pain in her voice "So, Thank you...for everything".

Dev understood her emotions and preferred to just quietly look at her face. After waiting for few minutes he said "Remember Ms. Bose, you took Ma to the hospital and you didn't even know her then. It's because of you Ma's health has improved so much. Neha is so happy with her English tuitions and I know you convinced her to go for it. You saved Nikki that night and I haven't thanked you properly for any of this. I guess I am not good at saying Thank you also".

And Sona's sand castle of love just came crashing down. It was not love for her why he did all this, he did it as a duty. This was his way of showing his gratitude for all that Sona has done for his family. She was stupid to even think there could be any other reason. She knew she would not be able to hold her tears anymore, and she doesn't want him to see her so vulnerable. So she put up a smile and tried to lighten the mood "You looked happy when you danced with those kids". She teased him and in return got back a childlike innocent smile from him.

He stopped the car as they reached her home. She wished him luck for his meeting and got out of the car. "Thank you Ms. Bose" Dev said. She smiled and corrected him "Sonakshi" and walked towards her house in the rain.

Her fairy-tale dream was broken but she felt she stepped right into the world of real true love. She loved Dev and as of now that itself was sufficient enough for her. For now, it doesn't matter to her how their future would unfold. She was happy being in the present moment.

"Khud ko tumse jod liya, baaki sab pyar par chod diya"

Dev watched her walking in the rain and said "Thank you Sona" and left for his meeting.

Next day in Dev's office

Tina entered Dev's cabin and gives him a gift bag. "What's this Tina?"

"Sir, Dr. Bose has given this for you". Dev's eyes searched the office "Is Dr. Bose here in office?"

"No Sir, she gave it to me when we met for lunch today. She gave treat to the four of us to thank us for blood donation".

"Leave it on my desk. I am busy now, will check it later". Tina left the gift bag and turned to leave.

As soon as Tina walked away, Dev hurriedly opened the bag and found a beautiful bouquet of his favourite flowers with a note "Thank you for everything - from Sonakshi". He opened another gift packet and it was a blue shirt. The second note read "For spoiling your shirt again". Dev could not hide his smile any longer. He remembered his white shirt which was covered in holi colours. He has kept it safely in the cupboard which holds all his treasured memories.

Tina looks back and finds Mr. Dixit smiling looking at the gifts. She quietly closed the door behind her, making sure Mr. Dixit's precious moment is not disturbed.

Enjoy

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really cute! 😃
But can you continue this... like Sona's POV?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow, what a lovely OS!! Do write a second part, where hopefully Sonakshi's love doesn't remain unrequited. 😊

PS: welcome to the forum, Abi! I look forward to your stories in the future. Cheers!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWESOMEEE!! 👏👏👏
Please continue writing on the forum 👍🏼
Loved this one ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its lovely!!
Plz write more on devakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww...A very lovely devakshi OS
Do continue...
Welcome to the forum Abi 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's BEAUTIFUL! Really! Do write more... 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was lovely and beautifully written..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear🤗, yes, he is very famous not only in our country but also in indonesia. he done two serials and one film in indonesia.
and your os was really amazing. do more os in future. 😛


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all for your kind words. I am really inspired by the great writers we have in this forum.

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