Devakshi OS - Love the present moment, future can wait

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950842

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: randommusings
Thank you all for your kind words. I am really inspired by the great writers we have in this forum.

On the contrary, we are all also inspired by you 😳

Please showcase your talent in here. You are a fantabulous writer yourself Madame 👏

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RamAayeHain

@RamAayeHain

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Very cute and beautiful

Loved it

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basket_101

@basket_101

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

This was an amazing OS!! Though I do wish you would do a continuation of this, but that's your call!

I really enjoyed reading this story, especially how love-struck Sona is! Very well written!

Please do keep writing; I'd love to read more of your work (:

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Autumn_Hue

@Autumn_Hue

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

This was really really nice.. Sandcastles of love did come breaking down but Sonakshi held herself close.. And I loved the gifts and flowers which Sonakshi sent..

Great writing.. You should continue this totally..

Keep writing.

Love,

Kashmi

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Pilu05

@Pilu05

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Abi just say WOW

Beautiful

Simply amazing

Tina is a lovely cupid of Devakshi

Flowers and blue shirt... Not bad Sona

Eagerly waiting for ur next chapter

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

This was so beautifully written ... Just loved each and every part of it ...

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Jyoti Thakur

@JyotiBThakur

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awesome OS... Please keep writing more such beautiful OS. Good job.👏

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@Coffee_Chips

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Hi Abi, welcome to the forum 😊 This was so.. beautiful. The way you've described how Sonakshi felt her love for Dev was magical.

I wish the same rainy scene would've been in the drama too... 😃 Anyway this shouldn't remain as an OS. I would like if you continued it further & made Dev fall for Sona too... (Under opinions of other readers too)

Dev is not familiar with the feeling of love yet if you depicted that, it would be lovely.

Do pm if you plan on writing a sequel to this update...