DEVAKSHI SS: WEDLOCK Part 8 @ pg 15 on 06/6/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
Interesting start :)
Awesome :)
Loved it :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Nice part
Loved it
Update soon plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone for appreciating my efforts and liking it. Thank you and a big hug to everyone for commenting and giving your views.
Wedding Day

The barat reached the venue and mrs bose welcomed everyone.
Dev was sitting in the mandap with his face covered with sehra and nikki n riya were busy teasing him.
N: bhaiyaa aap to shaadi se pehle hi kisi ko muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahe.
R: chup kar nikki aisa kuch nahi hai yeh sehra to isiliye bandha jaata hai taaki humare dulhe raja ko kisi ki nazar na lage.
D: ho gaya tum dono ka ab tum dono chup karogi aur jaao maa se pucho aur kitna time.
N: lagta hai bhaiyaa se wait nahi ho raha
D: nikkiii... jaa aur maa se puch aur unse keh jaldi kare mera already bahut time waste ho gaya hai.
"ohhhoo bhaiyaa aap bhi naa... shaadi hai aapki koi business meeting nahi" saying this neha came there to do his tilak.
Dev moved his sehra for tilak n at the same time sona came to mandap.
Dev was trying to see her face but to his disappointment it was covered with leaves which sona has held before her face.
D: yeh Dr Bose ne apna chehra is tarah patto se kyun dhak raha hai
N: bhaiya wo bengaliyo ki rasam hoti hai.
Nikki: sach kahu ab to mujse bhi wait nahi ho raha yeh combo wedding dekhne ke liye
Everyone giggled except devakshi.
Everyone left the mandap after making devakshi sitting together and panditjee started chanting mantras.
In between the mantras
D: pandit jee jara jaldi jaldi kijiye bahut time waste ho raha hai sabka
S: aur please thoda ghee kam daaliye hawan me yeh dhuaa logo ko sehat ke liye acha nahi.
Said devakshi n everyone giggled.
Neha: maa ab samja aapne sona bhabhi ko hi kyun chuna dev bhaiya ke liye.
Saurabh: kyunki dono ek dusre ke liye imperfectly perfect hai.
Everyone again started laughing
I: chup karo tum dono.. koi mere bacho ko nahi tang karega.
Pandit jee aap apne hisab se shaadi karwaye. Dev Sona bas thodi der waise bhi kaha tumhe roz roz shaadi karni hai.
Again the mandap filled with giggling sound.
*****
The wedding was over and reception was about to start in an hour. Wedding was kept very low profile n only few near n dear ones were called but reception was grand and many foreign delegates have been called.
Sona was getting ready in her room for the grand event when dixit girlz came in.
Neha: bhabhi aap yeh saree pehengei reception me.
S: haa kyun... koi problem hai isme.
R: nahi bhabhi koi problem nahi hai infact yeh saree bahut achi hai bas ...
S: bas... kya
R: wo actually me aapko hurt nahi karna chathi lekin...
S: lekin kya riya.. bhabhi hu me tumhari n tum muje bata sakti
Nikki: ohhhoo aap log bhi na pata nahi kitni formalities karte ho. Me batati hu. Ek sec
Saying this nikki clapped her hands n four ladies came in with some stuffs and a designer gown. The gown was goldenish color with red roses printed designs. One of the lady had a crown in her hand which had daimonds attached on it.
S: yeh sab kya hai
Neha: yeh sab aapke liye hai bhai ki taraf se for this grand reception.
Sona was mesmerized looking at it.
Nikki: hai na bilkul aapke naam ki tarah sona sona.
Neha then asked the ladies to make sona ready n they left the room.
*****
Reception was about to start people have gathered and waiting for the newly wed couple to arrive on stage.
Dev was waiting outside Sona's room like a gentleman.
After a min the door opened and sona came out from her room and her eyes met his and this is the first time they were seeing each other.
He was mesmerized with her beauty her looks her features and was unable to romove his eyes from hers. A slight blush was seen on her face which has increased the glow on her face.
On other side her heart was beating very fast. His charm his looks has taken her aback. Never ever she assumed Dev to be such a good looking personality.
Everyone has asked her to google about dev dixit n have a look but she refused and wanna see him on their wedding day.
She knew Dev was a businees tycoon of the year and yet so down to earth. She loved the way dev respects elders. She knew d bond between ishwari n dev and dev n his sisters. She liked the way dev always respected her maa baba d same way he did to his maa irrespective of them being a middle class. And thats all what made her agree to marry dev.
Dev was a perfect combination of good looks n good nature n she was feeling the luckiest girl to marry him.
Here dev was still lost in her. Even he had never imagined sona to be such bold n beautiful. He knew sona is a well known Dr in the town. He knew she has taken the entire responsiblity of her family at such a young age n he respected her a lot for this. He liked d bond between his maa n sona. His sisters n sona. Even the helpers of his house liked sona a lot n thats all was enough for him to marry her without even meeting her.
Sona was a perfect combination of beauty with brains and he was considering him as d luckiest guy to marry her.
"Ahem ahem" came the voice and both came out of their thoughts and turned around to see Ishawari standing there.
I: Ab puri zindagi yaha khade khade bitani hai ya stage pe bhi chalna hai.
They both blushed and ishwari took the baliyaa over them(mostly ladies do to take away the evil eye)
They both bent down to take her aashirwad and thanked her silently for choosing them as their life partners.
****

Next part coming soon.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Absolutely loved it! Continue soon..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it
So awesome
The way he was mesmerised with sona
How cute
Waiting to read more
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow :)
Superb :)
Amazing update :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Fantastic post
Wow dev and sona adore each other
They are happy to be together
Will love to read how the progresses
Continue soon and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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are u guys serious...nothing like that is happening in the actual series...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you everyone for liking and commenting and sharing your views.
Best Ride

After the reception and bidaai everyone reached Dixit Mansion and then Ishawari asked sona to kick the rice bowl n come in. She then took the newly wed couple to their pooja room where both bowed down in front of God.
N: chalo bhabhi ab me aapko aapka kamra dikhati hu.
I: ruk nikki aaj rat sona dev ke sath nahi tumhare sath tumhare kamre me rahegi.
R: par kyun maa
I: kyunki bangaliyo me rasam hoti hai ki shaadi ki pehli raat dulha dulhan sath nahi rehte. Ise Kalratri kehte hai.
Neha:ohhh yaani ki bhaiya ko ek aur raat azadi ki mil gai.
I: neha aise nahi bolte. Chal nikki le jaa apni bhabhi ko apne sath.
Girlz took sona away and ishawari asked dev to take rest and she left.
"Bach gaya" saying this dev took a relief and left too.
****
Next day morning:
Dev came near the dining table and saw his mom and sisters waiting for breakfast.
D: (angrily) ab tak kheechu bhaiya ne nashta nahi lagaya. Me abhi unki khabar leta hu.
I: dev ruk aur beth yaha chupchap aaj ka nashta sona bana rahi hai aaj uski pehli rasoi ki rasam hai.
R: haa bhaiya maa ne to kaha bhi ki wo help kar degi par bhabhi ne mana kar diya.
Nk: me to bahut excited hu pata nahi bhabhi kya bana rahi hogi.
N: nikki thodi der me pata chal jaayega. Bhaiyaa aap to bas apna nek ready rakho.
Dev just nodded as "hmm" and sona came out with bowl in her hand.
I: aaja sona beta to kya banaya hai tune nashte me.
R: bhabhi aapne meetha to banaya hai na.
Everyone was asking her question n she was nodding yes with a slight blush on her face and dev was just busy looking at her smile.
She then uncovered the food and every was shocked seeing at it.
I: yeh kya hai...
S: brown bread toast with vegetable soup and yeh italian salads hai isme bahut saare vegies hai jo sehat ke liye bahut acha hota hai. Aur meethe me yeh oats ki kheer.
She said with excitement in her voice which faded away when she saw every one's face.
S: kya hua aap sabko yeh nashta pasand nahi aaya.
No one uttered a word but looked at each other and started laughing out loud and devakshi got confused.
I: ab bhai Dr bahu laaye hai to yeh sab to khana hi padega. Chalo bacho sab khana shuru karo.
Nk: but mom sirf aaj ke din plz kal se yeh sab nahi... plz bhabhi
She just noded in a yes.
I: sona aao tum bhi humare sath betho yaha dev ke pass kheechu sabko serve kar dega.
Everyone ate silently and now ishwari asked dev to give sona her nek and he gave her some cash.
R: dev bhaiya yeh kya sirf itne. Isse jyada to dr bhabhi ki consultant fees hogi kyun bhabhi she winked.
I: riya aisa nahi bolte... dev ne jo bhi diya hai pyaar se diya hai sona rakh lo.
Girlz teased : ooohhh and devakshi blushed.
D: acha maa me office ke liye nikalta hu.
N: dev bhaiya aaj bhi office aaj aapke shaadi ke baad ka pehla din hai aaj koi kaam nahi.
D: neha office me bahut jaruri meeting hai aur me wo cancel nahi kar sakta.
Nk: par bhai aap office jaoge kaise maa ne to saari cars servicing pe bhej di.
D: maaa
I: ab muje aise mat dekh tuje office jaane se rokne ka yahi ek tareeka tha
D: me office taxi se chala jaunga. Par jaunga jarur yeh meeting postponed nahi ho sakti sorrry.
I: acha theek hai ek shart pe. Shaam ko tu jaldi aayega aur fir Bose house jayega sona ko wapas laane.
D: wapas laane par yeh to yahi hai. (He said confusingly)
N: bhaiya aap bhi na kitne buddhu ho aapko yeh bhi nahi pata aaj bhabhi ke pagh fere ki rasam hai aur bhabhi apne mayke jaayegi.
R: aur shaam ko aapko bhabhi ko lene unke maayke jaana hoga
D: theek hai... aur kuch ya ab me jaau
I: jao
Nk: arey dev bhaiya jaane se pehle bhabhi ko Bye to bolte jao (she teased)
Everyone were looking at the new couple and they again started blushing.
Dev waved her bye and she replied back blushingly and he left.
****
Same evening.
Dev reached Bose house and after enjoying dinner it was time to once again say bye to their lovely daughter.
Bose family along with devakshi came out of their house. Dev had already booked a cab but it was yet to arrived so everyone was waiting for it. There was an awkward silence which broke with dev's phone call.
It was cab driver who informed them he might get late as he was stuck in a traffic due to accident.
Mr bose requested devakahi to get in the house and wait for cab but dev refuses as it was very late.
Mr bose and dev were talking when sona came with her scooty and helemet on head.
Mrs bose: sona eta ki (whats this)
S: maa mr dixit ko late ho raha hai aur cab ko aane bhi time lagega to hum mere scooty me chale jaate hai.
Everyone smiled except dev who was confused shocked surprised and nervous too.
D: aap mazak kar rahi hai right..
S: nahi i am serious ...aaiye bethiye.
She patted at the back seat.
Saurabh: aaiye dev babu bethiye.
With no option left he sat and was uncomfortness was seen on his face.
Saurabh: dev babu sona ko jara kaske pakadna wo bahut rough drive karti hai
He teased n bijoy hit him (chup kar tu)
Devakshi waved everyone bye and sona started her scooty.
On the way dev was moving a lot as it was for the first time he was sitting behind some lady on a scooty.
S: mr dixit aap plz hilna band karenge.
D: sorry
Suddenly a speed breaker came n sona skipped it and dev got pushed forward and he held sona.
And sona stopped the scooty.
D: kya hua
S: wo mr dixit aapka hath
He saw his hand and realized he has held sona on her waist and his one hand was on her saree pallu and other on her bare waist.
He immediately took it away n murmured sorry.
The ride further went silently and after about ten minutes they reached mansion.
Dev came down and was about to leave when...
S: mr dixit i am sorry meri wajah se aapko itni problem hui.
Without looking at her
D: dont be coz this was the best ride of my life.
Saying this he went in and she shyly followed her back.
****
Ps: posting it from phone so unable to pm. Sorry.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!😳
Bahut hi accha aur romantic part tha..
Plz cont soon..



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