DevAkshi OS : Right Next To You.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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She stood there trembling as her baba got admitted .
Still . Incapable of comprehension.
Her Maa , Daadi , Dada ; worrying , crying .
Her Baba was her strength, her mentor , her guide.
Baba had suffered a major heart-attack , and his chances at survival looked thin. Being a doctor , she knew the odds and it broke her .

Her phone blared with the name 'Mr. Dev Dixit'
She cut it the first time , but Mr.Dixit continued to call .
She took the call .

"Dr.Bose it's eight . Aap Abhi Tak Nahi Aayi?" Dev said .

The other end was silent .

"Dr.Bose, I'm talking to you ."

There was still no response.

"Dr.Bose , Is everything alright"

The silence made him worry , it wasn't something he was accustomed to with her .

"Baba" she said , her voice trembling , shaking .

"Ms.Bose" his voice mellow .

"Heart-attack" she managed to say before she broke down on the phone.

"Mr.Bose Ko Kuch Nahi Hoga , trust me" He said.

"Baba" She said .

"Kuch Nahi Hoga" He said .

Her pain was grieving him. It wasn't the first time something had affected him but it was the first time he felt like it was happening to him .
Something inside pained a little to much listening to her cry.

"Tina cancel all my meetings . And forward the number of the best cardiologist in Delhi now."

"Sure Sir, Is everything okay at home?"

"No"

He didn't know why he said that . He didn't want to . For now all that mattered was being there for Sona.

He rushed to the hospital , at the entrance of which he saw her , alone , crying .

He went there and sat beside her , quietly .
She looked at him , her eyes drenched with tears .
"Baba" she said.
He looked at her . He held her hand . She buried her face into his chest .
He didn't stop her , he let her cry . He placed a hand around her , in a partial embrace .

His phone rang , it said 'Maa' . He cut the phone. He would never do that , he had never done that , but today he did . Why? He didn't know.

She composed herself and got up .

He didn't say a word . He didn't feel the need to .

She went to her family "Dada , Aap Maa Aur Daadi Ko Lekar Ghar Jaao Mein Yahan Rukti Hoon"

"Nahi Shona , Tum Akele " Maa said .

"Aunty Ji , Mein Rahunga"

She looked a little skeptical but Dada was convinced .

"Chalo Maa" Dada said and they headed homewards.

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It was hours into the midnight and neither of them had spoken a word . He sat beside her . He wasn't holding her hand , she wasn't laying her head on him , but there wasn't a moment where they weren't by each other .

Baba was being operated by the best cardiologist in Delhi , she was now a little more hopeful . She looked at him her eyes with gratitude , he looking at her with reassurance .
Amidst the spoken and unspoken two hearts found solace in each other .

While his phone lay at a distance with 8 missed calls from Maa.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww! I loved it!
Plzz write more stuff and plzz pm me if possible :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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fabulous OS. 👏

really heart touching. do more os like this.😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krystle123

fabulous OS.👏


really heart touching. do more os like this.😊😊



Thank You So Much!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishbano

Wow! Amazing Os 👍🏼



Thank You!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

Aww! I loved it!
Plzz write more stuff and plzz pm me if possible :)



Sure!
Thank You So Much !
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome 😊
Loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow.. I loved the characterizations and the last line was just perfect. I think Dev will show his feelings when cornered like this. Otherwise, he is to emotionally stoic to let others see him.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The last line oh my lord. Its the whole story line in that one last line. His mom had to vacate the place which was taken by Sona. This was every bit poignant and beautifully captured the emotions. Great job.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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In one word, it's Beautiful.😃
They did not speak, but that show of silent support was all that she needed.
I loved reading your OS.😊
Do write more, and PM me when you do so.

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