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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Part 3

While these events are taking place, everyone is looking for the Man of celebrations, he himself is looking for the girl to have unknowingly become more important than most of his family members.

Through the window when light glistens on the face of her's somebody loosens control and kisses, he doesnt remember that she is angry. He doesn't want to remember that she is been illtreated by his own.

For a moment, a sudden kiss melted her down, she felt that it is a gesture of calming while she has her hands at her back, strongly held by him.

"What" she realised what is going on, however hard she tried to move him away, her hands escaped from his hold reaches by his collar, fidgeting, fighting and finally pushed him away.

He didn't find the moment to be called wrong, he didn't understand bthen what it was...

All he got was a tight slap.

" I can't believe that to cover your Mami's mistake, you would go beyond your level, but I won't steep low...Mr. Dixit, am not steeping low to grace your party, am not saving my job..." She shouted, to her last thought of only broken by another kiss, another handheld at her back, another close proximity, of another selflessness..

His kisses are even smoother than before, he is gentle, he is fine, he is in love...and not ready to let her go, not greedy of her, he is protective, he is genuine, he is pure soul.

They take time to breath now..." Why you think, am just a business man?, I have a heart too, Do not pretend as if I am ignorant to what has been going on between us for few day, I know you too love me." Heaves him.

"No" she replies, moving away, she felt this is not what I want, this not how I want it.

"Let go off Mr.Dixit" she takes her bag and heads to leave.

" Bose" he asked her to reply, to tell, to STOP with so much love, tender and eagerness.

She haultsbfqcing the door, not letting her tear to drop. Her gentle declaration to leave, her soft "huh" to STOP.

She goes back to her house. Both lost in their thoughts, thinking what happened, accepting that it happened. But " how", as both questioned to themselves. She is upset of the evening events. But...NO, he is not, he is happy and ready to get her, overcoming the obstacle of his MAMI.

Edited by ratika89 - 9 years ago

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cherrynicolem

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Both are fidgetting with their emotions.

A slap to Mr. Dev.

Sona is strong amd not ready to give up so easily.

Excellent update.

And yes your updates are interesting to be liked by many.

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Mana90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

OMG!!!! Watta different side of Dev u have drawn upon. ...

Perfect romantic at heart types...

Chasing Sona... determined to follow his heart...

Lovely...

Where is Part 4???😃

Again be kind on us...

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: cherrynicolem
Both are fidgetting with their emotions.
A slap to Mr. Dev.
Sona is strong amd not ready to give up so easily.
Excellent update.
And yes your updates are interesting to be liked by many.

Thanks😃

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: palsekar.manti
OMG!!!! Watta different side of Dev u have drawn upon. ...
Perfect romantic at heart types...
Chasing Sona... determined to follow his heart...
Lovely...

Where is Part 4???😃

Again be kind on us...

Thank you and the update is coming tomorrow.😳

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: sneharay
Awesome..

Thank you😳

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Muskaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Ratika its just so awsum
I love it
Plz pm me .

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: AngelicHeer
Ratika its just so awsum
I love it
Plz pm me .

OK, I will try to PM and anbig thanks for liking it.😳

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ratika89

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

PART 4

"It is over, no more Mr.Aubodhro!"

Frustrated Sona, tells herself. " try to sleep", with heavy day and heavy events went by, Sona tried to hush all thoughts regarding them. She forced herself to sleep and after a while a shocked girl gets up

" You love me too...WHAT?"

What does this mean, TOO?

I am not thinking anything, this is stress..FULL. Throwing back to bed.

Here, Dev is finding routes to love in books but all he was getting are the problems they faced.

"Common...nn, No one stayed alive, how did they solved issues, isn't there any maths to it?"

While he is finding rules of love, his door gets a knock.

" Dev..Dev, look what I got in your party" Mami comes excited to show a gift that Dev got and Mami stole for her son.

Mami, not again, thinks Dev and trying to solve this problem, not known about Mami's plan of his life's every thing.

"What are these books, Dev beta?"

"Mami, am very tired, I will take you to shopping tomorrow, we will go for the car, you want for your son, let's go Mami, good night!" Faking the act of love for his Mami, he is getting furious on her, he is not interested to showcase his new interest that got ignite few hours ago in one of his room.

" Bose, please...! Don't think wrong of me." Talking self " I don't know how that happened, it just happened "

Tension brewing in his head, his chest getting heavy for unknown reason.

" I can't see you sad, please don't be upset tomorrow."

Next morning, Dev is delaying his take off to his office.

"Dev, you leave by this time, what happen?" His mother questions with concern in her eyes.

"Haan Maa, everything is fine, just bit tired" waiting for someone and he can't tell his mother.

He is feeling that the force of gravity is pulling him down and down with time. "Ohh" he checks his chest, keeping his palm on his heart.

"Kya hua?" Concerned mother asks.

"Kuch nahi", he gets up furious, picks his phone and starts calling her. His attempts to call her are not successful.

All he is doing is wait with a pacing heart. Finally, he text her " are you picking up the call or shall I drop at your place?"

A shocking Sona widens her eye while she reads his text.

Edited by ratika89 - 9 years ago