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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2
"Please, leave me.." trying hard to escape, in heart, just not his grip but all those things that attracted each other in last fewv days after he recalled her to his house.

Tired of not making an attempt to move, she tilts her face to let her nose touches his.
" No...ah" a stern reply, chills run down his spine with her touch. It's not easy for him to leave, he had never been with a girl, for the first time and probably at the correct point in his life, a girl has come and on top of that she is a tough slice.

"How amazing it is for you to see me like this...haina!" Frustration gripping her inside.
Anger returns in his eyes with warm breath he fumes
"But am not a girl to come down to terms of loosing dignity, in any which manner, it could be". and she shrugs him off with full force.

"Bhaiya j... where are you, people are asking for you...bhaiya ji" someone shouts from out side.

And there he grabs her again to not to just pine her to the wall but to the wall inside his heart, only to be broken apart for love from someone whoes not known to him for years.

They both hear the knock again. The knock inside is far more engaging than the knock on door. The silence erupting again with full of noises to open door "...for ME!"

"For more than two months now, Mr Dixit..?" holds her breath still reaching to his breath with open heart.
" I have never..." someone screams outside, as the voice appeared of mami's, this time dev ignores but he knows how her voice is breaking her heart.

" Mr. dixit, please leave..!" she hushed him hard with heavy heart but fails, to her heavy attempts, this time Dev makes a move and he places his lips on hers.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Man!!!! Watta heart-gripping glimpse of ur upcoming cheesyyy part...😉
U have writing sucha beautiful yet fast paced part...

M eagerly waiting for ur updates...

Be kind on us😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you, I hope you have read the updated part.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: palsekar.manti

Man!!!! Watta heart-gripping glimpse of ur upcoming cheesyyy part...😉

U have writing sucha beautiful yet fast paced part...

M eagerly waiting for ur updates...

Be kind on us😃

Thank you and I will try my best with the updates.

I hope you have read the updated part also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
The last line gave me goosebumps
Awesome shot
Keep writing
N cont soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So Dev won't let go Sona this time.
Amazing update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsum update
And last line aww
Its so nyc plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Misnomer

The last line gave me goosebumps

Awesome shot
Keep writing
N cont soonish


Thank you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: cherrynicolem

So Dev won't let go Sona this time.

Amazing update

Yes, he is not leaving her 😆
Thank you for liking it, I hope I can make this interesting be enough to be like by many.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: AngelicHeer

Awsum update
And last line aww
Its so nyc plz update soon

Thank you😳

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