Os..moment..PART 8a PAGE 13 updated on 26 august,16 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely. Can I get the PM next time, when its updated
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sririt

Lovely. Can I get the PM next time, when its updated

Thanks...i will try to do it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the start.
Do continue please.

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Originally posted by: diksha0102

Loved the start.
Do continue please.

Thanks...😃..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was really nice! Wld love to read more of it! Do continue!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Like it 😊
Concept's really good 👍🏼
Continue soon...
Edited by juthie_j - 9 years ago
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nice os...
liked it
pls continue soon
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Originally posted by: mrym_rauf

It was really nice! Wld love to read more of it! Do continue!😊

Thanks...will upadate tonight😃
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Originally posted by: juthie_j

Like it 😊
Concept's really good 👍🏼
Continue soon...

Thanks...i will update tonight😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi guyss...thanks for such motivation...for this story i had just taken basic plot of the drama but will put my all experiences of reading os,ff,digest int it..😆😆
it will be mixture of too much drama,romance (popping up from no where)..so bear it with..
it is my first tie so i will experiment all stuff😆
P.S:NOT PROOF READ...MISTAKE WILL BE FOUND..
part 2:three months ago

"maa!nashta kahan hai...mjhy late hora hai janna... hai"

"laa rai hoon dev!!kun itna jaldi kar ra hai..."ishawari moving her hands fast as dev was continuosly making tantrums for around 5 minutes.ria,neha were now tired to pacify dev and were looking towards kitchen for breakfast.

"maa mera project aj finalize hona hai.raat ko hi btaya tha k subha jaldi jaon ga..magar nai...kuch kam thek nai hoga...bhaiya ko bhi aj hi jana tha subha subha aur mn puri raat jaga mgr jb jana tha us se adhay ghantay phlay so gya aur maa tu ne bhi mjhy nai uthaya."dev was non stop blabbering as this project will give new heights of success to him and he could not afford any mistake today.

"dev tuu ne mjhy nai bola tha.bola hota to mn zaroor pochne ati aur ab pura ghar sar p uthaya hua hai...yeh le nashta...sai se krna phr jana"ishwari put tray on table and made dev seated so that he should not run by just taking 2 sips of juice.

"maa jaldi dahi leaya..mn jar a hn"

"yeh le...sb acha hoga"dev touch her feet and hug her.

"tine..just make sure every thing is perfect.i want all file piled up.just check out the presentation and make mr.khanna comfortable.i am on my way "dev was waiting anxiously to sign up papers of project.the driver makes emergency breaks as a small crowd was in middle of road.

"what happened kaka?gari kun ruk di?? "beta wh samne road jam hai..kuch log lar rahe hain"..

"damn it!!bss bekar kamon k lye logon k pass waqt hai ...jb dekho jama hjatay hain..dosron k lye musibat hi khari karni hoti hai "...dev step out from car and saw a lady screaming over someone.

Controlling all his annoyance,he went to crowd "excuse me mam...app app log apne ghar ja kar apne personal matters solve rskte hain...yeh road block kr k ap srf dosron ka time zaya kar rahay hain"..she turned and dev was stunned for a moment...whitish complexion,slim soft curls and below casual dressing can be perfect description for her.she in no way looks wife of that man in front of him"sahayad majbori mn shadi ki hogi..wese bhi itni rude or laraka larki se shadi kon karta"dev thought about it."mam please do this stuff on other side of road"..dev was soo furious that he just want to put all this mess on other side..

"apko kia hai...zara side mn rahyn".."or app uncle ap samosa kha rahay hain...abhi ap mere pas se aye or yahan chatni mn dubo dubo k calories andar utaray ja rahay hain...apki pta hai apko kia kia ho skta hai"

"tina I am just coming...ask them to wait for a while"...

"sr sonakishi ..mn wh bsss...ainda nai hoga"..the old man lastly appologise to the health giant in front of him."I will see yoyu for this waste"..dev just ran to his office...

The staff was horrified looking at hs confition.the man who is always at his peak in dressing was all panting,sweating as a dog was at his back..

"Sorry gentle...it was a bad day for me...I was..."

"Sorry Mr. dev...we had waited for so long. If you were not interested in project, who have inform us before..it's just waste."

"I am sorry sir...it was just a mess...I am sorry please be seated."

"Sorry Mr. dev..."

CONTINUEE😃

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