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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

So the very first AaRa fan fiction is here..i was dying to read stories on our beloved AaRa..so thanks alot for this wonderful gift..
A beautiful update..i love that u showed everyone's pov..feeling bad for Aaruu n tulsi..i hope Aaryan stops his Aaru before its too late...
My only complaint is its very short..
Can't wait to read further..update soonish


You are very welcome... Am glad to have had this opportunity to unknowingly fulfil this desire to read about AaRa :).

Thank you for enjoying this small update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: soniadutta

Nice update

Now waiting for next chapter
Do it soon


Thank you :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shravanfan

yeah.. aara ff... nice start... but i don't understand how being devdasi can be someone's dying wish... and why aru thinking it fir short time. if she enter she can never come out...
... a request to every write please write on the revelation of birth switch.


Thanks... Am writing along the lines of the series... Making Aru a devadasi is part of Kumudini's revenge.

Aru is naive enough to think that she will continue to have her say and make decisions and that all she shall do is serve Lord Krishna and dance.


I have been busy with Google... Read that some devadasi's through assistance have started fresh lives and rejoined society... So have kind of used it where Aru thinks that once her grandmother dies she can go back to her old life in town.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya925

Omg it was awesome... I so wanted to read something on Sara and happy to see our first ff!!!!
Let me tell you it was awesome!!!!!
I loved it!
Do update soon and keep it up :)


Glad to have fulfilled your desire to read about Sara...

Thank you for enjoying it. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiya_12

its amazing felt bad fr tulsi more..specially the line my daughter stood where i was years back..so touchng..plz update soon


Very true... My heart goes out to Tulsi.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow... so good. didn't expect that... aryan forcefully marry aru. damn good. waiting for more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wohoo never xpcted aryan will marry aaru lyk this..plz udate soon..its interestng,finally tulsi found sum solution
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You completed the first chapter..i just noticed now..
Aryan forcefully married Aaradhya...wow..its getting even more interesting..
So here aaradhya doesn't feel anything for Aaryan..Aaryan is also very smart,instead of accepting that he can't let go of her,he said he is doing it because he had promised to end this Devdasi tradition..lol.
Can't wait to read further..
Plzz update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg first aara ff
loved it
nice concept
loved aryan 😉
update soonish pls...😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2 - incomplete



Her eyes shining bright, Kumudini looks at the money on the table. She couldn't remember the last time she was this happy. Putting the money in a bag she thinks gleefully, "it is time to share my happiness." Without a hint of regret, she looks to her daughter and says, "Tulsi come with me. Today we shall avenge all our insults."


An upset Tulsi looks towards the stairs and says brokenly, "aai, you could have put a stop to this." Kumudini says dismissingly, "it is part of being a devdasi. I went through it. You went through it. There is nothing to be upset about. Come. Soon you shall be filled with joy." Curious, Tulsi follows her mother.


Kumudini walks forcefully into Pradyumna Rao's home. Furious that she dare step into his home, Pradyumna Rao roars, "how dare you..." Glaring with a triumphant smile, Kumudini interrupts, roaring back, unfazed by his aggressive demeanor, "I dare... I dare much more." She looks towards the stairs, her expression defiant and almost gleeful as she watches the family members come down the stairs with surprise etched on their features. Kumudini says, "I am very happy today." Tulsi steals an apologetic glance as she reads the contempt and unhappiness around her. Worry gnawing her as she wonder what spectacle her aai was planning to make.


His gaze filled with contempt and smugness, Pradyumna Rao sits on his chair and says, "of course... Congratulations, so you have another dancer in the family... Your earnings shall increase."

Walking up to Pradyumna Rao with an equally smug expression, Kumudini puts the bag of money in front of him and says, "not I, but you." Without seeking permission Kumudini sits on the chair next to Pradyumna Rao and says with a smirk, "it is I that should be saying congratulations." Frowning Pradyumna Rao opens the bag that is set in front of him. Seeing the money he stands up, affronted, asks, "what is the meaning of this.
Edited by angelpureness - 9 years ago

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