New GOTW: Continue the Story!! - Page 2

Priya and Sanjay reach home, and Sanjay pulls Priya inside, and then-

'Explain!'

'I don't want to talk abt him, Sanjay, I just hate him so much...more than any body else in this world!'

'What I want to know, Priya, is why You never told me abt your step brother, even after 4 yrs of marriage!

As i told u b4 he killed my father 😭 😭,according 2 me he was also dead along with my dad that day.i don't want 2 talk about him anymore,leave me alone,saying this she runs 2 her bedroom & locked the door.

Scene shifts to Vicky's house.

Vicky is pacing up and down, thinking hard.

'If there's soemthing I detest, its treachery.I've forver been cheated by her, the one who I'm ashamed ot call a sister.'....Viicky thinks to himself.

'Why on earth, shud I remain silent anymore? Why shud I fall prey to her wicked plans once again?'

Vicky raises his head, and the vengeance in his face is clear, in the moon light...........Viky's wicked llaugh fills the room.

"Arrggg, what is wrong with me? Why did i take Vijay there?" thinks Priya. Flashback. Priya is walking out from her college with her friends.....

[Ditty, Vijay or sanjay?? Am confused here. Tamil started with Vijay 😕😳]

They are chatting happily, making plans to hang out Pizza Hut.They are about the cross the road, when a bike stops right in front of Priya.....the girls are startled, but as the man on the bike removes the helmet, and as Bharat's face appears, Priya is relieved.

'What are u doing here? You scared the hell out of me!'

'What are lovers for, if they don't give u occasional , loving frights, dear?'. A dashing Bharath, in six pocket Jeans smiles back.

'Ok then , Priya,we'll go to Pizza hut, u hang out else where with ur dear Vicky!'..Priya's friends tease her.

Priya smiles, and blushes into a bright shade of magenta, and gets onto the bike....

(Nets, Vijay is the one who's palyignt he role, Sanjay is the name of the character 😊 )

PS:Ditty's watching too many movies,its influencing her imagination!

Little did Priya know then that Sanjay is Vijay's alter ego. Vijay has split personality disorder 😈 . He doesn't know he is married to Priya and is still wooing her, whereas Sanjay is a happy husband. Priya is enjoying both the ways ( Giri, enna imagination! unakke idhu thaanga mudiyudha? LOL] 😆 )

(Aiyo, ditty and giri 😡 u guys got wild imagination... 😆 split personality, giri giri 🤪 )

Flashback : Bharat tells Priya his family has known about her already. They want him to bring her back home. Priya says No and Bharat is confused....

Priya don't want to settle down with him so early.vicky is anxious to know y she is behaving odd hearing about his family & he............

This started out nicely but now it is quite confusing..

The story writers are switching between actors names and characters' names, at will. For some consistency, can we refer to the characters always with their names (like Vijay, Simran, Bharath). If Vijay's other personality is to stay, then we can call that character alone as 'Sanjay'.

Also, Bharath seems to be romancing Simran in the flashback. But she introduced Bharath to vijay as her step-brother. So, how could she be romancing her step-brother? Idikkudhe..

He ask Priya for a reason. Priya tells him to stop questioning her. She is not interested in marriage right now. Bharat leaves without a word.