Kshitij-kumud 4ever-fanfic

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Posted: 20 years ago
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I'm the fan of garv-kumud.but i've written a fanfic 4 kshitij-kumud. Kshitij & kali r the dancers of the famous dance troupe "nasha dance".kumud comes with a request 2 join the troupe.kshitij ,their leader tells her to dance b4 admission.she dances.kali:wow,wonderful kumud. kumud smiles.she tells in her mind:thank god,my dream 2 be the dancer of this troupe will come true.kshitij:u'r dance is ok,not bad.but simply dancing is not enuff 4 a dancer.a dancer shud maintain his or her's figure.that means u hav 2 lose ur weight,i mean ur overweight. every1 laughs.kumud starts weeping. kali feels sad 4 her:kumud is not slim.but she looks really nice.she wud bring fame 2 our troupe.i'm confident. kali becomes kumud's good friend. kshitij teaches kumud dance steps.she makes mistakes. he:how many times i'm showing u the steps?then also u can't...? kali:show the steps properly man..hold her hand. kshitij holds her hand & shows the steps.kumud becomes shy when he stands close to her & holds her hands.he also gets embarassed.kumud corrects her steps. when he was alone kshitij comes:2day u danced well. kumud smiles:thanks,1st time u r telling something nice about me.so i'm very happy.u r sincere in ur words. he smiles:kumud,that day,when u cried u were looking beautiful. she smiles:when u became angry,u were looking cute. he smiles. both of them understand tht they can't sit peacefully without seeing each other.but they don't reveal it each other. kali leaves the troupe 2 adroad 4 higher studies.every1 becomes sad.kali:i don't want 2 leave u all.but my dad wants me 2 go abroad. kumud weeeps:i'll miss u kali.u were such a nice friend of mine.both of them hug & cry. b4 leaving she tells kshitij secretely:all the best 4 ur luv. he:what? she:don't try to hide.i no that u luv kumud.u must tell her that kshitij. kali goes. kumud loses her weight b4 the mega dance competition.kshitij tells her:i can't believe ur change.i neve expected this.u look really pretty. she smiles. kshitij - kumud do a romantic rain dance no on the stage.they were lving in that sensual item.they win the 1st prize.they get more offers 4 programmes. they conduct a party to celebrate their victory.n the party kshitij:kumud,can u dancewith me? she holds his hands & dances.after the party kumud starts moving out.kshitij becomes emotional:kumud,plz don't go. kumud gets excited seeing his new facial expression. he:kumud,plz don't go.i can't liv without u.i luv u that much. kumud was thrilled:i luv u too.he extends his arms.she runs & hugs him.the romantic rain covers them.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow nice fan-fiction.... its really cool & hot both....

impress with ur sportmenspirit....that u r fan of garv & write about kshitij...good kep it buddy...we enjoy...lol..lol..👏👏👏

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Posted: 20 years ago
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crap fan fiction it should be GARV N KUMUD
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Posted: 20 years ago
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girlie18 du u hav 2 be rude?i tink it woz gr8 jasmine😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Originally posted by: reepz

girlie18 du u hav 2 be rude?i tink it woz gr8 jasmine😃

reepz he/she doesn't know that aka garv...doesn't know how to dance..???? how can garv teach to anybody else....????may be he/she feels that he is the one of best dancer [garv]....hahahaha😆

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Posted: 20 years ago
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girlie18,i'm also a fan of garv-kumud like u.but in this fic garv can't come instead of kshitij.Bcoz this role suits kshitij more.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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nice fan fic.....plz write more!!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was good. please continue.😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
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daydreamer,read ur fav jodi'd fanfic part-1
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Posted: 20 years ago
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plz continue....we cannot wait...we r too eager..u r a great writer...u and anoli should write in place of ekta..

Shivani

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