Mere Adhoori mohabhat *26th oct* PAGE 32 - Page 12

noori u r still up with this story thats gr8. i've cum back to this forum after a long time. ill definetly read the story n catch up 😃

continue soon noori di all of us r waiting.....
this fanfic is too unresistable...

Originally posted by: eijazwife

she takes ages to complete it, she likes to let me hang round Soham

and she can only go online at college, but speaks to her fiancee usually

i just hope she doesnt keep me negative

sh

jayne di lets see ..... but im quite sure u won be negative.....
even if u r jus in d storyit will turn out to be postive coz u will make anju jelous and tht way she will confess to soham....
den lets see what soham does... well i pesonally don fink he will cheat u lol

Originally posted by: eijazwife

she is not at college at the moment due o holidays, het laptp at home broken, dont worry i get story from her on phone and post😃

omg thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much im dying to know what happens next

Anjali makes her way to the nanda house and we see dida and nitya crying 😭 😭 😭 they look up and see anjali Anjali: mama yeh saab kaise howa kaab howa Nitya: paata nahi beti soham humne fone kiya ausne dekha bauji ko Anjali: o soham neh Dida: haan beti mujhe paata hai keh tumko yeh saab abi bardash hoora hai leekan auska yaadash kya kare Anjali: um dida mein abi ayye Dida: teek hai beti Anjali makes her way upstairs and looks thru her old bedroom and has a flashbk Soham is huggin anjali from behind Anjali: abh kya howa Soham: kuch nahi jus showin my wife some luv kyun nahi kar sakta Anjali: hmmmmm sochna paare gha (Then lets go) Soham: oh really Mrs Sen soham grabs anjali wrist and pulls her forward and whispers in her Soham: i luv u Mrs Sen Then the scene changes and we see a car accident happenin and den hospital Dr: i am sorry Mrs sen leekan it looks like Soham has lost half of his memory meanin he don remember u or u bein his wife Anjali: kya 😭 😭 Dr: haan if u try n make him remember his memory cud permantly gone he won't know who he is or his family its best u leave him and out of the house Anjali: 😭 Bk in time nitya taps anjali shoulder and anjali looks at nitya and tears stream down her eyes and hugs her Nitya: sssh i know beti i know To be continued Now u no the raaz abh kya hoga iss kahani mein Luvz ya Luv Noori Hussain 😃

good update,
i reckon Ekta should have you as the creative head and the person who writes the script 😊

its so wonderful...i luvd d twist...lets see wat happens next 👏

um babe it was a flashbk and if he gets his memory bk den u will lose him chalo i will get his memory bk ahem don attack me plz 😆

Part 20

Next day

Its bauji's funeral and everybody is crying accept for bebe and Jayne, bebe has gone into shock and won't talk or cry and Jayne well she bored and yawning and now busy looking at her nails

Nitya: kuch boliye na bebe (she says while holding her face and crying)

Soham is just looking at the body

Jayne thinking: this is just gr8 I kill da old man and he gets all dis crap done

Then Anjali enters Soham looks up and frowns and begins to think as he sees tears in anjali's eyes

Soham: Anjali aur yaha leekan kaise

Then he looks Bk up at her and Jayne sees this and pretends to cry and Soham goes and consoles her

Anjali sees Soham consoling Jayne and she wipes her tears tells vayu to come in she holds his hand tight he looks at her and gives her a faint smile

Vayu: you never told me you knew soham's bauji

Anjali: um my parents naa they knew him uh chale

Vayu: haan chalo

Then Noori and Akky turn up and see everyone then they go seperatly akky taps soham's shoulder and noori consoles Nitya

Akky: hey man

Soham: arre akky you're here

Akky sees the hurt in soham but doesn't question him and he just hugs him

Akky: everything will good soon just watch don't worry ok

Soham: I hope so man (he cries)

Jayne wipes her tears and thinks

Jayne: god if your listening take away this old man now plz I am getting bored here now

Then the priest gets and up and says

Priest: its time to burn the body

Jayne thinking: thank u lord u answered my prayers

Everybody gets up and the men lift the body onto their shoulders Soham and Akky go in front

Soham remembers the gud times with bauji and tears stream down his face

Nitya: bauji don't leave us plz (she cries) don leave us

Then she makes her way to bebe

Nitya: bebe dekho naa bauji is going plz rooko aune dekho (she pleads)

Bebe is still not saying anything and the body is out of the house and nitya goes after the body and Noori stops her

Noori: aunty rooko plz

Nitya: beti woh Gaye

Noori: aunty khosh mein ayyo

Then Nitya drops to the fall (Nitya and bauji were very close dats y she is badly affected)

Noori: aunty Saab teek hoga plz

Nitya: nahin teek hoga kuch nahi teek hoga samjhe

Anjali can't take it anymore and runs off

Noori frowns and thinks

Noori: iss ko kya hogaya hmmm

Meanwhile Jayne is still sat down n nearly yawning (again tuts tuts) and thinks

Jayne: thank god he has left and now I can live wid soham peacefully widout da Buddha giving evils uff

To be continued

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Thatttttttttt wassss Greatttt Noori 👏 👏 👏
Keeep it up n keep em cummin 😃 😃 👏