~A One-Shot FF: The Pulse of Life~ - Page 2

I m totally speechless. U hv left no words for me to say. Its just awesum!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish we cld get 2 see sumthing like dis in d show as well. I hope dat d writers take some points from u as to how to make a love story.

Wow! Fantastic! It was soooo romantic n passionate! 😍 ..i cud vividly imagine Aro n Arjun enacting that scene.. perfect!

Luv,

Manisha

Vey nice one shot.. Amazing and awesome.. 👏 I m very much touched by the end... It was just prefect... 😃

Hi i m posting it here again...

@Ria: "the pulse of life" 👏

I have already read it thrice...i cud vividly imagine Aro-Arjun eacting those scenes.. they r so intense n passionate.. luved them..

really i was so amused at myself.. as to how i cud visualize each n every expression of Karan n Kritz as Arjun n Arohi as the story unfold.. n their dialogues echoed in my mind n i paused at exactly those words, where they normally do while delivering them.. 😆

such is the impact of Arjun n Arohi 😆 .. alas how come KMH creatives/directors/scriptwrites fail 2 perceive n present this.. 😆

anyways i always find reading more engrossing n vivid than actual performance on screen..😆 😆 I enjoyed it thoroughly 😛 It reminded me of An's story..😛

Perfect choice of words.. short n simple and yet beautifully described.. and thats trademark of Ria..Awesome!

Luv,😛

Manisha

@j44a: Thanks a lot for reading !

@sheetal: Awwww thanks 😊

@kitnimohabbat: Thankyou☺️

@Manisha: Glad you re-posted it...I guess I overlooked this at the Adda so it was so so much fun to read what my dear reporter has to say! Your comments touched me...and I am so glad all of you liked it! ☺️

Really well written!!! i really enjoyed it....very cute!:)

Ria...beautifully written n very captivating write up👏👏..i thoroughly enjoyed reading.Thankx for this great one shot.

God bless yu.😊

Heyy..this is just awesome...all da emotions soo beautifully captured...with intricate details...i luvveed it...wish da story wud have taken shape like dis after da party😍....it was really nice!..Keep it up! 😃

hey ria,

@Tanvi: Thankyou😊

@A...: Thanks a lot! 🤗

@coldy07: Thanks Buddy😊

@Maryam: Thanyeww!!!

@stuti: Welcome to the Forums! and thanks a lot for reading the story! 😳