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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Madhu-n-kaddu


Toh story badal de... but AANCHAL SINGH must hai... 😈

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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: fiza1995

No doubt tu aalu ke sath reh reh kr uski tarah pagal ho gyi h😆



Tu n Aalu dimaagi pagal... main pyaar mein pagal... 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Madhu-n-kaddu



Tu n Aalu dimaagi pagal... main pyaar mein pagal... 🤗

Haan buji ke pyaar mei😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Congratulations rock star
Nice prologue... Interesting concept
I am sure last words Arohi ke nahi hai.. I hope I am not wrong or there is other reason behind it?
Update next part ASAP

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: --Anjali--

Congratulations rock star

Nice prologue... Interesting concept
I am sure last words Arohi ke nahi hai.. I hope I am not wrong or there is other reason behind it?
Update next part ASAP

hehhe.. thank u pankhi :* :*
dekhte h kya hota h😉
thnks !! :* :* love u
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Intresting & different concept.. 😊
Waiting to know what will happen further.. 😛
This is story is of 5-6 updates or more..???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Loved the concept and beginning Sneha.!!⭐️
Pls update soon.!!😳Your FF's keep this forum going...Plz jaldi update kar.!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: anjaliarora311

Intresting & different concept.. 😊
Waiting to know what will happen further.. 😛
This is story is of 5-6 updates or more..???

thnks dear😳
no no it got more😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: --Janvie--

Loved the concept and beginning Sneha.!!⭐️
Pls update soon.!!😳Your FF's keep this forum going...Plz jaldi update kar.!!😃

thnks dear😳
hehe yeah mujhe bhi yhi lagta h 😛
glad to see u commenting😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

he stood infront of the closed door..how much he wanted to die at that moment..only if his father wont have accepted money from her he wont have been standing here..but now he had to pay for the loan he took..he opened the door slowly n entered in..the whole room was destroyed..the bed which was supposingly decorated for their first night was now a disaster..all the flowers were on floor..bedsheet was also tormented..all candles were blown off..they lied on floor broken n scattered..

he looked around the room to find her n there she was sitting near window struggling with her heavy lehnga n jewellary playing with her doll..

the mentally disabled Arohi Ahluwalia n now "..Mrs Arohi Arjun Singhania.."

he closed the door with a tick which made her look at him..she smiled looking at him..

Arohi: hi..Aanchal ne bola aaj se tum mere pati ho..

Arjun moved towards the couch n sat on it removing his footwears..

Arohi stood up n moved towards him..

Arohi: mein hun Arohi..tumhari biwi..she forwarded her hand ..tumhara naam kya h?

Arjun looked up at her n then her extended hand..he concentrated back to his wrk..

Arjun: mera naam Arjun h..

Arohi folded her hand casually not affected by his distant behaviour...

Arohi: A..Ajjun..sweety iska naam Ajjun h..Ajjun ye sweety h meri bestfriend..say hi..

Arjun looked at her doll n stood up shooking his head..he removed the watch from his wrist n kept it on the dressing table..

Arohi came frm behind..

Arohi: Ajjun..tum naraz ho na..meine sara room ganda kr dia..pr acha nhi lag rha tha room..bed pe itne flowers the hum sote kaise aur candles se aag lag sakti thi..mujhe fire bilkul paand nhi..tum naraz mat ho plz..Ajjun..

Arjun angrily turned towards her n held her from shoulders..he pushed her to wall..

Arjun: mujhe irritate mat karo..mera naam Arjun h..Ajjun nhi..smjhi..aur mein kuch bhi jaan ne mein interested nhi hun...mujhe baksh do..he shouted...

Arohi's eyes welled up with tears..Arjun left her seeing tears in her eyes..he ran his hand through his hair..why was he venting out on her..it was not her fault..she don't even know wat has just happened with her..she is too a victim like him..

He calmed himself..

Arjun: tum so jao..

Arohi wiped her tears from back of her hand: itni heavy jewellary aur clothes pehnkr kaise soun..Maya (her caretaker) ne bola tha tum mere pati ho tum help karoge..pr tum toh gussa hi kr rhe ho..A..rrr..Ajjun..she tried hard to take his name correctly but failed..she started crying loudly..

Arjun worried: okay okay m sry..rona band karo..

Arohi: kaan pakad kr bolo..she weeped...

Arjun: wat?

Arohi cried louder..

Arjun held his ears: look Arohi..ab toh kaan bhi pakad lie..m sry..

Arohi looked at him n started laughing: yeah...look sweety Ajjun ne kaan pakde..

Arjun looked at her shocked: tum...

Arohi: abhi meri help karo ye sab utarne mein..bhut bhaari h..she said indicating at her clothes n jewellary..

Arjun nodded: okay sit here...he made her sit on dressing table stool..He bent on his one knee to come in level to her..Arohi quickly forwarded her foot

Arohi: pehle ye..bhut awaaz kr rhi h..Arjun sighed n removed her payal..next was turn of her bangles..Arohi was making different different voices irritating him as he was removing her jewellary..

Arjun: chup..ek dum chup nhi toh help nhi karunga..

Arohi kept her finger on lips n sat like an obedient girl..

Arjun was about to remove her mangal sutra but she held his hand..

Arohi: Maya ne bola ise nhi utarna..

Arjun dint said anything n removed the remainig jewellary..when he was done he stood up n was gng but she held his hand..

Arohi: ye bhi nhi utr rha..she said fidgeting with her dupatta..

Arjun turned n removed the pins from her dupatta..he unpinned it from her hair..

Arjun: ho gya..

Arohi stood up happily: bhut heavy tha..she threw it in a corner..ab ye bhi utar deti hun..she started removig her choli..

Arjun shouted: no...his eyes grew wide in horror..

Arohi: pr Ajjun bhut heavy h..

Arjun: ek minute..he moved towards her wardrobe n took out a night suit..washroom mein jakr change krlo..

Arohi: pr mujhse ye dori nhi khulegi..tum bhi chalo sath mein..

Arjun coughed embarrassingly...

Arjun: turn..Arohi followed his instructions n stood flaunting her bare back..her choli was backless only having one dori..Arjun closed his eyes n quickly opened hr dori..

Arjun: now go n change inside..

Arohi: okay..she went inside n closed the door..

Arjun opened his eyes n breathed heavily..this is gonna be difficult..

Arohi came out after changing..Arjun had already cleaned the bed for her..she picked her doll n looked at Arjun who was preparing himself to sleep on couch..

Arohi: Ajjun..why u sleeping there? mein tum aur Sweety bed pr pure aa jayenge..

Arjun: tum vhn so jao..m okay here..

Arohi: mujhe akele sone mein dar lagta h..

Arjun: sweety h na tumhare sath..akeli khn ho aur mein bhi yhin hun..

Arohi: nhi Ajjun..tum sath mein so jao mere plz..i promise mein kick nhi karoge..she pinched her neck making him beleive of her promise..

Arjun stood up as he know there is no other choice than following her orders..

He was having hard time sleeping with her..leaving her side Arohi was half sleeping on him..her legs were spread wide on his legs..her head was resting on his shoulder..n moreover her doll was also lying on him.this was most torturous nite of his life..n this was just the beginning...

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