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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Hey ...
This is first time I m reading something written by you ...
And it was very beautiful ...
Loved it ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
very cute story dear...
i wud luv to comment long bt i came here wen i gt a lil brk..
so i am sorry... will cmmnt long on ur ffs!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
shreyu u said u will write another os soon.
m waiting janu
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
OMG hw hv i missed to comment on tis sorry shreyu i thought tat i hv commented on it😕
sorry sorry kaan pakadke sorry😳

It ws such a sweet aur cute love storypadne ki baad apne aap smile aajathiye so cute n i hv already read it 5times n tis is the 6th time am reading it again specially tat pub scene ws just ossom👏👏👏
kaye se inspiration milaye ji apko sach bathna kuch experience toh zarrur kiya hoga😳

friends ki saath birthday celebrate karneka mazayi kuch aur haiwoh b hostel me chupke chupke😳

where no one allowed to go out after 9 pm and here my daring friends saying this at the late night at 12:30 am⭐️
sachme daring friends hai😆

a very hot boy starring at me from the last few minutes and may be enjoying my expression about drinks😳
aagaina humari dashing hero😉
I thought "arjun" the name is equally hot like him😳hot ye toh honahi hai😳

he pulled me little closer and I was not resisting him, we were very close to each other, his hot breath touching my face☺️

my eyes were being heavy and I closed them, waiting to feel his lips on mine and he was about to touch my lips with his, but at the very wrong timing my phone rang😆
uffo wrong timing😆

ter conversation outside the pub ws so cute aur quite romantic😳
especially ter late night convo through phone

Hmmm... actually I m missing something else and I didn't forget this, I purposely left it in my jacket😳purposely nt bad😳

He sat on his knees forwarded his hand towards me and said with lots of love in his eyes- most part of our body has a pair right? Without each one our body is unbalanced, like hands, eyes, ears, legs, lungs, kidney ets' but my heart is alone can I have your heart to pair with my heart? Because without you my whole life is unbalanced'❤️
awww tis ws the best n cute confession i hv ever heared⭐️

When a hand wrapped around her waist she came back from her thoughts, looked at his side, where he was lying with half closed eyes... said in a sleepy voice..good morning jaan☺️
tis ws upper cute n best morning wish👍🏼
ek wish hai keep writing cute stories like tis dear😃lov u

Edited by Deepika06 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Deepika06

OMG hw hv i missed to comment on tis sorry shreyu i thought tat i hv commented on it😕
sorry sorry kaan pakadke sorry😳

It ws such a sweet aur cute love storypadne ki baad apne aap smile aajathiye so cute n i hv already read it 5times n tis is the 6th time am reading it again specially tat pub scene ws just ossom👏👏👏
kaye se inspiration milaye ji apko sach bathna kuch experience toh zarrur kiya hoga😳

friends ki saath birthday celebrate karneka mazayi kuch aur haiwoh b hostel me chupke chupke😳

where no one allowed to go out after 9 pm and here my daring friends saying this at the late night at 12:30 am⭐️
sachme daring friends hai😆

a very hot boy starring at me from the last few minutes and may be enjoying my expression about drinks😳
aagaina humari dashing hero😉
I thought "arjun" the name is equally hot like him😳hot ye toh honahi hai😳

he pulled me little closer and I was not resisting him, we were very close to each other, his hot breath touching my face☺️

my eyes were being heavy and I closed them, waiting to feel his lips on mine and he was about to touch my lips with his, but at the very wrong timing my phone rang😆
uffo wrong timing😆

ter conversation outside the pub ws so cute aur quite romantic😳
especially ter late night convo through phone

Hmmm... actually I m missing something else and I didn't forget this, I purposely left it in my jacket😳purposely nt bad😳

He sat on his knees forwarded his hand towards me and said with lots of love in his eyes- most part of our body has a pair right? Without each one our body is unbalanced, like hands, eyes, ears, legs, lungs, kidney ets' but my heart is alone can I have your heart to pair with my heart? Because without you my whole life is unbalanced'❤️
awww tis ws the best n cute confession i hv ever heared⭐️

When a hand wrapped around her waist she came back from her thoughts, looked at his side, where he was lying with half closed eyes... said in a sleepy voice..good morning jaan☺️
tis ws upper cute n best morning wish👍🏼
ek wish hai keep writing cute stories like tis dear😃lov u
love u too😃

nhi re koi experience nhi hai, hayee kash hota😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
#26


this is the one of the best short fiction i have ever read
from the beginning to end my smile didn't vanished for a second!!
life of a hostel girl and meeting with a stranger guy is greatest i read, but this is the best
like their conversation, but like the most is that you given the heroine point of view of telling story.
well if i ever get bored would love to read this again.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Shreya its super cute story
loved it ❤️
loved their convo
I love this Arjun
loved everything about this story ❤️❤️
ye Arjun ab mera hi hai 😳
I love the way he proposed her
keep writing like this 👍🏼
Edited by --Anjali-- - 12 years ago

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