New OS: MAHI SPL ;) naa kuch mere bus mein! - Page 7

Originally posted by: moonkmh

OMG! M in love wid dis arjun. Di,i love ur writng (stl katti),its so cute,innocent n above all it was beyon a beautiful dream. Haye!m so imagn dis arjun nw.
Mahi,dekh tere liye meri katti wali di ne os likha,ab tu update kar.

Originally posted by: pinky.padda

absolutely brilliant

Originally posted by: AAKMH2

? 1st of all m realy extremely sorry for coming so late here.A death happend in my next door neighbour house so hadnt cm ol last days.


I love u I Love u I Love u sheetal my jaan

its title just stole my heart away & secondly my punji
gosh ye sch men mera punji tha 'dil ka bhola..tbyat ka saada. .vadey ishq da shehzada'
i
pehli mulaqat to bilkul hawa k jhunke jesi thi aur phr hmari aru unhe dhundti hi rhi. Pehle mujhe lga tum aese uske dhundne me hi na khtm krdo. bt dn thnkfuly
So our punji win frm Arohi koi gal nhi wo phr bhi harr gya
so he wantd to be cnductr just bcoz he cud see her dn??? . .ek aesa hero mujhe bhi bnvado :$

his last lines just stole away my heart

& dn to is men Mahi bhi thi? uska descrptn hi nhi harkten bhi bilkul mere jesi thi.:p

men bhi apni 4rnd ka yahi hal krti bhashn de kr :p
Heartly thank u 4 dis specialll treat. I realy gt surprisd whn i saw my name in btw. . .I just...thank u yar 4 dis special,warmly gesture.Accept a tight hug 4rm me. Thank u 4 beng my 4rnd
love u
muaah

Hey Cherry

Sorry Dear don't know your name but you are a fantastic writer.

I so loved this OS dear ………Very very very real & Super cute.

Its actually so strange na Sometimes we fail to notice someone who is there in front of us & same happened with Arohi. She failed to notice Arjun in collage life but the conductor cought her attention & she felt as if something is their in his personality & his gaze didn't left her till she got down from the bus, the best part was their slient way of communication when he gave her a ticket for appropriate stop.

Arohi didn't forget him & kept on thinking abt him, she started bording in a same bus just to have a glimpse of him…….haaye so cute :) but to her disappointment she didn't get to see him. Finally shesaw him in collage I just loved mahi here her reaction was superb When Arohi told her abt conductor :)

She talked to Arjun finally & I just loved their communication. She asked him about his wish of becaming bus conducter & the best answer was you noticed me that day only…….THIS was Sooo Cute dear

Loved the part

Thank you dear

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: -pranjal-

Hey Cherry

Sorry Dear don't know your name but you are a fantastic writer.

I so loved this OS dear '''Very very very real & Super cute.

Its actually so strange na Sometimes we fail to notice someone who is there in front of us & same happened with Arohi. She failed to notice Arjun in collage life but the conductor cought her attention & she felt as if something is their in his personality & his gaze didn't left her till she got down from the bus, the best part was their slient way of communication when he gave her a ticket for appropriate stop.

Arohi didn't forget him & kept on thinking abt him, she started bording in a same bus just to have a glimpse of him''.haaye so cute :) but to her disappointment she didn't get to see him. Finally shesaw him in collage I just loved mahi here her reaction was superb When Arohi told her abt conductor :)

She talked to Arjun finally & I just loved their communication. She asked him about his wish of becaming bus conducter & the best answer was you noticed me that day only''.THIS was Sooo Cute dear

Loved the part

Thank you dear

Pranjal.

Originally posted by: mysticlover

WONDERFUL!!

such a sweet story...

silent love of arjun for arohi...

arjun has waited very long for her and finally he got what he deserved...

and you are right... we never notice people who are around us silently knowing and loving us... we need such situations to know them and acknowledge them...

Originally posted by: Deepika06

Awww...ithna sheriff arjun di first I thought arohi will b falling for him but our smart arjun is noticing her from very long time how sweet... 👏 and the last arjuhi part was very cute it was such an unconditional love... 😳 and now can v expect a sequel of tis os... 😳 pls pls... 😊