FF:KMH2-Mohabbat restart ;) Pt27 Pg140 (22/12)

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lazyblues

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

Chap 23...
Woh...cottage...! N plan n wow...! Awesome...! Awesome
U r brilliant. U have no idea how brilliant...!
Nps- I skipped the mature part...! Me sarif BachI hun heheh.
Ek saal baad ill read that.
They are ib love.
And cause of them um in love im in love...!

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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

Originally posted by: mansi_47
Chap 23...
Woh...cottage...! N plan n wow...! Awesome...! Awesome
U r brilliant. U have no idea how brilliant...!
Nps- I skipped the mature part...! Me sarif BachI hun heheh.
Ek saal baad ill read that.
They are ib love.
And cause of them um in love im in love...!

badi sharif bachhi hai tu 😲 😆

im glad u liked it! thanks for the update wise comments 🤗

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arjuhi_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

ok..my first comment on ur ff...first of all i would like to say..wonderful..mindblowing..beautiful story...what a great writer u are ..seriously i feel like meri writing tu in front of ur writing is nothing...i seriously salute ur effort..for writing this story..and giving us a prolonged season 2 of kmh...mohabbat restart...definitely it has restarted...

i have started reading it today...this awesome story has won my heart and i m dying to read further parts but neend bhi arahi hai...

i have read till part 18 and still left with the remaining chapters..oh god how curious i am to know what actually is stored in them...kal subha jaldi se ajaye..the first thing i will do tomorrow ..read the rest of the chapters...

all the 18 chapters were simply mindblowing..pata nahi tum ne pehle q nahi likhi ye story..agar likhi hoti tu shaed humein ye sab dekhne ko bhi mil jata...u r a wonderful writer and has justified with each and everyone's character...u deserve a standing awation for this one..and i really mean it..👏...

few of the dialogues..situations and things that really made me to comment separetely on them...

part 17

But looks like the only two people who did not want them to be together were Arjun and Arohi themselves.

same is the case with our karanika i guess...😕

Arjun looked up expecting to see Arohi again. He frowned when he could not find her. He had very carefully made sure that he was in her line of vision wherever she went. Not finding her around made him restless..

aww that was so sweet and cute...i loved this..😳

Now it was Arjuns turn to frown. Who the hell is this Karan Malhotra??!! If he was Arohis childhood friend then how come she never mentioned about him to her. Forgetting his act of being on the phone, Arjun held the phone down and moved one step nearer.

haaha...i love jealous arjun..😉

"Ok. Mein tere IQ ke level pe aake samjhaati hoon. Tuney woh cartoon dekha hai, tom and jerry?"

Romits face lit up. "Of course! Woh to mera favourite cartoon hai… I just love jerry. Kitna chota hai lekin kitna smart. Aur woh jo ek episode hai jissme…"

i cant stop laughing at this point..romit ka level abhi bhi tom and jerry pe hai...🤣

part 18..

The army whose soldiers aged from years 6 to 60!!! Anyone could get distracted..

hats off to ur writing..ur sense of humor..😃

Clutching his gun in both the hands, he closed his eyes. Suddenly opening his eyes, he pushed the curtain away with his gun held hands, pointing the gun straight ahead and froze.

i think it would be arohi...no i am 100percent sure...i hope arohi hi ho...fingers crossed...kia karun? age read kar lun ye suspense khatam karne k liye?...kia ye suspense khul gaya?...oh no abhi 6 chapters baki hain...kisi na kisi mein tu ye suspense khula hoga...🥱

He had just lifted his head up to watch Natasha walk out through the door of the storehouse followed by a flustered Mikhail.

natasha???i thought it to be gauri...

mjhe apni ff ki natasha se bhi nafrat hai aur ab tu is natasha se bhi ho rahi hai...😡

will read rest of the chapters and will comment on them...and plz i have a request..plz pm me too the next update of this ff...plzz

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varshini karthik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

hahah! I read it all over again di! I cannot wait for you to give us the next update! :D :D :D

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florine_20

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

wow aaj monday hai.
alternate day update toh aaj update milega na??

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Vivacious Bird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Originally posted by: cherry227

it was my first SR scene😳thanks for liking it!

ohh really?? was ur first??
lag toh nahi raha tha 😆

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cherry227

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

Originally posted by: sehar123
ok..my first comment on ur ff...first of all i would like to say..wonderful..mindblowing..beautiful story...what a great writer u are ..seriously i feel like meri writing tu in front of ur writing is nothing...i seriously salute ur effort..for writing this story..and giving us a prolonged season 2 of kmh...mohabbat restart...definitely it has restarted...

i have started reading it today...this awesome story has won my heart and i m dying to read further parts but neend bhi arahi hai...

i have read till part 18 and still left with the remaining chapters..oh god how curious i am to know what actually is stored in them...kal subha jaldi se ajaye..the first thing i will do tomorrow ..read the rest of the chapters...

all the 18 chapters were simply mindblowing..pata nahi tum ne pehle q nahi likhi ye story..agar likhi hoti tu shaed humein ye sab dekhne ko bhi mil jata...u r a wonderful writer and has justified with each and everyone's character...u deserve a standing awation for this one..and i really mean it..👏...

few of the dialogues..situations and things that really made me to comment separetely on them...

part 17
But looks like the only two people who did not want them to be together were Arjun and Arohi themselves.

same is the case with our karanika i guess...😕

Arjun looked up expecting to see Arohi again. He frowned when he could not find her. He had very carefully made sure that he was in her line of vision wherever she went. Not finding her around made him restless..

aww that was so sweet and cute...i loved this..😳

Now it was Arjuns turn to frown. Who the hell is this Karan Malhotra??!! If he was Arohis childhood friend then how come she never mentioned about him to her. Forgetting his act of being on the phone, Arjun held the phone down and moved one step nearer.

haaha...i love jealous arjun..😉

"Ok. Mein tere IQ ke level pe aake samjhaati hoon. Tuney woh cartoon dekha hai, tom and jerry?"
Romits face lit up. "Of course! Woh to mera favourite cartoon hai' I just love jerry. Kitna chota hai lekin kitna smart. Aur woh jo ek episode hai jissme'"

i cant stop laughing at this point..romit ka level abhi bhi tom and jerry pe hai...🤣

part 18..
The army whose soldiers aged from years 6 to 60!!! Anyone could get distracted..

hats off to ur writing..ur sense of humor..😃

Clutching his gun in both the hands, he closed his eyes. Suddenly opening his eyes, he pushed the curtain away with his gun held hands, pointing the gun straight ahead and froze.

i think it would be arohi...no i am 100percent sure...i hope arohi hi ho...fingers crossed...kia karun? age read kar lun ye suspense khatam karne k liye?...kia ye suspense khul gaya?...oh no abhi 6 chapters baki hain...kisi na kisi mein tu ye suspense khula hoga...🥱

He had just lifted his head up to watch Natasha walk out through the door of the storehouse followed by a flustered Mikhail.

natasha???i thought it to be gauri...

mjhe apni ff ki natasha se bhi nafrat hai aur ab tu is natasha se bhi ho rahi hai...😡

will read rest of the chapters and will comment on them...and plz i have a request..plz pm me too the next update of this ff...plzz