Aaj Jaane Ki Zidh Na Karo-- part 8|page 52

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cooljaya11

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shona,i jst love d banner. Thanx a ton. Love u n missng u.
@jayu di,thanx for postng it here.

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zoya_naziya

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Ek sawaal ka jawab dekar dus aur sawal paida ho jaate hai yaar...

Questions,ques or ques!!!!

Y is poor Arjun torturing himself like this? N did Arohi make him believe ki she is married ? N Salil is really a true frnd but y can't he say the truth?

Super update... Loved ittt🤗

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sh.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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firstly i am a little nervous, cause i never read any ff of u di.. and u dont know my comment skills 🤣.. ok enjoy my comment :)

u know di, alone the fact that this ff is on hindi, i love it.. cause i learned hindi 3 years and now i can understand it.. and i really enjoy reading hindi :) .. and i read the ff always loud.. :) .. thanks for writing it in hindi di :)

the first chapter was for me oustanding :) actually i totally love the entry that u wrote.. :) .. typical sweet story start :) love it :)

"jaan jaati hai jab uthke jaate ho tum" when i read this.. i thougt woow.. alone the sentence is awsoome.. cant describe it love it :) .. and overall i loved the whole convo between arohi and raj...

and where raj said u look like my mom, there i thougth suuperbly described.. but i dont understand the fact why raj said that his moms name prateeksha is?!.. but i like the name :)

second chapter.. was for better than the first.. cause there was arjun :) where raj said ki mom khab agaegi.. then i felt so bad for him.. i could never imagine that my parents can die.. and for a small child would be that so hard.. really i can really imagine that.. :)

and i swear i loved it how arjun thought about, if really arohi came back.. by god that was the best part that u wrote in this ff :) ..

this jay arohi relationsship is not good.. dont like it .. and i dont like this jay :|... and again i looove this salil :) .. and the whole convo is awsoome :) ..

i loved both chapters :) <3.. now i want a big reply :))..

and special thanks to veds that she sent me that pm :) <3.. love u

-shilpa

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

@zoya,thanx for cmnt dr:) arohi is jst engazd n arjun knew abt it. He jst felt dat she is moving on in lyf.

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Madhusmita das

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Shilpa,i super love ur cmmnt...n here u r lil wrng dat i dnt knw abt ur commenting skill becz i do read ur comment on parm's ff. N i must say u always read a chaptr vry crfully.

M happy dat u learnd hindi,actualy hindi is nt my mothr language so i always try to make it more fluent while writng.

M glad u lyk d entry,yeah typical start..what to do m vry much of typical typ.
About 1 chaptr,yup me too love raj...n prateeksha's mystry wl b out soon. U knw i missd arjun in 1st chap so much dats why it was more of arjun in 2nd.
Why u hate jay? He is nyc,he himself postponding their marriage for arohi...n as always saleel is swthrt forever. He cn slap arjun singhania too.
Sissy,m jst happy dat u lykd it n thanx to veds for pm ing... N love u too:)