Arjuhi OS#7: ~Hate this Part~Completed

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Loved it loved it...
Awww great end.. It tuk my breath away during d dream sequence n last part...
Anyways thanks fr gvng a good climax aww

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-Nili-

@-Nili-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

loved this OS !! the ending was soo beautiful 😍 awsome work ana 👏

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komal samdariya

@dazedworld

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#33

OMG...

i had tears in my eyes at the end...

awwweee i SO LOVE THESE TWO PPL!!

gosh i really hated the part i actually felt their pains...

but i really loved the part when they finally confessed...

truly an awesome OS

you an amazing writer...

do write more and thanks for the pm!!

love

komal

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cherry227

@cherry227

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#34

beautiful story ana... a different gangster arjun!

arohis dedication towards arjun was heart warming... im glad she made it and made arjun realise that her life is with him 😍

loved it!

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@_Chits_

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#35

it's awsome...!!!

well at first i was really angry coz till the 2nd last para i thought it has a sad ending but...

when i read the last 7 lines...i was like...OMG OMG OMG...!!! i was so happy...

n i loved those lines in red...

dey were amazing...relating to da situation...

nice song btw...😊

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#36

wow that was fabulous.
trully adorable. the concept was unique. you made it come out best.
loved the part when they confessed.

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Arjuhi_kk

@Arjuhi_kk

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#37

i cant tell u how much i loved this❤️

for me this is by far ur best WORK!!!

thnx 4 the pm

keep writing more on arjuhi😃

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zooombie

@zooombie

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Ana superb OS...

it is awesome...this Arjun Arohi never expressed but they know each others feelings...they r so much in love...

Arjun' care for her...his fear...everything was fair...at the same time he understood her pain which just made him restless adding even more pain...

the dilemma that he went through...how to let go his life but again his happiness wud be only by seeing her alive...

Arohi's unknown fear...nightmare...proof heart knows all...she didn't fear to die for him...true love

their cravings for each other...their moment everything loved to the core...

it's a lovely OS...muaah

Edited by Angel.KMH.AK - 13 years ago

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#39

I TOTALLY LOVED IT Ana!!! =D =D

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Vedika

@veds_6791

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#40

Wow!!! This was amazing... I really dont have words to describe it...
The love they had for eachother was so pure... both of them wanted to protect the other one... Arohi is a real superwoman to take the bullet on her...

Amazingly Written 👏👏👏

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