PYAR KE DO PAL PART 3 NEW NOTE PG 24

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Amna

@AmnaIsh

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I think you should rename your FF to 'Durd Ka Har Pal' ... 😡 you made me cry anu..😭😭😭 you don't get a long comment from me now 😡😭

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aparna velayudhan

@aparna4karanika

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Amna di...Lolll...
DARD KA HAR PAL... Rofling... Waaooo grt idea...
Anu di i guess u shd consider dat nme now... Bt sincerely u made all f us cry wth ds updt..
Dat shws ur effort n pain whie writng ds..
Anyways one tnng fr sure..
Arjjn cant die leavng aru n aayan...
He wiil be be backk..bcz he s arjun singhnia

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

IAM LATE - reserving now

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rick

@ricsr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

so...after reading d latest updt... i think u've decided nt 2 listen 2 any1😡 den u shud follow amna's advice n change d name of ur ff...DKHP...

u sms lyk enjoying our deprssion n sadness after reading such horrible n difficult situations in which arjuhi r now 😡😭

whoa... tumhe itna sab keh k ab kuch accha lag raha hai...SORRY😆

bt u dont no wat u r doing 2 us anu...its really a torture seeing arjun lyk dis😭

but i must say u r an amazing writer n i already knew dis since i frst startd reading PKDP

U descrb each n every feeling emotion so easily n so beautfully dat its diffclt 2 ignore it...

hats off 2 u 4 dat..

chalo ab to tareef b kar di... ab jaldi se sab kuch acha-acha kar do

just clear al d clouds of sorrow 4rm arjuhi lyf..

waitng 4 d nxt updt...hope arjun'll b alrite...

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: AmnaIsh
I think you should rename your FF to 'Durd Ka Har Pal' ... 😡 you made me cry anu..😭😭😭 you don't get a long comment from me now 😡😭

Has anybody experienced "pyar" without "dard"...they might be oppsite words but as we all know opposites attracts so then they have such a strong pull towards each other they it cant' be ignored...

I had to write this update to get it out of my system...it is Pyar ke do pal but the intensity of those few moments gives the courage and the strength to face "dard ke har pal"...

I cant belive you are not going to write a long comment..soch lo soch lo meri bhi bari ayegi...😈

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: ricsr
so...after reading d latest updt... i think u've decided nt 2 listen 2 any1😡 den u shud follow amna's advice n change d name of ur ff...DKHP...
u sms lyk enjoying our deprssion n sadness after reading such horrible n difficult situations in which arjuhi r now 😡😭

whoa... tumhe itna sab keh k ab kuch accha lag raha hai...SORRY😆

bt u dont no wat u r doing 2 us anu...its really a torture seeing arjun lyk dis😭

but i must say u r an amazing writer n i already knew dis since i frst startd reading PKDP

U descrb each n every feeling emotion so easily n so beautfully dat its diffclt 2 ignore it...

hats off 2 u 4 dat..

chalo ab to tareef b kar di... ab jaldi se sab kuch acha-acha kar do

just clear al d clouds of sorrow 4rm arjuhi lyf..

waitng 4 d nxt updt...hope arjun'll b alrite...

well well well..what shall i say..see dard ke har pal brings out more response...lol

thanks aa lot for the tareef..I had to write this one for the story to move forward..I am sure you will like the next update...

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: aparna4karanika

Amna di...Lolll...
DARD KA HAR PAL... Rofling... Waaooo grt idea...
Anu di i guess u shd consider dat nme now... Bt sincerely u made all f us cry wth ds updt..
Dat shws ur effort n pain whie writng ds..
Anyways one tnng fr sure..
Arjjn cant die leavng aru n aayan...
He wiil be be backk..bcz he s arjun singhnia

yeh huyi na bat...mere FF ka nam hi badal gaya..abb to mein aram se tum logo ko rula sakti hu..koyi kuchh bol bhi nehi payega...😈

I have complete faith in your faith Apu...

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Anupa Lahiri Ellard

@Anupa28

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: piamist

Are you kidding me...was thinking of leaving it like that 😲 its like u hitting on our heart. we to have our own ending accordingly!!...do u want us to continue the story?? but we are very loyal to our writer..what to do 😕 we may have many plots running in our head but we wud be expecting you ending itself..

i have doubts.. are u watching lots of Korean movies the these days??

From ur guruji u only learn romance not to cliff hang us, one is enough for that...plz show mercy on us..you know what we want in next update dont say no clue..i need to use this word "god dammit"😛

Korean movies????...havent seen any but will surely do to make it "dard ka har pal"...

My guruji has already renamed it as "dard ka har pal" abb to mujhe koi nehi rok sakta...dard hi dard hain...😈

give me some ideas I am complete stuck ..i really havent got any clue.😉.I suggested to Amna let me make their atma go and visit your FF...she slammed the comp on me ...so let me see where I can find then a place

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midhu

@piamist

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: Anupa28

Korean movies????...havent seen any but will surely do to make it "dard ka har pal"...

My guruji has already renamed it as "dard ka har pal" abb to mujhe koi nehi rok sakta...dard hi dard hain...😈 i didn't see this

give me some ideas I am complete stuck ..i really havent got any clue.😉.I suggested to Amna let me make their atma go and visit your FF...she slammed the comp on me ...so let me see where I can find then a place

Most of the Korean movies will leave the ending to our imagination...like you are doing.. how good the movie may be but the ending sure to be tears or in dilemma that u shud make happy ending in ur mind..and in India its followed by tamil movies, they leave it to us, Ghajini i best example which i can remember now...

Add to your story..u know we only want happy wala arjuni family...now i cant remember that Hindi movie name but in that hero goes to that river talks to Amithabhji and comes back..similarly here our arjun went alone before, talked to his mom, as his last wish of seeing arohi did fulfill, he came back, we can understand, but as he saw her, he left again not thinking abt the next consequences, it happens, but arohi accompanied him reminding him that she will not be alive without him, they will have a convo there about their family, as they cant leave there child like that they will come back simple :) happy wala..as u want to know what we want (this is the only thing i been struck up from the time i read ur FF) to pacifism my sobs i am telling myself..

Edited by piamist - 13 years ago