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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

arjun is adamant on finding the truth!

hope there is nothing serious!

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#142

so he is going to go to his mom to know about karan's problem - good move - pls continue sooonn prem

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: idunno
sorry to say story is not moving forward and very small updates-this ff was my first choice initially but now it is not as it is long time story is rotating round and round not moving further-

i feel i should concentrate only on arjun and his family but since people feel arohi is left out i have to come up with scenes that are not really relevant for story to go forward like the past 5-6 episodes where they went for dinner. In future will try and avoid it. Thanks for update.

Regarding smaller updates i update regularly but in smaller updates since i have other works to do. I cannot update 60-80 lines like others once in a week. I just update as and when scene comes to my mind

Edited by myviewprem - 13 years ago

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Scene289 Karan-PRS convo

Karan's phone rings: Papa, hello

PRS: You are alone Karan

Karan: Yes I am in my cabin alone, no one's here and no one will come for next 2 hours tell papa. I was waiting for your call only.

PRS tells him something and they keep speaking. Karan gets very upset hearing everything.

Karan choking: You are sure should we check with others?

PRS: I checked with 3 of them baby, all say the same

Karan and PRS go silent.

PRS after sometime: Karan baby you are fine no

Karan: Yes papa, you do not worry. I am fine

PRS changes topic: How is dad?

Karan: Dadaji is fine

PRS: And my angel

Karan: She has gone to play ground with Raj and Arjun.

PRS smiles: She must be very happy

Karan: Yes, I have sent five guards to watch out for her in play ground. And I am watching her from my window too, you do not worry.

PRS: Yes, always keep an eye on her. You know right there is an intelligence report

Karan: I know papa, you do not worry. Till I am alive no one can dare touch our chutki

PRS: I know beta, my angel's second father will not allow even a scratch to come on his baby till he is alive I know.

Karan smiles. Karan walks towards the window to check on Gunjan who is now climbing a ladder to slide down.

PRS: baby I never tell but thanks beta, thanks a lot

Karan: For what papa?

PRS: For taking care of your dadaji, mom and angel so nicely in my absence. For taking care of our household so nicely from childhood single handedly and helping me so much in office and (pauses) everywhere.

Karan: Papa please

PRS: No Karan let me speak

Karan: OK, but do not tell thanks to me. Whatever I did is for our family, my family right

PRS in tears: No son will ever do what you have done for your family beta no son (chokes) and starts crying

Karan: Papa wipe your tears, wipe your tears now only and smile. My papa should only smile not cry

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Arjuhisis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#145

the suspense is killing me -

very nice update prem

pls continue

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Archana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#146

so wat's the prblm?

itz nt gunjan's security right?

is it about her health? or about PRS's health?

update soon prem!

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myviewprem

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Posted: 13 years ago

#147

Scene290 PRS-Karan convo contd

PRS wipes his tears: In this whole world I have cried only in front of you baby only in front of you. Only you understand me beta all others only see my smile my privileges my richness (pauses)

Karan choking: I know papa

PRS: Thanks to you baby I have achieved so much. Thanks for being the greatest son and child any parent can ever get thanks

Karan: No papa please, I have not done anything what have I done only taken care of family which everyone in this world does. And isn't it duty of a son to help his father, all sons help their father in business and at work. I have not done anything different. Indeed you are the greatest papa any child can get and chutki and I are privileged to have you as our papa.

PRS: Yeah do not lie I have hardly been there for you both. I now think all this richness, business empire was at a very big cost very big cost of not being there for you and angel in your growing up years. I should have taken angel to parks and here her friends like Arjun are taking her out for parks I feel guilty. But I have no option you understand no beta.

Karan: I understand papa. Chutki and I understand truly. We both love you very much papa. Always keep smiling you know right your Karan can see anything in this world but not tears in his papa's eyes

PRS: No beta, I am very sorry. Karan's papa can never have tears never

Karan: Right, like my chutki says "my papa is strongest"

Karan and PRS laugh.

PRS laughing: My chutki? She is my angel first?

Karan smiles: OK neither your angel nor my chutki our dadimaaa

PRS: That's better

Karan and PRS laugh at their small kiddish fight on Gunjan

PRS: Dadimaa is right description for my angel. My angel acts and talks now only like a dadimaa so mature, truly she reminds me of my mother my small baby.

Karan sees Gunjan coming back from the park.

Karan: I will call you later papa Bye, I have to go and get chutki now

PRS: Love you very much baby. Bye, take care of yourself and angel, papa and your mom OK. I am reaching tomorrow.

Karan: Bye papa, love you too and always smile

PRS smiles thinking: When any father has a son/child like you Karan he can never cry never

Karan goes to get Gunjan from Arjun's office.