FF Going Forward-KMH Part III-Page28 - Page 16

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Posted: 13 years ago
Please update asap as want to know what is worrying Karan.
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Posted: 13 years ago
luvd da update 👏plzz cont soon x
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Scene292 Gunjan the Queen

Door bangs and food and juice has come.

Arjun thinks: Saved thank you God

Karan thinking: So that's why after a long time Arjun took Gunjan to play ground to check why I was upset.

Arjun gives sandwich and juice to Gunjan and Raj and to Karan.

Karan: No thanks, I am not hungry

Arjun: Have a bit

Karan: My stomach is full thanks

Gunjan screaming: Baaa

Karan runs to her: What chutki?

Gunjan: My shoe are dirty remove them no

Karan sits down and removes her shoes and socks and wipes her feet clean of dust.

Gunjan not even ready to eat from her hands

Gunjan orders: Feed me no Baaa

Arjun shocked. Gunjan acts like a Queen only ordering elder brother around.

Karan: One minute chutki

Karan goes to wash his hands.

Karan takes sandwich and feeds her sandwich.

Gunjan spits out munched sandwich. Karan holds his hand so that she spits out the food in his cupped hand rather than plate.

Karan: What happened chutki?
Gunjan complaining: I do not want onion. This has onion

Arjun: Should I order another sandwich without onion baby?

Karan: No Arjun, not required

Karan goes and washes his hand and comes back.

Karan sits and removes all onion from sandwich

Karan: Chutki see now there is no onion OK no

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Posted: 13 years ago
so will karan tell arjun the secret?

i am eager to know!

update soon prem!
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Scene293 Arjun-Karan convo

Gunjan: OK

Raj stares at Karan feeding Gunjan: Papppa

Karan and Gunjan look at Raj

Arjun: What Raj?

Raj: Feed me

Arjun: Shut up and have there quietly. This boyyy(looks at Karan)

Raj throws sandwich in plate

Karan: Its OK Arjun. I will feed Raj

Karan feeds Gunjan and Raj one by one.

Arjun looking at Karan feeding Gunjan and Raj. Karan does not have one air of an Yuvraj and that he is son of one of richest person in the world very down to earth. Indeed Gunjan acts more headstrong and like a queen at this small age than his brother who is official Yuvraj. His baby sister makes her brother dance to her tunes.

Arjun: You are so patient with kids how Karan?

Karan smiles: You have a son and asking me from where I get patience?

Arjun laughs: You are talking as if you have kids

Karan looks at Arjun and smiles shaking his head. Arjun does not know and will never understand the relation he shares with Gunjan. For the whole world Gunjan is his sister but no father in this world would have stayed awake so many nights caring for their daughter like Karan has done for his baby sister. Patience? when he is ready to give his life for his baby sister's one smile meeting her innocent demands is not a big matter for Karan. Indeed it gives him immense happiness to take care of her and he feels pride when she orders him around making him do what outside world considers as menial tasks. The world think's why an Yuvraj has to obey/rather take tantrums of a small kid although the kid is his own sister. But Karan whom the entire world bends in front of as he is a Yuvarj and heir of Sisodia empire loves it when his sister throws tantrums and orders him around.

Karan wonders why Arjun asking him about taking care of kids does he not have a son Raj? He must be knowing how patient you have to be with small children. Karan does not know Raj is not Arjun's own son hence Arjun not used to caring for children from birth and is a father only for 6-7 months. Karan has changed nappies for Gunjan, fed her bottle milk, sang lori's, carried her around in his arms, taken her around on his shoulders to parks, stayed awake full nights when she was a baby taking care of her in house and hospital, dressed her up for school on first day. He has even left her in school waiting 5 hours outside her school till she came out of class in the first week of her going to pre nursery to take her back to house and thought her A,B, C and 1,2, 3. For Karan she is less of a baby sister and more of his daughter.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update prem - pls continue
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Scene294 Karan calls Arjun bhaiya first time

Karan is in thoughts remembering her as a baby when Gunjan starts an argument with Arjun.

Gunjan serious: who is the kid here?

Arjun shocked: You who else?

Gunjan shocked: Me and kid?

Arjun: Ohhh ohhh then what are you grand old lady?

Gunjan: Yes, my father says I am his mother reincarnated

Karan smiles: Chutki keep quiet and eat

Arjun laughs: Papa is right I mean your papa is right you are a dadimaaa only baby

Karan looks at Arjun and smiles. His sister speaks kiddish in front of outsiders sometimes.

Gunjan nicely makes Karan feed her and even wipe her face and even give her water to drink on sofa only without moving an inch. And poor Karan becomes a ghulam to his sister without any complaints unlike Arjun who refuses to take Raj's tantrums.
Arjun admiring his brother's patience with his sister who is acting like a Maharani only ordering poor Karan around.

Karan giving her water to drink: Are you OK or you want anything chutki?

Gunjan: Enough Baaa

Karan keeps the glass of water back and goes to put her shoes and socks back.

Gunjan: I do not want that shoe and socks

Karan: For little while chutki till you go to car, then I will remove OK

Gunjan: OK

Karan: Thanks Arjun for taking Gunjan out(thinking-even though your intentions were not correct) Good night, good night Raj

Arjun: You are welcome, Good night

Karan: Come chutki

Gunjan: Nooo, I cannot walk I am tired and lifts both her hands

Arjun smiles. Karan lifts her up and starts walking.

Gunjan: Good night Raj, Good night bhaiya

Arjun: Good night baby

Karan scolding: Chutki did you tell thank you Arjun bhaiya?

Arjun's eyes fill up with water hearing bhaiya from Karan. He turns back to hide the tears flowing from his eyes to anyone.

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Posted: 13 years ago
story is not moving forward it is rotating around gunjan and karan round and roud disapointed
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow till now arjun didn't come to know the secret!

anyways felt a small pain when arjun's eyes welled up on hearing bhaiyya from karan!

update soon prem!
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Scene295 Karan feels unwell

Gunjan: Forgot, Thank you Arjun bhaiya

Arjun wipes his tears and turns back choking: Its OK baby and looks at Karan lovingly. First time his brother called him bhaiya he will treasure this moment for ever in his heart.

Karan smiles: Bye Arjun

Arjun: Bye Bye Karan. Take care

Karan smiles and turns back and walks 3 steps. A blackness engulfs his eyes as he tries to move forward. He is without food for 63 hours now and his feet are not steady he stumbles. Arjun runs forward and holds his palms. Karan's body is hot indeed burning.

Gunjan jumps down: What happened Baaa?

Raj comes running: Uncle what happened?

Karan: Nothing, stumbled on carpet

Karan holds the table nearby for support: I am fine

Arjun: Your body is bu (burning he wants to tell buttt)

Karan looks at Arjun literally pleading with Arjun not to tell anything that scares his sister.

Karan: No nooo I am fine very fine. We are getting late. We will leave now.

Karan gets up to leave but somehow feels strengthless.

Karan: Can I have water to drink please?

Arjun runs to get him water: Here drink slowly

Karan drinks two glasses of water: Thanks, just a bit thirsty

Gunjan scared: Baaa what happened Baaa?

Karan: Nothing chutki nothing I am fine

Gunjan tensed: Tell honestly Baaa

Karan: Nothing, I am OK

Gunjan: Really, shall I call mommy?

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